Ring

100 Prompts (The Showdown sequel...kinda)

I wrote this one a while ago - I think it's cute.

 

 

 

#91 – Ring

 

 

Kibum smiled at the obviously nervous man, trying to alleviate some of the stress that the other was clearly feeling.

 

“Hello David.” He shook the tall man’s hand and they started walking towards the parking lot.

 

Kibum was in America, preparing to walk Jinae through some of the designs that he had come up with for her wedding dress and take some measurements.  She had some extra work tonight though and needed to stay late so David had offered to pick up his future father-in-law at the airport. 

 

Kibum almost wanted to snicker at the man’s tense shoulders as he stiffly drove down the streets of Jinae’s neighborhood.

 

They were caught in some heavy traffic leaving the airport though, so by the time they actually made it to Jinae’s, the woman had already beaten them home. 

 

“Appa!” She had squealed, throwing her arms around the man tightly.  “You made it!”

 

“Of course I did Angel!” Kibum whispered back.

 

“Your Pops wanted to come too…but with his retirement and everything…” Kibum trailed off, stepping back and taking in the image of daughter.

 

“Yeah, I know, the AP wants to milk him for every story he’s worth while they’ve still got him.”  Jinae smiled.  She had been proud of her father when he had finally decided to leave journalism behind him.  In his early forties he had started writing fiction novels in his spare time, a couple of pages a week or snippets scribbled onto napkins that he had managed to find at one of the billions of events he attended for his children.  He had reached some mild acclaim, all of it of course, under a pen name – he would never want anyone to buy his books solely because he was the author.  But now he was leaving behind the world of journalism and the career that he had held ever since he graduated from university, and he was going to focus his attention on writing his books. 

 

“Thank God he only has another few weeks,” Kibum sighed, “maybe I’ll get to see him for longer than a few minutes a day then!” he joked. 

 

*****

 

Over the next few days, Kibum and Jinae poured over drawings and fabrics, Kibum continually tweaking designs and concepts. 

 

There was one thing that Kibum knew though, no matter what dress he put his little girl in, she would be beautiful on that day.  Just seeing her shine now, talking about the wedding, gushing over David’s proposal, he could already see that it would be a grand affair that day, and she would be the beaming centerpiece.

 

“So, we’re nixing the train on this one, but leaving the veil long?” Kibum double checked.  Right now they were tweaking all of his designs, and he would re-draw them all tonight and build up concept models on his computer for her to look at to narrow down her choice. 

 

“Yeah, sounds good!”  Jinae poured over the sketches like they were the Bible, unable to tear her eyes away. 

 

*****

 

Kibum sighed; David had to get over this awkwardness around him, especially if he wanted to become a true part of Jinae’s family. 

 

“For the millionth time,” Kibum joked lightly, “Just call me Kibum, or Key, but Mr. Kim is too formal, not when you’re going to be my son-in-law in less than a year.”

 

The lanky man sputtered for a moment before stuttering, “R-r-right…right…”

 

Kibum rolled his eyes.  “So, Jinae tells me that you are in charge of the rings.  They’re going to be a surprise to her on the day of your wedding…” Kibum trailed off.

 

He had thought that it would be an easy enough topic to discuss in the car as the man drove him back to the airport to head back home and get started on the design that Jinae had finally decided on.

 

He had thought it would be okay, but the man’s grimace when Kibum brought up rings was not something that he could just let pass.

 

“What?” He asked, suddenly concerned.  “What’s wrong with the rings?”

 

David sighed, “I was going to use my grandmother’s wedding ring.  It’s supposed to go to the eldest granddaughter, but we’re all boys in my family, so we all decided that whoever was the first one to get married, they would get to have the ring to give to their wife.”

 

“You were going to…what happened?”

 

“When I went to get it out of the curio, I noticed that the center stone was missing.”  He heaved another sigh, “It must have been damaged somewhere along the way and now I can’t find the stone to have it reset.  It was a beautiful sapphire…my grandmother’s birthstone.”

 

Kibum thought for a while, “A sapphire huh?”

 

“Yup, it was beautiful too…”  David ducked his head for a moment, “I can’t tell my family that it’s broken, and I can’t afford to buy a new stone, it’s going to be scrimping just to pull the wedding together...” David took one look at Kibum and spoke up again before the older man could even open his mouth, “You are not paying for the wedding.  Jinae and I will figure something out.”

