REWIND 9

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Chapter 26: REWIND <<<<<<<<<[--:--am]

Four years later…

“LEE CHANGSUN! JUNG BYUNGHEE!”  a girl yelled as she stuck her head out of the backdoor to a worn down house. It was a faded color of grey, yet another standard house in the row of monotonous buildings. Everything in this world was so grey. Color had been leeched out of it since long ago. “YOU TWO GET BACK HERE! AND BYUNGHEE, FINISH YOUR CHORES!”

“Noooope,” Byunghee turned around to stick his tongue out and blow a mehrong to his noona. She fumed but stopped short of the courtyard, knowing she would never catch up to her little brother and his equally mischievous friend, both of which knew the alleys and shortcuts of the mid-levels like the back of their hands.

“Aish,” she groaned and turned around. She would have to do his chores now. No doubt his plan from the very beginning. She gave a small smile, happy her brother was able to smile despite the hardships they faced every day. Having a friend was invaluable in places like this and times like these. She shook her head, picked up her broomstick and went back into the house to do her little brother’s chores.

***

“Haha!” Byunghee chortled and slapped high fives with Changsun. “She fell for it!” he said with glee.

“Of course!” Changsun grinned. “I came up with the plan.”

“Good thinking!” Byunghee bumped shoulders with Changsun. “My parents wouldn’t have let me out elsewise.”

Changsun winked back at him. “You can always rely on me! Oh and…that was your sister, huh?” a dreamy gaze came into his eyes.

“Ewww!” Byunghee leaned away from him. “Not my sister!”

“Why not?” Changsun rolled his eyes. “She’s pretty.”

“Dude, that’s gross.” Byunghee stuck out his tongue. “Don’t go too near to her. You might get cooties.”

“Don’t be silly Byunghee,” Changsun chided. “That’s just a stupid rumor. Sides, we’re twelve. Aren’t you interested in girls yet?”

Byunghee shook his head violently. “Nope.  And proud of it.”

Changsun scoffed.

“Let’s shut up about that okay?” Byunghee pleaded. Changsun gave in with a sigh and when he did, Byunghee beamed.  “So Changsun," he tilted his head towards his best friend, "What shall we do today?”

***

A further four years later…

“Hi umma!”  Byunghee grinned, sweaty and tired from his excursion with Changsun. They had been playing on the docks again – their new hideout.

“Byunghee,” his mother bent down and kiss his cheek. “Go have a shower. We’ll have dinner as soon as your father gets home.”

Byunghee nodded and hummed in agreement. Dinner was never really anything special, usually hard rice and potatoes and if he was lucky, meat. But today was the day his dad got home! His dad had been away for work so often that his returns were sporadic – at best once or twice every two weeks. Both he and his two older sisters were looking forwards to it immensely. And at age eighteen, he would need to think about a stable job in future. He was looking forwards to working with his father to provide for his family. The thought had him grinning as he scrubbed the dirt away. Even the cold shower couldn’t dampen his mood.

He was changed and in his small bedroom before he knew it. It was barely bigger than a closet – because it was a closet – but it meant he didn’t have to share with his sisters. And privacy was a good enough cost to pay for the small size.

“Byunghee!” he heard his sister knock on his cupboard. “Come help lay the table.”

“Coming!”

He rattled into the other room at the speed of light. As he past his sisters, they ruffled his head.

“Byunghee,” his mother smiled at his appearance. “Can you take these?” she offered him some worn out chopsticks. He took them and turned back for the small table that at night they to its side and leaned against the wall so that their parents could sleep in the center.

He was putting down the first of the chopsticks – white, his mother’s favorite – when the doors slammed opened so violently he was sure they would crack. Nothing in this house was built to last after all.

Byunghee’s eyes flew to the door.

In poured four men in dark black suits and helmets that covered the upper half of their faces. “Everyone! Stay still! Do not speak unless spoken to!” they ordered and were obeyed. Their silver guns provided sufficient incentive. But their sharp tone startled Byunghee who dropped the chopsticks. It clattered to the floor, the noise drawing the enforcers attention immediately. In an instant all weapons were trained on him. 

