13:12– A Countdown to Third Death [10:48am]

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Chapter 43:  13:12– A Countdown to Third Death [10:48am]

Seungho POV

What had Mir just done?

From my bird-eyes view, I had seen everything. Mir had pulled me up, and I had twisted around with the painful realization that Mir was falling and the thought of him splattered on the ground, torn to chunks by the leopards, a slowly stilling carcass, all of it slugged me in the gut like a two ton sack of sand. I had reached out subconsciously, fully well knowing I could do nothing yet my body wanted to argue elsewise, and Mir had done the same, reaching out towards the ground and squeezing his eyes shut as if banishing the sight of it would extinguish the danger and-

BAM

There had been an explosion of dust and sand, a whirlwind exploding outwards in a circular radius and the earth had literally risen around Mir in sharp, long sharps. They overlapped circularly, forming a protective shield around the boy. And somehow Mir landed as if simply falling on a bed of pillow. He was safe. He was protected.

But what the hell had he just done?

Magic, I wanted to whisper. But there was no such thing as magic was there? This was the real world, not some cartoon or movie where magic came in the form of wands or sparks or flames bursting from spread out palms. But how else to explain what he had just seen. The manipulation of earth, the expulsion of wind and sound, it was something out of this world and I had never seen anything like-

The rising of earth. The twisting of water. The appearance of creatures from thin air.

It was just like what the Ringmaster was capable of.

Suddenly I felt light-headed, dizzy. I was seeing stars as if the realization of it had dealt me a punch to the solar plexus. Without realizing it I was in oxygen desperately.

And then there came a tentative call from below. “Mir?” It was Thunder. I could see Mir twitch in response to Thunder’s calming voice, and I realized that the boy could not see Mir.

“He’s down there,” I called down to Thunder. He jerked his head up to and pity filled me as I saw him flinch. We had all gone through too many uncertain things in the past twelve hours. How much more would we have to endure in the remaining time?

“In there?” he pointed and I nodded.

“Mir,” I said. “Are you okay?”

Mir looked a little stunned as he gathered himself and shuffled to his feet. I could see him inspecting himself, hands running up and down his body with the overwhelming awareness that he was alive. He had fallen and he was alive. Not pulp, not torn apart, just normal Mir.

“I-I’m fine…I think…” he stuttered and my heart compressed.

This wasn’t Mir’s fault. None of it was. He could have hardly known he possess this…power.

“Mir?” Thunder called out from below. A touch of relief was present. “Can you get out of that…thing?” he asked, but I knew he was looking at the circular shield with suspicion. From above it was clear that the formation of the shards were slanted outwards, making it impossible to climb unless you were on the inside. And even then the sharp, smooth incline looked slippery.

“Um, yeah,” Mir replied and he walked over to one of the shards. My brow furrowed as I tried to guess what he was about to do, and nothing would have led me to predict what he actually did. The lifting of one hand, the pressing of his palm flat to the stone and then with a rocketing whoosh, the stone crumbled to dust and just like that it was gone.

Maybe I was wrong.

Maybe Mir knew how to control his powers.

But…then…why didn’t he tell us about it earlier.

“Did you just do that?” Thunder stammered looking dumbfounded.

Mir stared at his hand for a fraction of a second before letting it drop to his side. “I think…so…” he mumbled, and my resolve stumbled on two unsteady feet.

“Oh Mir,” I breathed as one, tiny tear trickled its way down Mir’s cheek. How could I ever doubt him? He looked so broken as Thunder walked over to him and crushed him in a tight, I’m-here-for-you embrace. I turned, wanting to climb down and hug him for all he was worth, but then a flicker of gold in my peripheral stopped me.

“Leopard!” I yelled and it carried down to the two boys who snapped their heads up to see a recovered leopard get ready to pounce. “Run!”

My eyes widened as Thunder push Mir down, shoving the two of them roughly to one side and avoiding a claw outstretched pounce. The leopard landed, snarled at having missed and twisted nimbly on its paws. 

