Chapter 1

Ever So Enchanting
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CHAPTER 1: The Players Game

 

 

 

Her Story

 

“OH EMM GEE! LOOK AT THAT GUY~ ISN’T HE JUST SOO–” Gui Gui covered her best friend’s big mouth.

“YOU PROMISED ME YOU WOULDN’T SAY ANYTHING!” Gui Gui slowly let her go as she came face to face with her best friend Genie. Genie sighed as she adjusted her backpack strap.

“Listen to me my dear friend, we are down here while he is allll the way uppp there! No matter what happens, even if the sky falls, we will still be on the bottom. There is nothing we can do about it.” Genie and Gui Gui walked out of their classroom with heavy backpacks weighing behind them.

“Well Gui, if you take out those big tails and lose the entire geek look, you have a chance to change your social status.”

“No, no, I believe that in order to find true love, the man who falls in love with me need to love me for my personality not my looks!”

“And where do you find someone like that?! Let’s knock you back into the 21st century Gui, guys in this era are obsessed with how they look.”

“Stop crushing my dreams! I will find one someday and when I do, you will have to eat your words!”

“Like I said, there is no one that will fall in love like that. Heroines from dramas can but then again, it is all make-believe so–“

 

“Hey ladies.”

 

Gui Gui and Genie stopped to meet the person who stood in front of them. He was the boy who almost every girl in the school has a crush on. The boy who got the grades, smarts, looks, and manners. He was the boy who every girl dreams about.

“Hi Li Quan!” Genie nudged Gui Gui who couldn’t stop drooling over him.

“OH! HI LI QUAN, HOW ARE YOU? HOW HAVE YOU BEEN? IT’S GREAT TO SEE YOU! WHAT’S UP? THE SKY?! IT’S A GREAT DAY TODAY HUH? I THINK SO, WHEN I CAME OUT, THE SUN AND THE MANY MANY DIFFERENT CLOUDS WAS FLOATING A–”

Genie cleared as Li Quan laughed, which caused Gui to blush madly at her sudden outspoken attitude.

“Great, I just finished practice so we are wondering if you ladies would like to join my team and I? We are going to a party to celebrate our first victory! What do you say? Are you ladies up for it?”

“Genie and I are totally up for it!” Genie flashed Gui her ‘wha-the’ look but Gui ignored her as she continue to speak to Li Quan. “Great! I will grab my buddies and we will go together.”

When he ran off, Genie spun Gui to face her.

“ARE YOU SERIOUS? YOU CAN’T BE SERIOUS RIGHT NOW!” Gui shook her head vigorously. “OH NO! WHAT HAVE I DONE!”

“YEAH, WHAT DID YOU JUST DO? You seriously... You seriously like him this much? I agree he is good-looking and all but this party... I do not want to go along with his buddies... I do not think it’s a good–“

“DID LI QUAN JUST ASK ME OUT!? OH GENIE, AM I DREAMING?! GENIE! AM I DREAMING!?”

Gui pinched herself and when the pain came through, she smiled brightly. “HE DID ASKK ME OUT!”

“Technically, he did not ask you out... It’s not a date when there is a group of people coming... AND GUI! ARE YOU EVEN LISTENING TO ME?!”

“HE ASKED ME OUT! WOOOT~! HE ASKED ME OUT, THE GUY WHO I LI–“

Genie shook her head in disbelief. “Seriously... You are going to get yourself into trouble if you keep on zoning me out.”

“Genie! I have a date tonight!”

Genie weakly smiled as she saw Li Quan and his buddies walk over to them. “Are you ready to go ladies?”

“YES!” / “No”

Gui pulled Genie closer to her as she walked with Li Quan to the party. “Gui...” Genie uneasy feelings were creeping in fast and despite her best efforts to bring Gui back to reality, she knew it was close to impossible since Gui has dreamt of this opportunity for so long.

“Gui..”

“Please Genie!”

“Fine... But just for a couple of hours then we are going straight home!”

“I loveee you Genie!”

“And what about me?”

Li Quan quickly and swiftly added himself into the conversation. Genie can see her cheeks blush at his sudden question so she smiled over to him. “I’m sure you have lots and lots of girls who say that to you already Li Quan.”

“I do but sometimes, it is good to hear it from someone close to me, like a friend.”

“So you want to hear those words from someone close... But Li Quan, don’t you have a girlfriend?”

