Final author's note

9/16

Helloooooooooo!

Thank you to everyone who made it to the end of this fic!! Y'all are the best for sticking to the end of Kiara's story. The last chapters were a bit rushed (my apologies), but it's because I've been working on a sequel to 9/16.

As you guys could probably tell, in 9/16 I've included a lot on Kiara's past, specifically on her cousin, Julie. If you thought those parts were nonessential to the plot, you were right lol. Hopefully the snippets on Julie's past hyped you guys up for her new fic "It's True, That I Love You". I started writing this sequel around last September, so it's been hard focusing on 9/16 at the same time. Of course, now I can dedicate all updates to Julie's fic so updates should be faster if I'm not being lazy lol.

So Julie is someone entirely different than Kiara. Towards the end of 9/16, we see Kiara trying to become more like the Julie she remembered from her childhood. But after Julie was taken to the detention center while they were kids, she was able to embrace the parts of herself she never revealed to anyone. Because Julie had wanted to be a role model sister for Kiara, she kept a lot of her personal thoughts hidden. So if she was never the kind hearted, sweet friend Kiara remembered, who is she? 

 

Here's a quick scene from the sequel:

 

 

The redhead was stunned, as if I'd just slapped him across the face. I hope I didn't go too far, instantly regretting my choice of words. Just as I was about to apologize, he regained his senses before shooting back just as ferociously.

"You seem to be alright if you can speak to your seniors so rudely. I'm calling security."

"Chanyeol ssi, please forgive my friend. She seriously didn't mean it. Her blood loss effects her mood swings-"

I don't catch the rest of Hyerin's sentence. The last thing I see is the grey linoleum floor, blurry beneath me.

 

 

DUN DUN DUN. Read the sequel to find out what happensXD

First chapter is up!

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1209465/it-s-true-that-i-love-you-sequel-to-9-16-originalcharacter-exo-chanyeol-bts-idolxoc-jungkook-monstax 

  

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stephanie1138 #1
Chapter 39: At first, I'm actually dissapointed that there's not much romance going on in this story. But then, I started to think that it's not going to be good if this story is packed with romance. You focused more on telling the struggle of overcoming mental illness so it's not fitting for romance suddenly barge into this story.
I like it when you reveal that Johnny isn't real. It's been a long time since a story ever made me baffled. I seriously didn't see it's coming. Usually, I can assume that there will be a plot twist but you manage to trick me into believing in Johnny existence. Kudos for that.
What I like about this story is about how you keeping it real. You never pushed romance between Taeyong and Kiara. I thought that Kiara is delusional when she said that she can see insincerity through Taeyong. What Taeyong did was toxic but it is real because chances it does happened in real world. Some people does betray and befriend others in order to gain benefit. Good job on that.
Overall, I think your story is good. I'm just not into how you write the timeline because it
keeps jumping from past story to present. It's not bad to do so but I try to write on the top of the chapter only so that readers can differentiate which is past and present. Or you can add date of the incident so we knows is it the past or present. One character that didn't appeal to me is Julie. Sure she impacted Kiara in a good way (though Julie also has her own struggle) but I don't think that she plays a big role. Her existence makes me wonder that wether she'll appear in the story or not but it turns out it's the later. You can include her in the story but don't dedicate a whole chapter for her because it's not really important.
By the way, I'm not wanting to be harsh. It's just my opinion on the story. I still like it though. I'll check your other stories as well.
UrikoSakura #2
Chapter 13: Hmm
thechristine_06 #3
Chapter 39: Help ㅠ.ㅠ
deathnoot #4
Chapter 39: Awwww ☺ that was a really great way to close the story. This was an actual rollercoaster to read and I very much enjoyed it
Yeajin #5
Chapter 39: ...I have nothing to say....I'm so lost..-ish..I guess....I don't know anymore.
deathnoot #6
Chapter 38: I SAW THE CHAPTER TITLE AND I WAS SO SHOOK AND THEN I READ THE CHAPTER AND I DIED OML WHY
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