 

Kibum nodded, “That’s all well and good, but what about the ring now?  What do you tell your family?” 

 

David sighed once more, “I was supposed to take care of it.  When I don’t give it to Jinae at the wedding they’re all going to know that something is wrong…” he groaned.  “They’ll either figure I broke it or lost it, which makes them made at me, or that Jinae didn’t like it, which makes them think that she is snotty, but I know she’s not!” He added with a rush, as though suddenly remembering that he had one of Jinae’s fathers in the car.  “I just don’t know how I’ll take the disappointment on their faces when I have to tell them what happened…”

 

“How big is the setting?” Kibum asked casually.

 

“Not too big, my grandfather couldn’t afford anything like that when he was getting the ring.” He brought the car to a stop as traffic stalled on the freeway.  “Here,” he reached over and popped the glove compartment and pulled out a small manila envelope and handed it to Kibum, “The ring is in there, you can see for yourself.”

 

Kibum gently opened the flap and tilted the envelope, causing the ring to tumble out into his awaiting palm.  It was a thin silver band, with two small diamonds sitting on either side of an empty gap.

 

“And that’s where the sapphire was?” He asked, lighting running his finger along the ring, allowing it to ghost over the missing stone. 

 

“Yeah, I don’t even know when the stone would have been lost.” David’s voice was pained.  Not only could he not carry on the wishes of his grandmother, but her most important possession was damaged and seemingly unfixable.

 

“You know, Taemin gave me a ring once, an engagement ring, it had diamonds and sapphires embedded into the band…”

 

“Sounds beautiful,” David said when Kibum let the silence drag on too long.

 

“It was. It was so incredibly beautiful.”  He snorted lightly, “Too bad I destroyed it though.”

 

David quirked his head and look at his future father-in-law, “Destroyed it?  How?”

 

“I was working at the design firm then.  I was in the work room, pressing a dress and it slipped off of my hand and got crushed under the metal.”

 

Kibum reached under his shirt and pulled out a thin silver chain, and cupped the lone blue sapphire stone that grace it. 

 

“This sapphire was the only bit of it to survive.”

 

Kibum suddenly tugged at the necklace, breaking it off his neck and snapping the chain. 

 

He ignored the startled David and gently laid the stone in the empty setting and smiled ruefully.  “Perfect fit.” He said simply.

 

He placed the ring and the necklace into the envelope before closing it up and placing it back in the glove box.

 

“You go and get that ring fixed now, Jinae will love it.”

 

“But..sir…I can’t take your sapphire, it was a gift from your husband…”

 

Kibum rolled his eyes.  “First – ‘sir’ is even worse than ‘Mr. Kim.’ Cut that out!” He mock snapped at the man.  “Second, this sapphire was a gift from my husband, the same way that the missing one was a gift from your grandmother’s husband.  Consider it another way of passing down your family heritage through time.  The pasts of both of our families can come together in this one ring, for the future of your family.  No one needs to know that anything happened to the ring.”

 

“But…” David wanted to protest some more but couldn’t come up with a good excuse.

 

Kibum reached over and patted one of David’s hands where they sat on the steering wheel.  “I help out my children,” Kibum said, “just like any parent, and you’re going to be my son soon enough…”

 

They road in a comfortable silence the rest of the way to their airport, and Kibum thought that David’s shoulders might have been just a little less tense than they usually were around him. 

 

*****

 

Many months later Kibum and David shared a secret smile as Jinae showed off her ring at the wedding reception. 

 

“It was his grandmother’s ring, isn’t it spectacular?”

 

“It’s the most beautiful ring I’ve ever seen,” he had told his daughter with complete sincerity. 

 

“It reminds me of that necklace that you used to wear.  Where is it?  I haven’t seen it in a while…”

 

“Oh,” Kibum said startled as Teamin tried to laugh silently next to him, having been told about the whole scenario after Kibum returned home.  “Um, it broke…and I kind of lost the stone…”

 

“Oh, that’s terrible,” Jinae looked sad for him.

 

“It’s alright,” Taemin stepped in, “I’m sure, someone else is enjoying it now.”

 

And Jinae was guided off to greet some more of their guests, while Taemin just laughed at his husband and swirled him off to the dance floor. 

