Stars

100 Prompts (The Showdown sequel...kinda)

Post 2/4 tonight.

 

This one is short.  Sorry, it’s more of a drabble than a one-shot, and it’s the second drabble-like one in a row, but I hope you enjoy it none the less.

 

 

 

#70 – Stars

 

 

 

“This is perfect…” Kibum whispered, his eye enraptured by the sight of thousands of stars in the skies overhead. 

 

Both of them being from big cities, they never really saw stars growing up.  The lights of the city would flood the skies at night, making it impossible to see any stars in the inky black sky. 

 

But Taemin, being the romantic that he was, had arranged a trip for them to Geoje Island off the Southern coast of Korea.  It wasn’t as big as Juju, which also meant that it wasn’t as crowded with tourists.  It was far easier for the couple to just slip into the stream of people and actually be able to relax for a while. 

 

Taemin however, was entirely focused on Kibum.  Watching the stars dance in his lovers eyes, and seeing the light reflect off of pale skin and making it practically glow.

 

“Completely perfect.” He agreed. 

 

Taemin saw Kibum’s hand twitch and stifled his laughter. 

 

He was the artist.  Of course he would want to sketch or paint or somehow manage to translate the beautiful expanses of the heavens onto his canvas. 

 

He silently passed over his interview pad from his back pocket, complete with a little half-pencil with a worn down eraser on one end. 

 

Without a word, Kibum s his hands out to grab the offered supplies and he was off and sketching, letting the inspiration of this beautiful moment flow through him and waiting to see just what the outcome would be.

 

He had sat up and was now gazing out over the horizon, occasionally glancing down to make sure that his lines were turning out right, but mostly keeping his eyes trained on the magnificent sky above. 

 

Taemin curled around Kibum’s back and wrapped his arms around the man’s waist, a huge smile tugging at the corners of his face as he watched Kibum’s face alternate between awe and concentration.  He thought it was so cute that the tip of Kibum’s tongue stuck out between the man’s pink lips as he focused so intently on the task before him. 

 

Some people would be offended if their lover would rather do something else while they were supposed to be spending quality time together.  Some people would be pissed that something as romantic as this moment was being spent with one hunched over a small pad of paper, paying no attention to the person at their side who had gone through a lot of effort to bring all of this to pass in the first place.

 

But honestly, Taemin thought that as long as he could watch Kibum as the man watched and drew his stars, he was okay with that.

 

With a smile, he propped his chin on Kibum’s thigh, glancing as seemingly random lines were starting to coalesce into something far more substantial.

 

Kibum leaned down quickly and laid a gentle kiss to Taemin’s head.

 

“I’ll be done in a minute.” He promised.

 

“Take your time,” Taemin mumbled, twisting around so that he was laying down next to the artist, able to see him face to face, “The stars aren’t going anywhere, and neither am I.”

 

Kibum smiled a gentle smile, the kind only Taemin ever saw, and suddenly the stars that he was seeing had absolutely nothing to do with the orbs floating in the sky.

 

 

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simneesee #1
Chapter 100: I loved everything about this verse, and I cried all through chapter 100. You wrote so very well! Great job!
Krease99
#2
Chapter 100: Omg this was so beautiful. All those moments they had. The children, the famil, everything. I was so touched. I can't describe it with words :')
But this last chapter was really sad. I cried a river when I read that they died and all Kibum's memories after Taemin died. So beautiful and sad T^T <3
marchblossom15 #3
Chapter 17: I can honestly say that, as a California born and raised account holder, I hav never heard the phrase eat crow. But then again, we probably use more explicate words in replace of crow, so I wouldn't know.
Iloveexo985530
#4
Wow, what a hectic story!! :)
komateiru #5
Chapter 100: omg i don't even know what to say, i finished reading the showdown a couple of months ago aswell, and now i've just finished reading your 100 prompts, and i'm speechless. i'm crying a lot but I think im happy and you honestly could not have ended this in a better way than you did. you wrote in such a way that i became attached to the characters and i was worried that when i finished reading it i would feel like a piece of me was missing, but this is not the case as the final chapter gave a form of closure i think, and instead i feel like a part of me is complete? idk, thanks a lot for writing this, it really has touched my life and i'm sure i'll re-read it and encourage others to read it even months from now. i've been reading a couple of chapters every night before bed for a couple of months and it's been a wonderful experience, i can't really get across how much i loved this story and these characters so i hope this is somewhat a satisfying comment haha, but again, thankyou,you did a great job!
-megan x
SHINee_sangtae
#6
Chapter 100: Omg.... I loved these prompts.... They were awesome, yes it took me a while to read them but, it gave me something to do.... Infact i especially love this one because 'the showdown' was the very first fan-fiction i read. You guys are great writers and you did a great job on this one. Right now because i just finished reading 'magic' (i think thats the last one)... I feel like i have lost something in my life , its how i usually feel after reading a long series of books... I really think that this is an awesome story .... Keep going and remember to have fun in your life because happiness makes you live longer :D
Xiaoxingxiaoxing
#7
Chapter 100: Hey Sammery.
You know I've been here from the Showdown, so this probably means as much to you as does to me. This story has given me strength, so much strength to face with changes I would never have been able to face if I had never read this story. Its funny how this fanfic (that isn't real and I have to keep reminding myself its just a story) I stumbled on one fine day changed the lives of my friends and I.
I am not making any sense as I am crying too hard. Reading this last chapter gave me closure I guess, I had to stop reading so many timea as my tears made it hard to see the words. I have dutifully saved every chapter of this in my hard disk and will reread this when I need the moral support. Thank you Sammery. Thank you Matt. Thank you Matt's boyfriend.
I'm glad I was here from the start to the end. I hope one day I will get the chance to meet you, or send you guys a huge long ___ email with everything I want to say but its too private to post as a comment or a huge christmas card to wish you guys well.
The story was amazing. Thank you once again. You changed lives, may God bless you <3

cheers,
gdkeytopbias
gothiscinsan #8
Chapter 100: ...its over....the story...its finished...author-nim...you made me cr and trust me I have never cried for a story in all my life...this story has been my life for the time if been reading this....and now its finished. When I first started reading the 100th chapter, I already started tearing. And then when you wrote Key's letter...the tears just started flowing...non-stop...your a good author Sammery. I love this story and I will always cherish this ^^ 사랑해요 저자님 <3 ...아이씨!!! 미칠 것 같아요 ㅠㅠ 감사합니다 저자님~
Tae-myeverything
#9
I just... Can't believe this is over. This story, these characters... You, have become part of our, the readers', life. You have reached so many hearts and, even if I have no friends that went through the same as Matt or Taemin or Key, though they did go through the discrimination of being... Different, it is just... It's amazing... I just feel that this is part of me now...
I never thought I could be so moved by a story, much less by a fan fiction, and seeing this wonderful story end, it makes me sad. I had to pause numerous time to wipe my tears away, or simply, to cry more and more and let all the happiness but at the same time, all the sadness, flow out of me. Somehow, I feel relieved, relieved to know that, even if it is corny or predictable, as Matt said, they were happy. They ARE happy. They're not fictional character anymore, they're so much more than that, and you, that were able to create that, I just want to thank you... Thank you wholeheartedly because of what you've done, what you've created, and what you've made us realize. You have grown as a writer, but I have grown as well, grown as a person... Thanks to you :)

Goodbye Taemin, goodbye Key, goodbye Minho, Jinky, Jonghyun... Goodbye The Showdown, goodbye 100 prompts... You were... Simply... Perfect.

And Sammery... Kamsahmnida... :)