Byunghee froze.

“You, kid,” one enforcer barked once he realized the fourteen year old was no threat. “Where’s your father?”

“H-he…” Byunghee couldn’t string together more than one word. 

“Speak!” another enforcer smacked his weapon into Byunghee’s cheek and it sent him reeling, the cold steel hard and bruising his skin easily.

“Hey!” Byunghee’s older noona was striding up to the enforcer and shoving his cold weapon away. Then she was kneeling and pulling Byunghee up, one protective arm wrapped around him. “Don’t do that!” she snapped to the enforcer.

Byunghee was so very scared.

“What was that little girl?” the enforcer whom she had shoved away sneered. “You think you can talk back to me?!”

“Stop!” Byunghee’s mother flew in. “Please, she’s just a little girl.” Byunghee wanted to tell the enforcer that his sister was eighteen and most definitely not a little girl, but the look of desperation and the fold of his mother’s hands told him to wisely keep his mouth shut.

The enforcer looked like he wanted to say more, but another one stepped forwards. This one was in charge. It was clear from the air he exuded and from the way the other me parted to let him move forwards. “Ma’am,” he nodded curtly to her. “We just need to know where your husband is. Then we’ll be gone.”

“My husband?” Byunghee’s mother’s hands fluttered like small, white birds. “I-I don’t know where he is.”

“If you are lying,” the enforcer came in close and spoke in a serious voice. The kind that said you would be in so much trouble if they ever found out but also the kind that was not threat. A warning. Nothing more and nothing less. Purely factual. “Then we shall treat you as an obstacle to justice and deal with you accordingly.”

Byunghee back then could only shiver in fear. His mother however was fearless in her own way. “I’m sorry enforcers, but I really do not know. My husband is due back soon, but I do not know when. He has been gone for two weeks already.”

The enforcer stared at her, so dark was his visor that none of the Jung family could read his expression. Then after the longest of times, he stood down. Unlike his subordinates who corrupted their power and turned it into whips instead of the shields the enforcers were meant to be, this enforcer seemed to have retained a fragile sense of dignity and justice. “Very well,” he said and holstered his weapon. “But if we find out…” his mouth pressed into a thin line. Dignity and justice were two things easily rusted. 

“Understood,” Byunghee’s mother bowed. But Byunghee saw her eyes flash. What they meant though, he could not possibly comprehend. 

The head enforcer returned her gesture with a curt nod and then gave one sharp signal. The enforcers were gone as quickly as they had come. The minute they left, Byunghee’s mother collapsed to her knees, her strength ebbing away as the realization they had escaped so thinly shattered her momentary brovado. 

“Umma,” his sister went to her side, hugging her tightly. His mother’s hands clasped his sister close. “Is everything alright? What did they want with appa?”

His mother could only shake her head. “It’s nothing sweetie,” she said. “I’m sure it’s not as bad as we fear.”

But Byunghee could hear the tremble in his mother's voice and knew that she knew. And nothing scared him more in the world than the fact his mother was lying to her children to protect them all. 

***

It was later that night that Byunghee awoke to hushed sounds of an argument. He rubbed his eyes sleepily and cracked his closet door open. One person was his mother. And the other-

Father!

He wanted to cry with joy and jump out and into his father’s arms. But something about the crackle of tension in the air stopped him. 

“Yeobo,” his mother had despair in her words and eyes and hands. “Please. Stop. What if you get killed?!”

Killed?!

“Shhh, I’ll be fine.” His father was quick to reassure her. He placed one hand on top of hers and looked at her lovingly. “I’m nearly done with the work anyway. Code: Red will reveal so much. It could be a new start for us all! A new government! A new city! A new life!"

“Hush,” his mother scolded him. “What if there are spies around? What if there’s bugs we’ve never known about.”

“Sweetheart…” his father stared at her with despair. “I promise I swept the entire place when we moved in. There’s nothing. We’re safe.”

“Don’t’ be complacent,” she snapped. “The government is always developing new technology. It’s where all the money and labor goes to. Who knows what else they use to spy on people!” Then she turned back to Byunghee’s father. “Please dear. Stop it. Let someone new take over the project. I worry for you.”

