I asked Deedee48 to review this fic also along with Please Say No. And this is her review:

Without You

by alize_sakura

Story title: 9/10

Comment: It actually took me awhile to relate the title to the story. I got it now (I hope so).

Description/Foreword: 19/20

Comment: Readers know what they will expect from the story.

Grammar/spelling: 7/10

Comment: There are quite a few grammar and spelling mistakes that I've found along the way as I read. One example from chapter 1: "HyunSeung quickly walked in and handed me the flower buoquoet." It should be: "HyunSeung quickly walked in and handed me the flower bouquet."

Plot: 17/20

Comment: Like what I've told you once before, this is too much like a drama to me where the girl has some antagonists who hates her and is liked by two guys. She seems to be too perfect for me, I don't know why.

Entertainment: 17/20

Comment: See comments above.

Writing Style: 18/20

Comment: Even though it's not like Say No, I liked the fact that you put whose POV it was in each of the chapters.

Total score: 87/100

And what do you think about the review?

For me, I think I deserved to have worse score than this. But let's just see since there are still few other reviews that I'm still waiting for.