Another Teaser~

Black Hole Sun (On Hiatus)

March 23, 2263

Paris, France

Saint-Denis Commune

5:19 AM

 

"NO!"

 

Bolting up in her bed, Shin Sanghee panted as tears started to collect in eyes. started to throb as if it had been scratched by steel wool, and her head began to pound like a drum. She allowed her body to relax slightly, tipping foward before curling up on her side and beginning to sob quietly. This was the fourth night in a row that she had experienced the exact same nightmare.

 

The nightmare of a subway station, filled with crowds who had either just gotten off of a train or were waiting for the next one. It always felt so real...she could see them walking past her, feel their coats and bags and limbs brush against her...she could smell the scent of tobacco from several smokers in the area, as well as the scent of sweat and steel. But what was the worst, the part she wasn't sure she despised or cherished...the part where she could hear everything.

 

She could hear their voices, hear their laughter, hear them talking and arguing. Hear their footsteps, hear the rustling of their clothes, hear the flickering of the lights overhead in the station, even though they were so far away. But then she could hear the sound of the metal screeching against itself, hear the thundering sound of a train going to fast-she could feel the vibrations under her feet. She knew she wasn't the only one when she looked around, and noticed others glancing this way and that.

 

She tried to yell out, tried to tell them to run, try to tell them to escape, to live. Her voice was gone and nothing came from , and she became helpless as the people around her became more and more confused. A voice called out, just above the hubble of everyone else in the station.

 

"Mommy? Mommy, why is the floor moving? Mommy?" A young boy stumbled into her view and she tries to move. Nothing works. The trains gets closer, but no one sees it except her. She tries to scream, to warn them.

 

Nothing happens.

 

It hits the other train in a blur. Twisted metal goes flying, crushing people around her as they try to flee. An explosion detonates, and fire flares out, charring everyone who is near. The stations roof begins to give out, collapsing on a family that is only a few feet from her. It silences the child.

 

In only a few minutes everything is quiet except for the sound of fires burning and the occasional rock falling.

 

She stands alone among the once busy station, surrounded by rubble, fire and corpses.

 

She stands alone.

 

-v-v-v-v-v-

 

Just as her sobs were calming down, she felt the vibrations of her mothers footsteps heading for her room.

 

The door opened and light flooded her once dark room.

 

'Are you alright?'

 

'Yes, I'm fine. Just a nightmare.'

 

Her mother took a moment before nodding, 'The same ones?'

 

'Yes.'

 

Her mother sighed, 'I told you the accident was mentally trying. Please, let me get you a therapist.'

 

She shook her head quickly, 'No, I'm fine, really.'

 

The accident her mother had been refering to was when she had been out on a walk when they were visiting South Korea for her father's business trip two weeks ago. She had been crossing the road when a car accidently bumped into her. It had slowed down enough that it didn't hurt her, but it did knock her to the ground. A young man had quickly gotten out and helped her up, apologizing perfusely. She had shook him off, annoyed he hadn't been watching were he and his friend had been driving, and walked away. Later she had told her mother, who naturally panicked and checked to make sure she was alright. She had some how managed to convince her mother to not tell her father or her brother.

 

But a week after the incident, the nightmares had started, and she never understood them. She'd wake up screaming in a cold sweat, killing her from the use, and her head always felt like it was going to explode.

 

She got nightmares occasionally, so she just fell back asleep after it happened for the first time. But then it happened again, all the details exactly the same. Not only that, but she could actually hear everything in the second one. 

 

She had been so shocked that she had told her mother everything, and then quickly told her to not tell the rest of the family. It took sometime before her mother listened, but it happened eventually.

 

A few more moments of her mother trying to convince her to go see a doctor, before she was left alone once again. Waiting to feel the vibrations of her mothers footsteps fade, she sat up fulling in bed and leaned back against her headboard and closed her eyes to think.

 

Flashes of her nightmare surfaced in her photographic memory as she tried to find it. Gritting her teeth as she went through the scene with the child calling to his mother, she let out a faint gasp when she found it.

 

She had noticed in the third dream that a new detail was surfacing in each of her dreams. At first, she though she had just missed out on the detail. But when she had gone through the previous dreams, she noticed the details she had seen, were blurred out or just not there-like as if they were being blocked by something.

 

In the first, there was nothing, as it was the beginning. In the second, she could hear and pick up distant people talking about their work places. When she had looked up the said work places, she found out the station was some where in Seoul, South Korea. In the third she had caught a glimpse of a clock projector, which read '03/23/2264 4:44 PM' as it rotated in the air. In this dream..she had found out the station and subway.

