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Black Hole Sun (On Hiatus)

 

 

 

March 23, 2263

Paris, France

Le Bourget Airport

6:02 AM

 

 

Sanghee hesitanted, just for a moment, while she looked around. The airport, the ancient airport that had been redone and upgraded so many times over the many, many years it had been there, had several wings where jet flights were available for people with last minute business calls. The cost had lowered sufficiently over the years for a flight, but it still had cost more then she had-so she ended up having to tap into her father's credit card.

 

She didn't mean it! It was just-she had looked up the particular station, the Seoul National Park, online, planning to go to sleep afterwards, when she noticed something by complete accident. The clock on her projecting and touch screen laptop read '5:30 AM' in neon blue. The clock on the site for Seoul's subways read '2:30 PM'. Only then did it hit her-how could she have forgotten?! There was a 9 hour difference for the time zones of Paris and Seoul!

With a slightly guilty heart, but a clear head, she used her father's money to purchase a last minute jet ticket to the Incheon International Airport in Seoul. Her flight was now close to 2 hours rather then 10 hours by the much older airplane models. She was going to be cutting it close-but there was nothing she could do about it.

 

"- et and passpo-...please."

 

Blinking and shaking her head slightly, she scanned the two items on the laser board while giving the 2 security robots a nervous smile. Not that they could see it anyways. A light turned green over her head as a laser scanned her for any bombs or dangerous weapons. Nothing appeared, so there was a ding and the bullet proof glass in front of her slid down, allowing her to walk further into the B Class Jet Wing. Tucking her special video phone into her pocket and grabbing her notebook and pen, she jogged for Entrance 7.

 

A moment later the pilot came into view, a nice looking french man with a large pepper & salt mustache, who gave her a friendly wave and greeted her.

 

She smiled and waved back, "Leaving now?" She coughed and rubbed while he nodded in response.

 

"Yes, Made...elle Shin, we can...ave as soon as you...sh."

 

Ooooh, fancy, the pilot knew her name-shaking her head for the second time today to clear away the irrating thoughts, Sanghee met his eyes, which were a brilliant blue, before answering, "Yes, leave as soon as possible, please."

 

He opened the door for her so she could enter while she handed him her ticket.

 

"Alright, ...joy your fli..."

 

He closed the door behind her while she rested her head against her leather chair. She might as well try and catch up on her sleep on the trip there.

 

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March 23, 2264
Seoul, South Korea

Incheon Airport

4:32 PM

 

 

They landed an hour and 32 minutes later. Rushing off the jet, she yelled a quick 'good bye' and 'thank you' to the pilot before bolting head long for the entrance of the airport. Waving frantically, she managed to hail a taxi, and she quickly got in.

 

"...ere to, miss?"

 

"The Seoul National Park Subway Station" She shot back quickly, before having a coughing attack. She wished she could call the police and warn them. But something told her they would just call her crazy and hang up. Or worse...they'd think she was an 'Infinite'.
 

Rubbing , she checked the time on the dashboard of the car.

 

'4:34 PM'

She was cutting it too close.

 

10 minutes till the accident.

 

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A/N

I thought this would be a better cliffhanger then the last one- Less time = More tension and excitement!

Okay! Not gonna update for bit! Or at least I'll try....

...*sobs* I'm so bad at building up tension-gaaaaaaaaaaah DX I make all the chappies and cliffhangers, then spoil them a couple hours later-I can't help it! I iz too excited for this story for and for getting subscribers and commenters <3

Thank you for comment guys! I'll reply to them in the next chapter :D

-WhosThere13


p.s. Yessss...I'm stealing wynthe's suggestion-I'm considering them chapters now *shrug* not that it makes any difference. Quick reply to wynthe though about the chapters: Chapter 1 is set slightly ahead of Chapter 2 and this one, just to let you know~

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wynthe #1
Chapter 33: Short it may have been but it definitely was still entertaining. :D Ooo, I'm so curious to see where Sanghee's Power has developed in the end there, because I don't recall anything about it at all! XD So awesome.

On that note, I love how you identify Hoya's 'Hero Complex' because it is so true. Even when temporarily deaf (at the moment I'm guessing it's just temporary because of the explosions) he still finds time to run off and help with the battle, though you'd think he'd follow them to protect them just to make sure if they were ambushed.

2NE1 is quite intimidating and creepy in this chapter. Don't worry, I could tell who was who. And I wonder where Hyunseung went. I don't trust him. He's tagged again or something isn't he? And I liked Sungjong's stubborness on helping out in the battle. Small addition, but good for the character. :) And I've recently developed a slightly bigger liking for TVXQ, so am interested in seeing them more too. *gasp * And JYJ? O.O Scawy.

Looking forward to the next chapter. :D
CrystalRainbow
#2
Chapter 33: four in all….
2NE1. THIS HAS TO BE 2NE1! *spazzes like crazy* 2NE11111111111 <3 yah CL don't be so ____y -.- and whoa minzy with attitude! :D omg hahhaa *is having fun here* omg bom is creeping me out. majorly. but it's so cool to see 2NE1 in these bad girl positions >:D makes me like them more!

