23:08 - A Countdown to First Death [12:52am]

24 Hours

 

Chapter 7: 23:08 - A Countdown to First Death [12:52am]

Mir POV

How clever.

No one ever thinks to look up. Especially in a four cornered room such as this, small and plain, no signs of stairs or boxes or access to the ceiling. No. Particularly not if the only way to escape dying was to draw death close.  Let it embrace you, dance as its partner and then slip away at the last moment.

That was our only hope.

“Swim out?” mused G.O. Finally he spoke. “How certain are you that that’s the exit?”

I bit my lip. Truthfully the ‘door’ was barely distinguishable from the stone ceiling. The blue streaks only covered the wall. Forget about the floor and ceiling. Therefore, it was casted in shadows and even squinting, I couldn’t confirm that it was a door. But it had to be.

“It’s the only place we haven’t checked,” I reasoned.

G.O nodded, but I could tell doubt hadn’t left his mind. “We have no other choice.”

The water was halfway to our necks. We had no choice indeed.

It was a little too similar to those thriller movies where the hero stands on the edge of a cliff. There’s pumping music and tension in the air as the bad guy approaches and the hero takes a few steps backwards, scuffing stones and making them bounce down the long, long fall behind him. And then there’s the heart-pounding choice to jump or to surrender. And jumping is a gamble, a dangerous line between the possibility of dying and the chance of escaping and surviving – of winning everything or losing it all. But surrending is a coward's way out. And I will not be branded a coward. Never. 

“We swim,” I said, letting confidence flood into my voice.

“Alright Mir,” Seungho let a smile spread across his face. I was a little stunned at his expression. “I’ll trust you on this.”

My heart warmed.

And then turned pitch-cold. “Are you sure?” came Joon’s scathing response. “You’re dancing with death here.”

I turned to him, rising to the challenge. “Have you got any other ideas?” I raised an eyebrow. It didn’t look half as cool when one was half-submerged in water, but it did the trick.

I saw him hesitate, his eyes cast downwards and a bit lip. “Arasso,” he said resignedly. “It’s just…I…I don’t…swim well,” the last words came out in a mumble.

“What?” I waded closer and was surprised to find Joon shying away. “What’s wrong? I didn't hear what you said?”

Besides me I heard Thunder chuckle. “He said,” Thunder looked at me with an expression full of mirth. “That he can’t swim!”

Oh.

Joon turned to me, his eyes flaring angrily and his face bright red. “I can swim!” he protested. “I’m just…not…good…at it…” he deflated.

This had me laughing now as well. “Oh Joon, it’s okay,” I patted his shoulder. “I’ll be there for you. We’ll all get out okay?”

Joon still looked vaguely irritated at being found out, but he grudgingly nodded. “Arasso,” he muttered. And then the water was up to our chins and it time to swim.

 

Joon POV

Should i have told them?

The thought swirled in my mind, murderous as a serial killer. Tell them, don't tell them, tell them, don't tell them...

It wasn't that I couldn't swim. I mean I could. Not well, but i could paddle doggy-style. It was just that this time...

Tell them, risk your pride but not your life.

Don't tell them, it's not like your life is really in the balance, and you don't need to burden them..

I gritted my teeth as water swirled passed my leg and a sensation akin to fire branding my skin raked across it. Every movement, every muscle strain and bolts of pain would fire up the neurons, sending a signal to my brain to stop moving and to just sink into oblivion. Anything to get rid of this awful pain.

Come on Lee Joon! It's only a twisted ankle!

There was no need to tell anyone. I would get out of here. I would survive. 

The exit is right there, a shining light above. So close and yet so far.

I will survive. 

 

Mir POV

We were rising, painfully slowly but rising all the same. It was a struggle to keep our heads above the water and our cool. I cast a glance over my other team members, watching them carefully as Thunder treaded water, Seungho grasped at the walls and G.O lay on his back, watching the ceiling come closer. And Joon? Where was Joon?

I turned around, blinking as water splashed in my eyes. There he was. Something looked wrong, it was the wild look in his eyes and the fluttering of his chest. 

“Joon-“ I called out, but a voice interrupted my attention.

“There!” pointed Thunder. He was right – the exit. Inconspicuously hidden in the far right corner of the ceiling, it was painted the same shade as the stones. But upon touching it, I was certain it was made of wood.

G.O poked it with one probing hand. It rattled. He pushed harder. But it wasn't budging.

"Damn!" he swore. "It's heavier than it looks."

I swum over, trying to lend him my strength to. Bones, it really is heavy!

