Black Hole Sun (On Hiatus)

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It's the year 2242, and mankind couldn't be evolving faster. Teleportation, Mind Reading, controlling the elements, becoming faster then the speed of light, unbeatable strength-all discoveries made by scientists after a collection of strange rocks was brought back from a different solar system during a space expedition. The scientists had mixed and matched various mixtures, all with pieces of those strange rocks added-the end result was the creation of the Powers. Simply inhaling or drinking a powder or drink containing said rock particles, people could gain those abilities for several hours at a time. The morals and goals of humans had reached an all time high and everyone was in awe of what humans could do.

Years later, the year 2253, and the world was enveloped in chaos. The Powers, all those wonderful and strange Powers, had become something taboo and forbidden. Countries had begun to turn on each other using the Powers, trying to gain more territory and strength for themselves. Cities burned, society crumbled, and the majority of human kind lived in fear. It seemed as if the world was truly going to Hell.

Time passes, and the year is now 2264. The war seemed to worsen in areas all over the world over time, while in others it faded away. But just when the supply of rocks and consumable Powers was beginning to be cut off, a new species arose from the crumbling foundations of Earth, a species that was greatly feared by everyone.

They were mutations, specifically S4S16 Mutations-born from human parents that had consumed too much of the alien rock over their life times, there was little to know about the S4S16's except that their population was now so incredibly low from being exterminated and from being captured by world govenments and armies. It was a rare sight to even see one, not that anyone wanted to. It was also know that these Mutations had given themselves a variety of names.

But the most well known and recognised one: 'Infinite'.

 

Foreword

I've decided to make a rewrite of Black Hole Sun. I was planning on abandoning this story, but because you guys still seemed to enjoy it so much, I'll finish it while I create the rewrite. 

Here's the link to the new story: 

Eve of Destruction

I hope you all continue to enjoy Black Hole Sun!

-WhosThere13

A/N (This is the exact note that was placed as the 34th 'chapter' )
 

Dear Black Hole Sun Readers,

I sincerely apologize, but this story with be going on hiatus until further notice. I’ve been thinking about it sometime (and I know I have done a lot of unofficial hiatus’, which I also apologize for), and I realized I couldn’t continue with the story at the moment. It’s too chaotic and messy, which kept irritating me whenever I would go back to it. The plot is irregular, it’s very boring at times (I felt bored typing it, I don’t know about you guys), there’s too many people (I thought it would be fun to throw more and more people in, like Beast, UKiss, Super Junior, TVXQ, blahblahblah, but it just got hectic and bogged down with its characters. Too many names makes too many focal points.), and there are plot holes and inaccuracies galore (I meant to make it futuristic, but I got so excited with the plot and everything that kept picturing and writing everything as if it was in the present day. Eventually I never really got around to fully taking advantage of making it set in 2264 because of my stubbornness to not go back and fix it.).

I apologize for all the breaks between the chapters. The most recent one was due to a very serious personal and hurtful issue that resulted in these stories being the furthest thing from my mind. As I learned to deal with the problems, I found I had drifted away from this story too much to full understand what I was doing. I also found I didn’t have the passion that I had for it before because of all the problems I found in it as a reader (as I had to read it to remember what I was doing).

Black Hole Sun is only about 5 chapters away from ending; an incredible thing. It’s come so far, and I’m so happy all of you joined me for this ride. I hope one day, when my life is less disastrous and I become more interested in this again, I will finish this for you all.

Thank you so much for joining me on this journey. I will resume writing its remake, ‘Eve of Destruction’, and would be incredibly honored if any of you decided to join me as I develop it more. It has similar ideas and themes as Black Hole Sun, however I hope to fine tune it quite a bit more and change the plot so it’s not so scattered and vague. The OC characters, (Sanghee, Soojung, Jinri, Ji Ae, Mei, Fran, and Tae Joong) will be introduced much earlier (but still in a memorable way) so that they interact with the other much more. All I ask is that if you decide to join me over there, don’t spoil Sanghee’s secret to any of EoD’s readers just yet; I kept that plot twist (and added a bunch more!) and I hope they like it as much as you all did.

Once again, thank you for your patience and understanding. I hope to encounter you all again in the future!

Love,

WhosThere13

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wynthe #1
Chapter 33: Short it may have been but it definitely was still entertaining. :D Ooo, I'm so curious to see where Sanghee's Power has developed in the end there, because I don't recall anything about it at all! XD So awesome.

On that note, I love how you identify Hoya's 'Hero Complex' because it is so true. Even when temporarily deaf (at the moment I'm guessing it's just temporary because of the explosions) he still finds time to run off and help with the battle, though you'd think he'd follow them to protect them just to make sure if they were ambushed.

2NE1 is quite intimidating and creepy in this chapter. Don't worry, I could tell who was who. And I wonder where Hyunseung went. I don't trust him. He's tagged again or something isn't he? And I liked Sungjong's stubborness on helping out in the battle. Small addition, but good for the character. :) And I've recently developed a slightly bigger liking for TVXQ, so am interested in seeing them more too. *gasp * And JYJ? O.O Scawy.

Looking forward to the next chapter. :D
CrystalRainbow #2
Chapter 33: four in all….
2NE1. THIS HAS TO BE 2NE1! *spazzes like crazy* 2NE11111111111 <3 yah CL don't be so ____y -.- and whoa minzy with attitude! :D omg hahhaa *is having fun here* omg bom is creeping me out. majorly. but it's so cool to see 2NE1 in these bad girl positions >:D makes me like them more!