Taken back, Li Quan only smiled but the sudden change did not go unnoticed by Genie. “I do not have one.”

“REALLLY?!” Gui yelled out, surprised as Li Quan and Genie looked at Gui. “Y–Y–You don’t ha–have a gir–gir–girlfriend?”

 

Li Quan scratch the back of his head and smirked.

“Yeah... but the girl who I like said that she likes someone who is carefree and adventurous, oh well, I guess we are not compatible.”

“Oh...” was all Gui could say at that moment.

She knew she should have stopped herself from asking any more questions so she stopped once she regained control over her emotions and actions. Li Quan was the guy who had everything and he was the dream guy girls wants. So how can someone reject him? If that lucky girl was Gui, Gui wouldn’t hesitate one bit. She would agree to be his girlfriend in an instant. But that lucky girl isn’t her, if only it was her, but it isn’t.

 

“AND WE ARE HERE~! WELCOME TO THE PARTY LADIES!” Li Quan and his buddies walk in and Genie could smell the strong liquor. “Gui, we rea

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last message before the new year! thank you for your support throughout 2014! ESE will end in the first half of JAN so i'll see you then~ have a great holiday!

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#1
Chapter 54: OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You really know how to toy with your readers' hearts. You totally had my fragile heart wrapped around your finger -_-
The last chapter (not the Epilogue) I was holding my breath a little when GuiGui's crush, Li Quan, came into the picture o.o ... I am glad that Li Quan did not do anything bad to GuiGui ... phew~~ lol
You know what?? all the way through .... I was secretly hoping or more like waiting to see Chun's romantic life ( I did feel bad a little for him bcuz Aaron, Calvin and Jiro have more sweet times than him :P)
BUT I really LOVE your ending .... I mean how you end it, the whole story is mainly focused on Gui & Aaron but the ending is widely covered on Calvin & Genie's wedding^^ .... and a long the way in season 2 there is a development of Jiro's romantic life (each and individual character has its own path/ending .... it looks more realistic to me)
I can't believe this is the end .... it's the END .... IT's ENDED xD
I am so happy that I finish this story (mission accomplished) ^__________________________________^
Feeling satisfied right now hahahaha XD
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#2
Chapter 46: Oh gosh!! what the hell is going on in this chapter o.o'
At the beginning, I was so happy that my heart beams with happiness like a skyrocket because of GuiLun reunion and how sweet they are.
But who would have thought that you are so stingy and you suddenly dropped George right in the middle of the chapter .... honestly, I did forget about George for a second there >.<" and to make something bad become worse you even made Gui seeing Puff kissed Aaron TT__TT
GOD goodness!! it seems like you have mapped out everything and marked everywhere of your time bombs and just waiting for the right time to activate them -.-
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#3
Chapter 44: feeling satisfied in this chapter ^____________^
Gui, Aaron & Kris .... one happy family, sweet GuiLun moments and gosh! Kris is super cute^^
Awwwww~~ hope no more third wheel or trouble for them
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#4
Chapter 37: Oh God!! how could you be so coldhearted and separated Gui & Aaron this long -______________- ?? seriously??
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#5
Chapter 31: OMG!! hahhaa ... finally they DID it ^^ though you did not give the details :P
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#6
Chapter 30: OK, this is like a full bucket list of GuiLun sweet moments
that I can't help it but ginning like an idiot while reading this chapter all the way ^^
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#7
Chapter 20: Allah Buddha Jesus Christ O____________O
Finally a real kiss with love between GuiLun, I am so happy ^_________________________^
But why do you have to ruin my mood by adding Rainie in the last panel of this chapter >.<" ??

PS: Anyway, Merry Christmas & Happy New Year ^^
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#8
Chapter 16: Hahaha.... omg, Aaron finally falls for Gui ^_^
I hope they will admit their feelings to each other soon coz George aka third wheel is really getting on my nerve >.<
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#9
Chapter 10: Very excited to see Aaron starts changing little by little for Gui^^
He is starting to show more of his sweet and caring side towards Gui :D *I am squealing* hahahaa ...
GOsh! your preview of the chapter .... I just can't wait to read it, lol XD
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#10
Chapter 2: Hhahaa .... how Gui and Aaron met ... I like it^^
Truly funny, I have seen it many times though dramas and I can totally imagine it happens to guilun xD