English ver.~pt 2

I'm Abnormal Guy! [english/malay]

 

That night, all student was invited to JR's birthday party that located at his villa, including Ren. Actually, Ren resist to go there cause he afraid that JR would hurt him again. But after threaten by JR, he finally going to that party. He was accompanied by his best friend, Ricky and Minwoo.

 

"You came after i threaten to forced you to eat an ice cream? I just say that i'm gonna force him to eat ice cream, and there he came. He's so afraid to eat ice cream that he willingly to be hurting by me than eat the ice cream. How coward is he?" said JR loudly to make all the guests hear it and laughing at Ren.

 

"Ren, let's go home! We're pity to see you like this." said Ricky while he approach Ren that hidding at the balcony. Ricky's holding Ren's hand to comfort him. Ren's seems trauma. Of course he's trauma. Who can stand to being bullied for 24 hours a day? Ren didn't know what he's doing wrong until JR treating him so badly.

 

"There you guys! Come, let's go home! This party ! I hate to see my friends being bullied like this." said Minwoo. And before the three of them manage to walked towards the door, JR and his friend stopped them.

 

"Where are you going? The party's not over yet..." said JR that looked drunk. "You guys wanna go home, just go home! Don't take my 'things'..." continued JR and Ren's was dumbfounded.

 

'Things? What did he mean that i'm his 'things'?' Ren's started to scared. He just looked at his friends that send out from the house.

 

And after that, JR dragged him to his room.

 

"Yah! Let me go!" Ren's pushing JR's hand that holding his hand. "Why are you doing this to me? What did i do? Usually you're not not like this. But recently, you always hurting me. Why JR?" asked Ren as he's tired of being bullied by JR without a reason. And if there's a reason, but he didn't know it also.

 

"Shut up! Just take off your clothes!" JR's shouted. Ren's shocked.

 

"Bo?! Are you nuts?! You're drunk. Let me go, and tomorrow we discuss." Ren's went towards the door that locked by JR just now. And before he manage to open it, JR's grabbed his wrist and pushed him onto the bed harshly.

 

"JR, what are you doing?!" Ren's shouted as JR started to take off his clothes. Ren's trembling. "Please don't do this, JR...I'm not a normal guy...you'll regret it." Ren's begging as his tears stream down his cheek.

 

"Shut up!" JR slapped Ren, then he force Ren to drink an alcohol. Ren struggling to get away, but he failed as he drink that drink. They both was drunk and...(ya know)...

 


 

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today's music bank, Nu'est comeback stage...i'm embrassed while looking at Ren n JR cause i make this story about them...hehehe...

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worldofdreams #1
Chapter 18: you forgot to mention aron
worldofdreams #2
Chapter 34: i think ren diserves an golden medal for forgiving and loving an like jr. not many can do that. good job for wrtting this story its was amazing
noisygurl #3
Actually,i WUV this story very much *thumbs up* ><
JenniferHyun
#4
Chapter 34: Good story but you really should put someone to read this and correct your all mistakes. The English version, you know :) It was really good story, but I started to get tired because the all really clear mistakes. There is missing so many verbs and preposition. And you should remember the exceptions of the third-person. I know, i don't speak or write perfect English either, but i found so many mistakes that it is really disturbing and it sort of spoils the story. If you want, i can help you to fix it.
GuardianExostans
#5
Chapter 17: BEST XD IM BLUSHING LIKE HELL XD HAHAHA..X DPT BYG LAKI PREGNANT XD
GuardianExostans
#6
Chapter 14: Saya tetibe ship renxminhyun .-.
nornanoha97
#7
Chapter 34: Yah!!! Yours story so so awesome full of everything... romantic,funny,sad and many mix of felling.Love this story so so much >///< Falling in love with JREN couples.>ㅅ< *kiss* Keep the faith and ship this ^^ Anyways hwaiting and make a lot of happy jren couples.Sorry I'm only read eng ver hope you don't mind XP