 

'That's it.' She thought, 'The accident...it's going to happen today. At the Ilhwan Subway, at the Seoul National Park station.'

 

She had to do something. And fast.

 

A_A_A_A_A_A_A_A_A

A/N

I don't know why I keep posting these teasers-I feel mean, 'cus I know I won't be posting this often once school starts again for me D: Oh well~


Sorry if this one seemed a little dark...Buuut I did warn you in the Intro that I was planning on rating this M for violence and gore and blah blah blah (another warning: Iiii may make it worse later on-Just FYI >>)
 

I really couldn't help myself-when I got this character, I just fell in luuurv with her(well not actually, but you guys know what I mean...>>)~ So I wanted to do a teaser for her too <3

Also: Because I felt a little guilty about leaving the rather confusing chapter last time, I wanted to give you a much less confusing teaser this time haha

Anywhos~ I'm sorry to the person who gave me the mystery girl in the first Teaser-I didn't mean to make her out as a , its just you did say she was blunt and rather straight forward and some other details, so if someone is having a bad day and they have all those characteristics...Sorry!! To all the other readers: She's actually not a total , I'm just evil and made her seem like one~ (but just for now)

Yay! Comments! <3


Jaimee : Thank you! :D Yeah, sorry about the confusion, its just, I didn't want to make it super clear, or else it'l be too predictable, and predictable stories are boring XP

wynthe: Nope, its not her~ But I hope you like how I made her in this chapter-the secret isn't super obvious, but I didn't feel that it was the right time to reveal it, so I didn't say anything outright-hope she sounded good :)

Muhahaha yesss~Excellent, you're suppose to be confused~You'll find out what was going on with the two girls eventually~ And I'm not telling if you know the guys XP But I suppose it wouldn't hurt if I said, no, neither of the guys said anything to the girls.

You'll find out mehehe Nahhh, I wouldn't ditch you at a cliffhanger~ Plus, I just started this story, and I have all these wonderful new characters and identities for Infinite, so nope, I'm not even close to bored yet. I'm glad you find it interesting-I hope I can keep that interest in the future as well :)

Don't worry about the co-author thing-It's not a big deal right now, as I think I'm okay by myself-it's just when I stat to run out of ideas-THATS when I'm really going to start looking for one

I'm really super happy and glad you enjoyed it!!

fatieynmanmanhani : Mehehe I'm not saying anything~ I'm glad you love them! I hope you enjoy this one as well! :D

Hmmmmm I can't think of anything else to say...
Oh yeah! Thank you so much to all the people who subscribed and to you three who commented for the teaser!! It makes my day whenever I see someone comment, as it also lets me known if the readers are enjoying it or not-so thanks! XD

 

-WhosThere13

p.s. I'm so hungry right now...I'm actually shaking... phuhahaha~ Gonna go eat some icecream like a fatty <3

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wynthe #1
Chapter 33: Short it may have been but it definitely was still entertaining. :D Ooo, I'm so curious to see where Sanghee's Power has developed in the end there, because I don't recall anything about it at all! XD So awesome.

On that note, I love how you identify Hoya's 'Hero Complex' because it is so true. Even when temporarily deaf (at the moment I'm guessing it's just temporary because of the explosions) he still finds time to run off and help with the battle, though you'd think he'd follow them to protect them just to make sure if they were ambushed.

2NE1 is quite intimidating and creepy in this chapter. Don't worry, I could tell who was who. And I wonder where Hyunseung went. I don't trust him. He's tagged again or something isn't he? And I liked Sungjong's stubborness on helping out in the battle. Small addition, but good for the character. :) And I've recently developed a slightly bigger liking for TVXQ, so am interested in seeing them more too. *gasp * And JYJ? O.O Scawy.

Looking forward to the next chapter. :D
CrystalRainbow
#2
Chapter 33: four in all….
2NE1. THIS HAS TO BE 2NE1! *spazzes like crazy* 2NE11111111111 <3 yah CL don't be so ____y -.- and whoa minzy with attitude! :D omg hahhaa *is having fun here* omg bom is creeping me out. majorly. but it's so cool to see 2NE1 in these bad girl positions >:D makes me like them more!

Hahahaha annyeong unnie! i missed you heaps :( but i know how you feel, my school is gettings seriously busy too *singapore education system*.... T^T but the story was awesome! i though the different points of view melded perfectly together and the scene itself is confusing to your splitting the different povs actually made it somewhat clearer in my opinion ^^ one person in such a scene would have been really confused... anyway i missed reading your stuff! i'm glad you haven't forgotten this though (or imma fly over and shove a laptop in your hands ;) and stare at you until you write SOMEthing xD)

hahahaha how have you been apart from school though? ^^v
zenlover
#3
Chapter 33: ahh poor Hoya, he cant hear anything because those bomb :/ hope he's jelly with Sungjong ;p
Max & Yunho is really helpful xDD
im waiting for Woohyun/Jinri moment y'know -___-v
wynthe #4
Chapter 32: (cont...)