“I know you do,” he tucked one stray curl behind her ear. “But I’m nearly done. This project is my baby. It could do so much for our people.”

“And our three children are your babies as well! Would you sacrifice them?”

“I’m not sacrificing them,” he shook his head sternly. “I’m creating a better future for them.”

“How?” There was only despair in his mother’s eyes.

“I can’t tell you more, I promise. Give me two more days and I’ll return for good. Okay?”

Byunghee noticed his mother looked like she wanted to protest but held it in. “Fine,” she said curtly. “Two days. After which, even if your project fails, I want you to return. Promise?”

“I promise,” Byunghee’s father grinned and hooked pinkies with her. “Well then,” he kissed her gently on the forehead. “I’ll be going.”

“You won’t even see the children?” his mother stared at him with loss in her eyes. 

“No,” then a smile bloomed. “After all, I’ll be seeing them all the time after two days time.”

Byunghee’s mother let out a short sigh. “I give up,” she threw her hands in the air. But there was a lift to her shoulders, a weight taken off. “Take care okay?”

“Always,” his father blew her a kiss and in a whisk of a wave and movement, was gone.

***

Two days later. 

Byunghee stared at their front door. In black was a notice taped to the battered wood. Byunghee swallowed hard, read and re-read the blocks and letters and tried to process what they said. Tried to convince himself that his eyes were funny and he was reading everything wrong. And that his father was not...

"Byunghee?" his mother called, wiping her hands on a teatowel as she came to see why her son had not brought in the mail yet. "What's holding you up-"

Byunghee spun around, a guilty look painted on his face. He tried to hide the notice, but it was too late. The towel dropped to the floor. There was a shake to his mother's mouth, a tremble in her shoulders. Her hand moved to as her eyes read the incriminating words. 

Jung Jongsu has been convicted of espionage, government theft, the release of highly classificed information and the attempt of overthrowing the government. 

 For this crime, he will be sentenced to death.

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annalulz
#1
I'm just rereading this again, hoping that one day you'll decide to update again *cries forever*
annalulz
#2
Chapter 65: I'm screaming omg Fia why why whyyyyy

Bye Mir you lived well. I have the feeling this isn't the last we'll see of him.... we still have the mystery of the coliseum left to puzzle the pieces together, idk why I think they're just appearing in the real world, without the government interfering with the deaths, maybe that's the path they take....

what on Earth is Sanghyun doing??? he doesn't seem completely evil but.... hmmmmm

I hope you can update after your trip, good luck and have fun ^_^
yumzibabe
#3
OMG! Another update!

I have to admit, I'm really behind on my reading but I will catch up!
School's been crazy busy so I haven't been spending much time on Aff but it's nice seeing your updates.
As busy as I am, I get super excited every time there's an update alert as well as the spoilers I'm getting from yours and annalulz's convo haha.

KEEP IT UP FIA! I'm still here and will be back SOON! :)
annalulz
#4
Chapter 64: SO YOU'RE SAYING THE WHITE SUIT JOON MET WHILE IN JAIL WAS SEUNGHO /SCREAMS

but shouldn't Joon have remembered Seungho was the white suit when he got his memories back? or is this one of those 'oops I have to go fix this later' moments?

Holy shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii-----

I knew it (again) ahahaha. I admit my wish to have Thunder be the wolf was my own biased-ness and wanting him to be bad, but I'm so happy I was right asjdashdialshd

Did he really kill Mir tho? I mean, if they all technically have bodies in the real world, Mir isn't really dead, his data is just lost somewhere right? Unless... dying in the Coliseum truly kills you, but nooooo okay, I don't want Mir dead, bring him back, omg don't let Thunder kill Seungho where is my SeungDoong ansdhadighasda I'm screaming.

Mastermind Doong is so evil TT__TT

BUT WAAAAIIIITTTTTT... why kill them all if he needs them? I mean what's the point of gathering everyone in these Games only to kill them all later? they obviously have something he needs, but wouldn't it be better to have them alive for that? Or does this has something to do with the real purpose of the Coliseum?