 

 

 

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simneesee #1
Chapter 100: I loved everything about this verse, and I cried all through chapter 100. You wrote so very well! Great job!
Krease99
#2
Chapter 100: Omg this was so beautiful. All those moments they had. The children, the famil, everything. I was so touched. I can't describe it with words :')
But this last chapter was really sad. I cried a river when I read that they died and all Kibum's memories after Taemin died. So beautiful and sad T^T <3
marchblossom15 #3
Chapter 17: I can honestly say that, as a California born and raised account holder, I hav never heard the phrase eat crow. But then again, we probably use more explicate words in replace of crow, so I wouldn't know.
Iloveexo985530
#4
Wow, what a hectic story!! :)
komateiru #5
Chapter 100: omg i don't even know what to say, i finished reading the showdown a couple of months ago aswell, and now i've just finished reading your 100 prompts, and i'm speechless. i'm crying a lot but I think im happy and you honestly could not have ended this in a better way than you did. you wrote in such a way that i became attached to the characters and i was worried that when i finished reading it i would feel like a piece of me was missing, but this is not the case as the final chapter gave a form of closure i think, and instead i feel like a part of me is complete? idk, thanks a lot for writing this, it really has touched my life and i'm sure i'll re-read it and encourage others to read it even months from now. i've been reading a couple of chapters every night before bed for a couple of months and it's been a wonderful experience, i can't really get across how much i loved this story and these characters so i hope this is somewhat a satisfying comment haha, but again, thankyou,you did a great job!
-megan x
SHINee_sangtae
#6
Chapter 100: Omg.... I loved these prompts.... They were awesome, yes it took me a while to read them but, it gave me something to do.... Infact i especially love this one because 'the showdown' was the very first fan-fiction i read. You guys are great writers and you did a great job on this one. Right now because i just finished reading 'magic' (i think thats the last one)... I feel like i have lost something in my life , its how i usually feel after reading a long series of books... I really think that this is an awesome story .... Keep going and remember to have fun in your life because happiness makes you live longer :D
Xiaoxingxiaoxing
#7
Chapter 100: Hey Sammery.
You know I've been here from the Showdown, so this probably means as much to you as does to me. This story has given me strength, so much strength to face with changes I would never have been able to face if I had never read this story. Its funny how this fanfic (that isn't real and I have to keep reminding myself its just a story) I stumbled on one fine day changed the lives of my friends and I.
I am not making any sense as I am crying too hard. Reading this last chapter gave me closure I guess, I had to stop reading so many timea as my tears made it hard to see the words. I have dutifully saved every chapter of this in my hard disk and will reread this when I need the moral support. Thank you Sammery. Thank you Matt. Thank you Matt's boyfriend.
I'm glad I was here from the start to the end. I hope one day I will get the chance to meet you, or send you guys a huge long ___ email with everything I want to say but its too private to post as a comment or a huge christmas card to wish you guys well.
The story was amazing. Thank you once again. You changed lives, may God bless you <3

cheers,
gdkeytopbias
gothiscinsan #8
Chapter 100: ...its over....the story...its finished...author-nim...you made me cr and trust me I have never cried for a story in all my life...this story has been my life for the time if been reading this....and now its finished. When I first started reading the 100th chapter, I already started tearing. And then when you wrote Key's letter...the tears just started flowing...non-stop...your a good author Sammery. I love this story and I will always cherish this ^^ 사랑해요 저자님 <3 ...아이씨!!! 미칠 것 같아요 ㅠㅠ 감사합니다 저자님~
Tae-myeverything
#9
I just... Can't believe this is over. This story, these characters... You, have become part of our, the readers', life. You have reached so many hearts and, even if I have no friends that went through the same as Matt or Taemin or Key, though they did go through the discrimination of being... Different, it is just... It's amazing... I just feel that this is part of me now...
I never thought I could be so moved by a story, much less by a fan fiction, and seeing this wonderful story end, it makes me sad. I had to pause numerous time to wipe my tears away, or simply, to cry more and more and let all the happiness but at the same time, all the sadness, flow out of me. Somehow, I feel relieved, relieved to know that, even if it is corny or predictable, as Matt said, they were happy. They ARE happy. They're not fictional character anymore, they're so much more than that, and you, that were able to create that, I just want to thank you... Thank you wholeheartedly because of what you've done, what you've created, and what you've made us realize. You have grown as a writer, but I have grown as well, grown as a person... Thanks to you :)

Goodbye Taemin, goodbye Key, goodbye Minho, Jinky, Jonghyun... Goodbye The Showdown, goodbye 100 prompts... You were... Simply... Perfect.

And Sammery... Kamsahmnida... :)