I didn't expect BoA to have the cure, but I should have. She's evil! T^T And for some reason I am suspicious of Hyunseung. And Sunggyu! T^T Ever since he released his solo album I've been paying more attention to this man. Hope he comes back to the light!

I really am, overall, looking forward to seeing where everything is going. Final confrontations, how it will all end, if anyone actually gets maimed or dies or something. I wonder when the others will learn about Sanghee (I don't recall the rest knowing) and I'm curious to see her use her powers more, if she will at all. But I'm also very excited for some more Taejoong and... someone... else. *shifty eyes* If you're going to do anything with him still. :3

Will be subbing for Eve of Destruction now too. I'll try to give some better review depth in the next chapter. ^^; Keep up the good work! Thank you! XD
wynthe #5
Chapter 32: Heeellloooo! Long time, huh? :D To start off, I am still in love with this story. A few things are a bit confusing at the moment because I haven't read the earlier chapters in a while and so have forgotten some things, but when I read Eve of Destruction I think everything will make more sense. :D

But this version is almost done?! O.O Woo! I'm excited to see how you finish it all off! With the romances and everything, too. I like how you've been developing the relationships between these characters, to be honest. It's a steady and realistic pace, so I hope the romances, when it comes to the end, aren't hurriedly wrapped with a bow, if you know what I mean?

We've seen some Super Junior! XD Do you still have the link to the Suju-teaser I made for you? Could totally post that, even if they don't feature much at all.

:3 The scenes with Hoya and Sanghee, admittedly, made me grin. ;) And Taejoong! XD I love his interactions with Soojung and such on the jet. Hehehe. I have to remember who the other OC's are because it's been a while, but it's good to see everyone again. I loved the scene where Franny is trying to persuade Daesung - and then Seungri appears and it looks like they'regoingtobattle! T^T Poor Daesungie!

(tbc...)
kpopluv7 #6
Chapter 22: Hi, new reader here! This story is awesoooooome!
I'm already soooo addicted to this and I have exams, not so good, but I don't care, this is too good :)
I'm still at chapter 22, but I'm getting there, hehe.
But I'm confused with something. Ji Ae is a human but then what's with the sounds she can make? And at first I thought Mei had powers too because she learned how to use those weapons so fast, haha, guess not.
It's actually weird that the girlls want to get rid of their powers, I mean I do understand them but I would feel awesome if I had powers, HAHA.
Aaaand I hope I will find out more about Sanghee's powers (and I also secretly hope they will all just keep their awesome powers and Sungyeol will regain his).
Great story, you gained yourself a new subbie ;) <3
zenlover
#7
wondering if Sunggyu still alive or not…
hope so, gahhh U-Kiss will pay a visit to hospital someday Dx
wish Tablo in there and help them :/
GhostingA
#8
Chapter 32: Oh hyell nawww you did Not just leave that cliffhanger at the end of the chapter DX
Myungsoo and the girl is going to be ...DDD= ...Have a very very bad experience...

Kyuhyun! omergeee yippie some more boys that I know XD Towards the end of the battle scene... I thought Max was still with Sofia? or was that supposed to be Sungmin? the beast... who called it? ohh~ more mysteryyy...

OMG I really want to see the battle with homin, sofia, the bits of infinite and hyungseung... 8D

so, none of the research team decided to relay info to people not of AHA association? Well, BoA must either be too good (aka they are like dead) or they are too scared (aka kept under lock and key)
btw I want to know... Does Sungyeol have to know where to go to get there or could he just think of something(one)? e.g. Could he just say want to teleport to the place beside Sunggyu or does he have to say want to teleport to a place like the building over there (or something)?

Also, about your a/n... Singapore IS a country (island country to be exact). A city-state but is still a country. It was occupied by the British but then declared independance from it together with Malaysia and then decided to become a republic (seperating from Malaysia) in 1965.
GhostingA
#9
Chapter 31: The Switch? ohhhh got a clue in which how they brainwashed the s4s16s XD

...why did sofia suddenly wanted to help them? like just from their outbursts that it's been and still is a war (that the s4s16s are losing badly) and she's their last hope? haaaa~~~~ she's really mysterious huh?
Harmonia
#10
Chapter 31: The new hunter, is he Sunggyu? Oh wow, the story develops so far, now I can't imagine what will happen to the infinites if they see sunggyu has become a hunter

Nice story :D