Twenty-third Candy

Annyeong Kim Jongdae!

 

                      As I opened the door of the café I could see that Haera unnie and Jungshin were smirking at me. They must have seen everything. Oh, this is embarrassing.

 

                “I think someone just hit a jackpot.” Jungshin oppa spoke.

 

                “What?” I raised my shoulder and smiled innocently at them.

 

                “We saw what happened dear. Mind to share the story?” Haera unnie poked my shoulder.

 

                “What story?” I could feel myself blushed.

 

                “You’re blushing. Guess that explain enough.” Jungshin oppa continued to tease me.

 

                “Whatever, I’m going upstairs.” Oh, I could not keep this embarrassment for too long. So before they could shoot me with more questions, I ran upstairs as fast as I could.

 

                I locked the door and threw myself on the bed. I stared at the wooden ceiling blankly. Seriously, I could not believe what happened just now. Was it a dream? I slapped my face for a few times. Ow, it hurts. So I wasn’t dreaming. It was real.

 

                Jongdae and I had official confessed to each other.

 

                So that means he’s my boyfriend now right?

 

                Right?

 

                OH GOD.

 

                Kim Jongdae is my boyfriend.

 

                KIM.JONG.DAE.IS.MY.BOY.FRIEND.

 

         “Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”

 

                “Pumpkin! Hey! Are you alright in there? Are you okay?”

 

                Oh no. I screamed too loud.

 

                “Ah….yes! Yes, oppa! I’m fine! Nothing happened! Fine. Really.”

 

                Then I heard footsteps walking down the stairs. Phew~ What was I thinking? Screaming like that?

 

                Ok, I’m too excited. Behave yourself. Calm down.

 

                Suddenly my phone rang. I looked at the caller ID. It was Minki. Oh my, he called at the perfect time! I should tell him about it!

 

                “Minki-ah!!!!!!!”

 

                I thought he was gonna curse like he always does every time I yelled at him on the phone. But instead what I heard was………a sob?

 

                This is not good.

 

                “Min…ki?”

 

                Silent.

 

                “Are you okay?”

 

                Silent.

 

                “Minki?”

 

                “He’s…..gone.” Minki stuttered.

 

                He’s gone? Who’s gone?

 

                “Who?”

 

                “My…dad.”

 

                I froze.

 

                “My dad’s gone.”

 

                “Minki.”

 

                I didn’t know what to say. I was feeling so happy just now then suddenly my best friend called and told me his father just died? Oh no. I felt so guilty for laughing and smiling happily while my best friend just lost one of the most important people in his life.

 

                “I’m sorry.”

 

                “No! Just shut up and don’t say anything! Don’t……talk. Just….listen.”

 

                Minki and his ego. He’ll never like it when I tried to calm him down every time he was upset. He just wanted someone to listen to him but don’t say anything. I understood him enough. So I kept quiet.

 

                “That stupid old man! I….told him to just……..stay at home and do nothing. I…..I….can work and give them money…and…and buy all his stupid medicine….damn it!”

 

                Minki.

 

                “And now….he’s dead…gone…leaving my mom and sister……and me! How would….he expects me….to study….when I….I know….he….he won’t be there......when I graduate? Damn! Damn it!”

 

                Minki loves his dad so much. I knew that. And now he’s gone, I could not imagine what’s gonna happen to Minki. I wished I could help him. I swear I’ll help with everything I could but how can I help him with this matter? I could only be his crying shoulder. That’s all I could.

 

                “I’m going back…to Busan…..tomorrow.”

 

                “Ok.”

 

                “Don’t…..tell…..my girlfriend.”

 

                I wanted to ask why, but I think I should not do that.

 

                “Ok.”

 

                “Thanks.”

 

                “Minki.”

 

                Silent.

 

                “Text me when you arrive there.”

 

                “Ok.”

 

                Then the line went dead.

 

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* hehe~ i thought about it last night so i've decided to continue this story and end it whenever i think i want. so here it is! another chap and another twist. i think some of u might already figure out whats gonna happen next right? but hey, dont spoil the story, just let me write it freely okay? hihihi~ and yes, sorry for no-jongdae in this chap. i kinda want u guys to pay a little of ur attention to our Minki here. so sorry. i'm gonna continue writing. hope u'll like it! =) *

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kagami-rin
#1
Chapter 41: THIS IS A GREAT FANFIC, THANK YOU DIHDYJRJJHSYUDMHF
Wherethesequelstthololol
momouiiii #2
Chapter 39: THE STORT IS JUST PERF AF XD
cuteflower
#3
Chapter 40: Loved the story completely. I want the sequel badly. I will look forward to it.
JonginWife #4
WHERE'S THE SEQUEL TT TT I NEED IT LIKE RIGHT NOW AUTHOR-NIM RIGHT NOW!!! SEQUEL JUSEYO~~~~~~~~~!!!!!!! <3
Angelz0715 #5
Chapter 40: Omg that is so cute!!! You almost made me have a heart attack at the end lol xD
heclgehog
#6
Chapter 39: That was the most stressful yet adorable and satisfying ending ever omg. I loved this story so much, it was quic but very entertaining and sweet yet dramatic. I could totally see this becoming a drama.
deadroseforu #7
Chapter 9: Oh my god! So funny, it's just beginning I know but I could not keep myself from commenting. So I have never read funny fanfictions that can make me really laugh while reading))))
zoobasofly
#8
Chapter 39: wow im sooo happy foer her
pinio91
#9
Chapter 40: Gosh i just dont know what you write but i've finished reading all this in a few hours, with of course 38 chapters in my office lol..and except for during some intense drama scene, i'm sure that i've been reading while smiling throughout ALL chapters lol.. ^.^

and the last scene at the hospital sort of remind me of the Prince that turn into frog, one of my all-time fav drama..^^

this will definitely got into my recommendation list..and since u said this might hv seq, subscribed!! ^.^
pinio91
#10
Chapter 9: OMG AUTHORNIM! I JUST FOUND THIS STORY AND UNTIL THIS CHAPTER, IT IS NOT BORING AT ALL!!!
sorry for the caps but i just had to said it reading ur author note.. gosh i'm currently reading this right now at my workplace neglecting my work(not that i hv work yet right now anyways) but i'm laughing u know!! n i tried my best to keep the volume down lol..your OC characters especially give me too much laugh lol i'm still smiling when writing this ^^ and seriously i dont know how u did that but u just expressed what i feel about Jongdae through the OC character like almost perfectly!!

Its been long since i read another good ChenxOC fic..thank you for writing this >.<