The Deal

Capturing His Heart

The room jerked. And by that I mean as soon as Jessica strutted into the room, all the boys sat up straighter and spoke louder to one another. God. They're such boys.

I lift my head back up so that it was no longer resting upon Chansung's shoulder. He looks at me in confusion, widening his eyes a little more and parting his lips a little. 

"Sorry, I'm just really tired," I try to explain.

"It's fine, you can sleep on my shoulder if you want to."

"Don't worry about it; it's getting late and you guys are going to have to go back to your dorm soon to check in and go to bed. I can wait a little longer," I speedily replied. I don't think I took a single breath in that sentence. "And plus--"

"Hey, your name's Tiffany, right?" a light nasally voice suddenly cuts me off.

I turn towards her, "yeah, and you're Jessica, right?" 

"Mmhmm. Do you think I could borrow him for a second?"

"Oh.. Chansung?" I said reluctantly.

"Yeah, just for a second. We'll be back very soon!"

"Err, yeah I mean, it's not up to me. It's not like I own him." I wish I owned him.

She giggles and grabs his arm as he stands up. "Thanks!" 

Without even giving me another glance, he leaves the room... with her. I can't help but to feel a little bit jealous and sad. You know when a sinking feeling forms in your heart? Yeah. That's it.

 

I turn around so that I was kneeling on the couch seat to face the people sitting behind me. Taecyeon and I exchange glances of lost hope--

"Wait. Why do you look so sad? It's definitely not because you feel bad for me, is it?" I questioined

"No. It's because I think she's really pretty."

"Is that all that you guys care about? That she's skinny and pretty?"

"Well... I mean..."

"Well.. I mean, you're totally superficial." I snapped, almost too viciously.

"Tiffany, I know you're not too happy right now, but neither am I. I don't even know how to talk to girls."

"What am I???"

"You're.... different."

Greaaattttt.. Another one who can't see me as more than a little sister. Suddenly filled with uneasiness I force words out: "Different? How?" 

"I don't know.. you're easier to talk to?"

"Is that a question?"

"Can we make a deal?"

"Depends on what it is."

"You help me with Jessica; and I'll help you with Chansung... Deal?"

"And if it doesn't work out? As in.. one person gets with their crush and the other doesn't?"

"Then that's just life.".... That's just life... what a great cliché.

"I mean... I guess..." 

"We'll just both have to put our all in it. Rules... uhh... rules.. well I guess there's only one: we cannot completely depend on the other person to make everything magically work out."

"Deal."

"wait... that easily?"

"Yeah. You want to be with Jessica, right?"

"Right..."

"And I really like Chansung."

"Right."

"So we'll just have to give it a try."

He gave a sullen smile. I could tell that he was still feeling a little uneasy, but trying won't hurt anyone, right?

I guess we'll just have to wait and see how this all plays out!

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Challey #1
cant believe i just knew (and finished reading) this fanfic now... it's great!!! i guess i just didnt visit the page thinking that it was or something, bcoz of the absence of any girl character tags...
mili-o
#2
I so hate you right now... (not really!!)<br />
Why out of all these weekends this was the one i found this fic :S i'm in the middle of my exam week and i haven't been able to stop reading this fic: IT IS SO GOD DAMN AMAZING!!! so me failing both my swedish and my physics tests are definitely your fault...<br />
But anyways, jokes aside, i adore this story!! I decieded yo subscribe though it's already done to show my support (and to return to it when i need a pick-up). I also read the sequel already too but i wanted to comment here first so i could tell you my thoughts about this story :)<br />
I love how the characters have their distinct personalities and that everyone has a unique wit to them. Also you kept it interesting throughout the story which is impressive thinking how long it turned out. I love the ending and the idea for the sequel was great!! Now i can continue with the characters as the story goes on ^3^<br />
so take this über long comment as an apology for not finding this story earlier. I shall now go and subscribe to your other story as well :D
eugegenius #3
Second time I'm reading this FF and I STILL love it(: HAHAHA best.story.ever^^
ryzeliena #4
YAYAYAY! I finished it one shot!<br />
I love this omg :>
fyekay918 #5
I can't stop reading its so addicting. omg! I really love it! You're so good at writing ;)
PandaBo09 #6
I ADORE YOUR SOTORIES!!!!!!!!!!I started reading them last night at 10.30 and didn't stop till i realised i had read until 12.30 and was at chapeter 19. Now I am back from school and couldn't help but see how the stoy goes on!!! You are an amazing writer, and to be very honest, if I ever becom a producer, I'd turn this into a drama series (if you would allow it :), but it'll take me years to get there. but all in all, you've done great!! :DD
cindykpop
#7
This is a great story. <br />
I get to read it recommended by Mzjulieb2uty. <br />
Keke! Chansung is so caring and sweet.<br />
Although she did not end up with chansung,<br />
I still love this story.<br />
I like how Taec and her gone through so much <br />
and overcomed any difficult situations keke!<br />
They're so loving til the end.<br />
The ending was awesome!<br />
FIGHTING! ♥
yellowbee #8
/celebrates<br />
yayyyy thanks for all the lovely comments! I'm glad you all enjoyed reading this story. I'm thinking of starting a new one soon.... but I might not be able to b/c I have to much work to do ;;______;;;<br />
anyways. I'm still working on another one with Bekah, Chansung and Nichkhun so if you're into that sort of thing, go and check it out!
dr_okbeast
#9
I love this fic from the very beginning till the very end..<br />
:D I LOVE HOW IT ENDS!! really..<br />
T.T (shed tears of joy)<br />
Thanks for this stunning story..<br />
:D