Water was rising fast, filling my mouth on more than one occasion and I spluttered. Then the water was past my nose and my eyes. It filled the room and we were out of time. 

 

Thunder POV

The room was flooded. Completely. But we weren't giving up yet. 

I swum over, joining my power to the fight against the door. I felt another body bump into me as another person joined the fray. Slowly but surely I could hear the door creak - give way. 

Come on! bubbles issued from my mouth as I snarled, a vent for my frustration. I am not going to die here!

The wooden planks groaned, and then-

BAM!

The doors flew open and water spurted upwaters like a spout and we were floundering blindly for the oxygen so close by. G.O was first out, his muscles straining against his spare cotton shirt as he pulled himself out. He didn't stop to rest. He turned around immediately, water flicking as his soaked hair spun and was helping Seungho out. and then both turned for me.

I was a little shocked at Seungho’s strength. Never would I have imagined the power in his slender build. He leaned forwards and I grasped his hand, all slick and slippery skin. G.O grabbed my other hand and then I too was out, spluttering like a literal fish out of water.

“Mir!” I yelled, turning around for my next team member. We were running against time.

“No!” he shook his head, dark hair plastered against his skull and wide eyes like a seal. “Get Joon first!”

I grinded my teeth but obliged and leaned towards him. Joon reached for it, desperation clear in his eyes, but suddenly the water raged and with a vicious tug,threw him against the side of the exit. Joon coughed and then i saw his eyes flicker.

"NO!" i yelled, lunging for him. But it was too late.

The water dragged him under and Joon vanished in a cloud of murky red. 

 

Joon POV

I think this must be how angels feel when are thrown from heaven. The light is so bright, so close and yet no matter how much I struggle, I cannot reach it. One hand thrown out towards it and yet further I fall.

“NO!” the words bubble out and I’m breathing water in, the murky, filthy liquid filling my throat and my lungs and veins and I am drowning inside and out. I strain, I struggle, I kick, I flail. I will not die here! I will-

A violent wave rushes past, the current throwing me to one side. My arms fly out, a strange mockery of puppetry underwater. I suppose to the audience I must look like I’m dancing. How ironic. My head hits the wall hard and my brain ceases to work properly.

The pain in my leg subsides. Oh good…wait…that’s not good. I’m losing the ability to feel. Crash, and I’m smacking into another wall, a tiny toy in a whirlpool of death and destruction. It’s a small child’s game where they do not know their own strength and the poor, powerless toy is thrown back into the toy box, broken and splintered.  Thud, and I hit another corner. This room is far too small, far too constrained. I’m battered and bruised.

Slowly, my body is shutting down, breaking off. The world grows dark as the bottom of a lake, dirt and silt covering me like a shroud covering the dead. In its slimy embrace, I am being drawn downwards.

As my body hits the floor, my last words are morbid to say the least. My eyes close and I can think is: who would’ve guessed that I would be the first of the five to die?

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annalulz
#1
I'm just rereading this again, hoping that one day you'll decide to update again *cries forever*
annalulz
#2
Chapter 65: I'm screaming omg Fia why why whyyyyy

Bye Mir you lived well. I have the feeling this isn't the last we'll see of him.... we still have the mystery of the coliseum left to puzzle the pieces together, idk why I think they're just appearing in the real world, without the government interfering with the deaths, maybe that's the path they take....

what on Earth is Sanghyun doing??? he doesn't seem completely evil but.... hmmmmm

I hope you can update after your trip, good luck and have fun ^_^
yumzibabe
#3
OMG! Another update!

I have to admit, I'm really behind on my reading but I will catch up!
School's been crazy busy so I haven't been spending much time on Aff but it's nice seeing your updates.
As busy as I am, I get super excited every time there's an update alert as well as the spoilers I'm getting from yours and annalulz's convo haha.

KEEP IT UP FIA! I'm still here and will be back SOON! :)
annalulz
#4
Chapter 64: SO YOU'RE SAYING THE WHITE SUIT JOON MET WHILE IN JAIL WAS SEUNGHO /SCREAMS

but shouldn't Joon have remembered Seungho was the white suit when he got his memories back? or is this one of those 'oops I have to go fix this later' moments?

Holy shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii-----

I knew it (again) ahahaha. I admit my wish to have Thunder be the wolf was my own biased-ness and wanting him to be bad, but I'm so happy I was right asjdashdialshd

Did he really kill Mir tho? I mean, if they all technically have bodies in the real world, Mir isn't really dead, his data is just lost somewhere right? Unless... dying in the Coliseum truly kills you, but nooooo okay, I don't want Mir dead, bring him back, omg don't let Thunder kill Seungho where is my SeungDoong ansdhadighasda I'm screaming.

