Posting this here because I'm afraid to put this in winglin anymore apparently there is a virus.

So this is my first fanfic. Although I hope you won't be too harsh on me I would still like honest feedback. This also might be a bit NC-17 but I'm going to try to make it as PG as I can.
Two kids who met at the school playground fall in love? Well lets just say that being 5 and 6 years old doesn't really pull off the stage of being in love. The problem was that the little girl moved to a different school the next day. She thought she'll never see the boy with the cap again, her first love her Cappy. Well for the boy it was his first time to ever get any reaction of kindness from a girl other than his mother lets just say he was a little round at the time. He promised himself that he'll seach high and low for the little girl with the heart shaped birthmark. Will these two ever find one another?Or will they fall for someone completely different?

~~~~~~~~(You)
-very high spirited girl
-can easily befriend others
-just recently changed schools
-great dancer
-never dated because still in love with the boy with the cap
-very beautiful

TOP
-very flirty
-very kind to all his friends
-not big on girls who try to get with him
-great rapper but still tries to dance
never dated just flirts because he's still in love with the girl with the heart shaped birthmark
-good looking and can get any girl
-was once really chubby

Minor Characters
BIGBANG
-Daesung-your first friend at school
-Taeyang-sweet, can easily talk with you although he's shy with other girls
-GD-very flirty, has player like tendencies, secretly in love with Dara
-Seungri-acts cute around you but also very player like. Secretly in love with CL although they fight a lot

2NE1
-Bom-sweet very beautiful and in love with Taeyang even if he doesn't realize it. Dara's sister
-Dara-sweet looks younger than she is and is secretly in love with GD although she'll never admit to it.Bom's sister
-CL-fashionista, straight forward but can really be a great person to talk with. Fights with Seungri although she secretly likes him. Fighting with him is the only way she knows how to show her affection for him. Daesung's cousin
-Minzy- the maknae, very sweet and is in love with Daesung because he's funny and kind. Taeyang's little sister

Extras (Possibly)
-Gummy
-Teddy
-Super Junior
-SNSD
-2PM & 2AM (ONEDAY)