Hahahaha annyeong unnie! i missed you heaps :( but i know how you feel, my school is gettings seriously busy too *singapore education system*.... T^T but the story was awesome! i though the different points of view melded perfectly together and the scene itself is confusing to your splitting the different povs actually made it somewhat clearer in my opinion ^^ one person in such a scene would have been really confused... anyway i missed reading your stuff! i'm glad you haven't forgotten this though (or imma fly over and shove a laptop in your hands ;) and stare at you until you write SOMEthing xD)

hahahaha how have you been apart from school though? ^^v
zenlover
#3
Chapter 33: ahh poor Hoya, he cant hear anything because those bomb :/ hope he's jelly with Sungjong ;p
Max & Yunho is really helpful xDD
im waiting for Woohyun/Jinri moment y'know -___-v
wynthe #4
Chapter 32: (cont...)

I didn't expect BoA to have the cure, but I should have. She's evil! T^T And for some reason I am suspicious of Hyunseung. And Sunggyu! T^T Ever since he released his solo album I've been paying more attention to this man. Hope he comes back to the light!

I really am, overall, looking forward to seeing where everything is going. Final confrontations, how it will all end, if anyone actually gets maimed or dies or something. I wonder when the others will learn about Sanghee (I don't recall the rest knowing) and I'm curious to see her use her powers more, if she will at all. But I'm also very excited for some more Taejoong and... someone... else. *shifty eyes* If you're going to do anything with him still. :3

Will be subbing for Eve of Destruction now too. I'll try to give some better review depth in the next chapter. ^^; Keep up the good work! Thank you! XD
wynthe #5
Chapter 32: Heeellloooo! Long time, huh? :D To start off, I am still in love with this story. A few things are a bit confusing at the moment because I haven't read the earlier chapters in a while and so have forgotten some things, but when I read Eve of Destruction I think everything will make more sense. :D

But this version is almost done?! O.O Woo! I'm excited to see how you finish it all off! With the romances and everything, too. I like how you've been developing the relationships between these characters, to be honest. It's a steady and realistic pace, so I hope the romances, when it comes to the end, aren't hurriedly wrapped with a bow, if you know what I mean?

We've seen some Super Junior! XD Do you still have the link to the Suju-teaser I made for you? Could totally post that, even if they don't feature much at all.

:3 The scenes with Hoya and Sanghee, admittedly, made me grin. ;) And Taejoong! XD I love his interactions with Soojung and such on the jet. Hehehe. I have to remember who the other OC's are because it's been a while, but it's good to see everyone again. I loved the scene where Franny is trying to persuade Daesung - and then Seungri appears and it looks like they'regoingtobattle! T^T Poor Daesungie!

(tbc...)
kpopluv7 #6
Chapter 22: Hi, new reader here! This story is awesoooooome!
I'm already soooo addicted to this and I have exams, not so good, but I don't care, this is too good :)
I'm still at chapter 22, but I'm getting there, hehe.
But I'm confused with something. Ji Ae is a human but then what's with the sounds she can make? And at first I thought Mei had powers too because she learned how to use those weapons so fast, haha, guess not.
It's actually weird that the girlls want to get rid of their powers, I mean I do understand them but I would feel awesome if I had powers, HAHA.
Aaaand I hope I will find out more about Sanghee's powers (and I also secretly hope they will all just keep their awesome powers and Sungyeol will regain his).
Great story, you gained yourself a new subbie ;) <3
zenlover
#7
wondering if Sunggyu still alive or not…
hope so, gahhh U-Kiss will pay a visit to hospital someday Dx
wish Tablo in there and help them :/
GhostingA
#8
Chapter 32: Oh hyell nawww you did Not just leave that cliffhanger at the end of the chapter DX
Myungsoo and the girl is going to be ...DDD= ...Have a very very bad experience...

Kyuhyun! omergeee yippie some more boys that I know XD Towards the end of the battle scene... I thought Max was still with Sofia? or was that supposed to be Sungmin? the beast... who called it? ohh~ more mysteryyy...

OMG I really want to see the battle with homin, sofia, the bits of infinite and hyungseung... 8D

so, none of the research team decided to relay info to people not of AHA association? Well, BoA must either be too good (aka they are like dead) or they are too scared (aka kept under lock and key)
btw I want to know... Does Sungyeol have to know where to go to get there or could he just think of something(one)? e.g. Could he just say want to teleport to the place beside Sunggyu or does he have to say want to teleport to a place like the building over there (or something)?

Also, about your a/n... Singapore IS a country (island country to be exact). A city-state but is still a country. It was occupied by the British but then declared independance from it together with Malaysia and then decided to become a republic (seperating from Malaysia) in 1965.
GhostingA
#9
Chapter 31: The Switch? ohhhh got a clue in which how they brainwashed the s4s16s XD

...why did sofia suddenly wanted to help them? like just from their outbursts that it's been and still is a war (that the s4s16s are losing badly) and she's their last hope? haaaa~~~~ she's really mysterious huh?
Harmonia
#10
Chapter 31: The new hunter, is he Sunggyu? Oh wow, the story develops so far, now I can't imagine what will happen to the infinites if they see sunggyu has become a hunter

Nice story :D