Hahahaha annyeong unnie! i missed you heaps :( but i know how you feel, my school is gettings seriously busy too *singapore education system*.... T^T but the story was awesome! i though the different points of view melded perfectly together and the scene itself is confusing to your splitting the different povs actually made it somewhat clearer in my opinion ^^ one person in such a scene would have been really confused... anyway i missed reading your stuff! i'm glad you haven't forgotten this though (or imma fly over and shove a laptop in your hands ;) and stare at you until you write SOMEthing xD)

hahahaha how have you been apart from school though? ^^v
zenlover #3
Chapter 33: ahh poor Hoya, he cant hear anything because those bomb :/ hope he's jelly with Sungjong ;p
Max & Yunho is really helpful xDD
im waiting for Woohyun/Jinri moment y'know -___-v
wynthe #4
Chapter 32: (cont...)

I didn't expect BoA to have the cure, but I should have. She's evil! T^T And for some reason I am suspicious of Hyunseung. And Sunggyu! T^T Ever since he released his solo album I've been paying more attention to this man. Hope he comes back to the light!

I really am, overall, looking forward to seeing where everything is going. Final confrontations, how it will all end, if anyone actually gets maimed or dies or something. I wonder when the others will learn about Sanghee (I don't recall the rest knowing) and I'm curious to see her use her powers more, if she will at all. But I'm also very excited for some more Taejoong and... someone... else. *shifty eyes* If you're going to do anything with him still. :3

Will be subbing for Eve of Destruction now too. I'll try to give some better review depth in the next chapter. ^^; Keep up the good work! Thank you! XD
wynthe #5
Chapter 32: Heeellloooo! Long time, huh? :D To start off, I am still in love with this story. A few things are a bit confusing at the moment because I haven't read the earlier chapters in a while and so have forgotten some things, but when I read Eve of Destruction I think everything will make more sense. :D

But this version is almost done?! O.O Woo! I'm excited to see how you finish it all off! With the romances and everything, too. I like how you've been developing the relationships between these characters, to be honest. It's a steady and realistic pace, so I hope the romances, when it comes to the end, aren't hurriedly wrapped with a bow, if you know what I mean?

We've seen some Super Junior! XD Do you still have the link to the Suju-teaser I made for you? Could totally post that, even if they don't feature much at all.

:3 The scenes with Hoya and Sanghee, admittedly, made me grin. ;) And Taejoong! XD I love his interactions with Soojung and such on the jet. Hehehe. I have to remember who the other OC's are because it's been a while, but it's good to see everyone again. I loved the scene where Franny is trying to persuade Daesung - and then Seungri appears and it looks like they'regoingtobattle! T^T Poor Daesungie!

(tbc...)
kpopluv7 #6
Chapter 22: Hi, new reader here! This story is awesoooooome!
I'm already soooo addicted to this and I have exams, not so good, but I don't care, this is too good :)
I'm still at chapter 22, but I'm getting there, hehe.
But I'm confused with something. Ji Ae is a human but then what's with the sounds she can make? And at first I thought Mei had powers too because she learned how to use those weapons so fast, haha, guess not.
It's actually weird that the girlls want to get rid of their powers, I mean I do understand them but I would feel awesome if I had powers, HAHA.
Aaaand I hope I will find out more about Sanghee's powers (and I also secretly hope they will all just keep their awesome powers and Sungyeol will regain his).
Great story, you gained yourself a new subbie ;) <3
zenlover #7
wondering if Sunggyu still alive or not…
hope so, gahhh U-Kiss will pay a visit to hospital someday Dx
wish Tablo in there and help them :/
GhostingA #8
Chapter 32: Oh hyell nawww you did Not just leave that cliffhanger at the end of the chapter DX
Myungsoo and the girl is going to be ...DDD= ...Have a very very bad experience...

Kyuhyun! omergeee yippie some more boys that I know XD Towards the end of the battle scene... I thought Max was still with Sofia? or was that supposed to be Sungmin? the beast... who called it? ohh~ more mysteryyy...

OMG I really want to see the battle with homin, sofia, the bits of infinite and hyungseung... 8D

so, none of the research team decided to relay info to people not of AHA association? Well, BoA must either be too good (aka they are like dead) or they are too scared (aka kept under lock and key)
btw I want to know... Does Sungyeol have to know where to go to get there or could he just think of something(one)? e.g. Could he just say want to teleport to the place beside Sunggyu or does he have to say want to teleport to a place like the building over there (or something)?

Also, about your a/n... Singapore IS a country (island country to be exact). A city-state but is still a country. It was occupied by the British but then declared independance from it together with Malaysia and then decided to become a republic (seperating from Malaysia) in 1965.
GhostingA #9
Chapter 31: The Switch? ohhhh got a clue in which how they brainwashed the s4s16s XD

...why did sofia suddenly wanted to help them? like just from their outbursts that it's been and still is a war (that the s4s16s are losing badly) and she's their last hope? haaaa~~~~ she's really mysterious huh?
Harmonia #10
Chapter 31: The new hunter, is he Sunggyu? Oh wow, the story develops so far, now I can't imagine what will happen to the infinites if they see sunggyu has become a hunter

Nice story :D
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