WHAT IS THE COLISEUM????
annalulz
#5
Chapter 63: FIA OMG WELCOME BACK I MISSED YOU I MISSED THIS FIC JESUS CHRIST I'M GONNA CRY XD

I want to give a full insight comment but I'm just flailing around from excitement and I don't know what to say. I need to tie this in in my head with the rest of the story first so I'll do that later XD

but omg can I say I KNEW IT even when you weren't sure yourself RM was Rain? I remember you telling me that but maybe I'm wrong. Anyway...

I KNEWWWWW IIIIIITTTT

and I think I was right about Doongie too *insert wolf howl here* hahahaha

but if this is going where I think this is going, the Mastermind behind everything is Sanghyun and I'm feeling his super awesome plan has back-fired on him, so the question remains who is the wolf? who is the ringmaster?

And what in the name of Loki is The Coliseum? there is more to it isn't there? and what are ll these other things Sanghyun knows about the Digiworld. (yeah I'm still calling it that XD)

I was gonna start kicking you about this chapter update but I forgot. But don't worry I'll be kicking you soon for the next one. I am not letting you take a million years for the next update at this point in the game :3
innocent-bystander #6
Chapter 62: The hacking was so intense...
annalulz
#7
Chapter 62: OKAY OHMYGOD WHAT JUST HAPPENED

You updated *cries tears of joy*

First of all, what? Second of all WHAT? Third of all WHAAAATTTT'????!!!

I'm glad Sanghyun could find both his sisters, but damn poor Durami, I honestly hope she can get herself a physical body, but, in the eventual case they go back into the real world, she won't be able to go back :(

And, wow, I wasn't expecting the Christmas Program/Virus to be THAT, and Mir god, he could have killed everyone o.O

Is this how Seungho ended up joining the Ringmaster? I need to check up because I'm really lost on the timeline xD (I will have to reread this again) but by this point, Joon and G.O have already been recruited by the RM? I thought maybe Durami, Sanghyun and Dara could have come up with the Carnival Games and maybe even that Durami was the RM... I still have my suspicions about her but I don't think Dara and Thunder would come up with the games, then again, I don't think Durami would purposefully torture her own brother with the games, so yeah, I'm probably pretty off with that theory... or am I?

I'm glad the Park Siblings could modify the code before Mir killed everyone, but I do have to wonder about his reaction when he sees what happened. I still want Joon and G.O back, give me back my babos TT__TT

Anywayssss, my big question right now is HOW THE HELL DID MIR SEUNGHO AND THUNDER JOINED THE RM? Who is the RM? (sorry for capsing but I'm excited haha, please don't take 1234567890 months to update again ;-;) I did like that little moment where their paths kinda sorta crossed, and ooh Thunder sort of knows who Mir is. Oh wait, this is bad, this is bad bad bad. What if Thunder feels some sort of resentment towards Mir for coding the Xmas program and almost killing his sisters? asjdghasjjasdalsd
annalulz
#8
Chapter 61: okay, omg, I'm dead. Finally a bit of Thunder xD

this part "His body reacted as it
should in times of stress, his
brain sending signals to produce
norepinephrine and cortisol. His
heart rate increased, his
breathing quickened. His eyes
dilated and he could feel his
skin flush" made me feel like I was watching Criminal Minds, or Sherlock haha.

I imagined that the story of the real world would be like that, te pollution and all, but wow, Sanghyun's backstory is so heartbreaking. Are they clones or the product of female and male DNA? (I might be asking too indepth questions for your unplotted backstory sorry xP) but wow, Mir and Doong are sort of crossing paths. And, was that the RM meeting Mir?

The Cryocells remind me if the recuperation chambers in DBZ xD.

And that bit about Dara, that does give hope for Joon and G.O I think. When you told me there were deaths I thought it would be obe of the boys. I guess Dara's death is going to be Sanghyun's bigest motivator, but he only has 24 days, so I guess the games have to happen before those days are over, unless there's no hope for her?

There was something about the timeline of how they were recruited by the RM but I forgot the thought while watching Friends ;-;

I hope you can give us a faster update, gah the MBLAQ tag is dead *cries*