Mastermind Doong is so evil TT__TT

BUT WAAAAIIIITTTTTT... why kill them all if he needs them? I mean what's the point of gathering everyone in these Games only to kill them all later? they obviously have something he needs, but wouldn't it be better to have them alive for that? Or does this has something to do with the real purpose of the Coliseum?

WHAT IS THE COLISEUM????
annalulz
#5
Chapter 63: FIA OMG WELCOME BACK I MISSED YOU I MISSED THIS FIC JESUS CHRIST I'M GONNA CRY XD

I want to give a full insight comment but I'm just flailing around from excitement and I don't know what to say. I need to tie this in in my head with the rest of the story first so I'll do that later XD

but omg can I say I KNEW IT even when you weren't sure yourself RM was Rain? I remember you telling me that but maybe I'm wrong. Anyway...

I KNEWWWWW IIIIIITTTT

and I think I was right about Doongie too *insert wolf howl here* hahahaha

but if this is going where I think this is going, the Mastermind behind everything is Sanghyun and I'm feeling his super awesome plan has back-fired on him, so the question remains who is the wolf? who is the ringmaster?

And what in the name of Loki is The Coliseum? there is more to it isn't there? and what are ll these other things Sanghyun knows about the Digiworld. (yeah I'm still calling it that XD)

I was gonna start kicking you about this chapter update but I forgot. But don't worry I'll be kicking you soon for the next one. I am not letting you take a million years for the next update at this point in the game :3
innocent-bystander #6
Chapter 62: The hacking was so intense...
annalulz
#7
Chapter 62: OKAY OHMYGOD WHAT JUST HAPPENED

You updated *cries tears of joy*

First of all, what? Second of all WHAT? Third of all WHAAAATTTT'????!!!

I'm glad Sanghyun could find both his sisters, but damn poor Durami, I honestly hope she can get herself a physical body, but, in the eventual case they go back into the real world, she won't be able to go back :(

And, wow, I wasn't expecting the Christmas Program/Virus to be THAT, and Mir god, he could have killed everyone o.O

Is this how Seungho ended up joining the Ringmaster? I need to check up because I'm really lost on the timeline xD (I will have to reread this again) but by this point, Joon and G.O have already been recruited by the RM? I thought maybe Durami, Sanghyun and Dara could have come up with the Carnival Games and maybe even that Durami was the RM... I still have my suspicions about her but I don't think Dara and Thunder would come up with the games, then again, I don't think Durami would purposefully torture her own brother with the games, so yeah, I'm probably pretty off with that theory... or am I?

I'm glad the Park Siblings could modify the code before Mir killed everyone, but I do have to wonder about his reaction when he sees what happened. I still want Joon and G.O back, give me back my babos TT__TT

Anywayssss, my big question right now is HOW THE HELL DID MIR SEUNGHO AND THUNDER JOINED THE RM? Who is the RM? (sorry for capsing but I'm excited haha, please don't take 1234567890 months to update again ;-;) I did like that little moment where their paths kinda sorta crossed, and ooh Thunder sort of knows who Mir is. Oh wait, this is bad, this is bad bad bad. What if Thunder feels some sort of resentment towards Mir for coding the Xmas program and almost killing his sisters? asjdghasjjasdalsd
annalulz
#8
Chapter 61: okay, omg, I'm dead. Finally a bit of Thunder xD

this part "His body reacted as it
should in times of stress, his
brain sending signals to produce
norepinephrine and cortisol. His
heart rate increased, his
breathing quickened. His eyes
dilated and he could feel his
skin flush" made me feel like I was watching Criminal Minds, or Sherlock haha.

I imagined that the story of the real world would be like that, te pollution and all, but wow, Sanghyun's backstory is so heartbreaking. Are they clones or the product of female and male DNA? (I might be asking too indepth questions for your unplotted backstory sorry xP) but wow, Mir and Doong are sort of crossing paths. And, was that the RM meeting Mir?

The Cryocells remind me if the recuperation chambers in DBZ xD.

And that bit about Dara, that does give hope for Joon and G.O I think. When you told me there were deaths I thought it would be obe of the boys. I guess Dara's death is going to be Sanghyun's bigest motivator, but he only has 24 days, so I guess the games have to happen before those days are over, unless there's no hope for her?

There was something about the timeline of how they were recruited by the RM but I forgot the thought while watching Friends ;-;

I hope you can give us a faster update, gah the MBLAQ tag is dead *cries*