“Hurry up and climb!” I urged them and Thunder responded first. He rolled upwards, eyes bright, and pulled Mir up as well. Mir stumbled to his feet, still looking a little shell-shocked.

“Hurry!” I pounded my fists into the platform. I wanted to get down there and push them up the ladder but I would be putting myself into danger as well, and right now it would be more sensible for me to stand here and hold the ladder still and goddamn it, “HURRY UP!”

Thunder pushed Mir towards the ladder, grabbing Mir’s hands and shoving them onto the rope ladder. But Mir was responding too slowly and I had to bit my lip to stop myself from shouting any profanities. I could see more felines recovering, their tails twitching, angered beyond belief. Their easy prey was apparently not so easy.

“Hurry, hurry, hurry,” I chanted, worrying my teeth into my lip and tasting blood. It was all background noise though and my eyes were fixed to Mir placing one foot onto the bottom most run and lifting himself (finally!) and simultaneously a lion crossing the empty space in two long strides (that fast?!) and Thunder’s exposed back to those long, sharp claws.

“Thunder!” the words tore themselves from my mouth and both Thunder and Mir were turning and the lion was getting closer, a feral gleam in its black eyes, and behind it were two other lionesses and, and, and Mir flung out his hand again, teeth gritted and air swirled like a storm cloud, centering itself and blasting straight into the lion’s face.

It was sent flying backwards, a rocketing slice through the air, accompanied by a pained squeak. Thunder stared, breathing heavily, as he realized just how close to death he had been.

“Thanks Mir,” he croaked.

Mir looked equally stunned, as if he still didn’t have a grip on the reality that was his powers. “No…problem…” he managed.

“Hurry,” I reminded them. The other cats looked wary, but that would only last for so long.

Thunder nodded, turning back and pushing Mir up, urging him to hurry. As Mir reached the top I grabbed his forearms and practically pulled him up. He fell against me and we both rocked backwards, and then Mir was crying, small sobbing little noises being expelled. His face was pressed into my shirt and I was rubbing a soothing hand in circles over his back.

“It’s okay, it’s okay,” I whispered. “You saved Thunder you realize that.”

“Yeah Mir,” Thunder said as he hauled himself over the platform. “You saved me.”

Mir just sniffled.

“Crybaby,” I teased and hugged him tight.

How could I have ever doubted him? 

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annalulz
#1
I'm just rereading this again, hoping that one day you'll decide to update again *cries forever*
annalulz
#2
Chapter 65: I'm screaming omg Fia why why whyyyyy

Bye Mir you lived well. I have the feeling this isn't the last we'll see of him.... we still have the mystery of the coliseum left to puzzle the pieces together, idk why I think they're just appearing in the real world, without the government interfering with the deaths, maybe that's the path they take....

what on Earth is Sanghyun doing??? he doesn't seem completely evil but.... hmmmmm

I hope you can update after your trip, good luck and have fun ^_^
yumzibabe
#3
OMG! Another update!

I have to admit, I'm really behind on my reading but I will catch up!
School's been crazy busy so I haven't been spending much time on Aff but it's nice seeing your updates.
As busy as I am, I get super excited every time there's an update alert as well as the spoilers I'm getting from yours and annalulz's convo haha.

KEEP IT UP FIA! I'm still here and will be back SOON! :)
annalulz
#4
Chapter 64: SO YOU'RE SAYING THE WHITE SUIT JOON MET WHILE IN JAIL WAS SEUNGHO /SCREAMS

but shouldn't Joon have remembered Seungho was the white suit when he got his memories back? or is this one of those 'oops I have to go fix this later' moments?

Holy shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii-----

I knew it (again) ahahaha. I admit my wish to have Thunder be the wolf was my own biased-ness and wanting him to be bad, but I'm so happy I was right asjdashdialshd

Did he really kill Mir tho? I mean, if they all technically have bodies in the real world, Mir isn't really dead, his data is just lost somewhere right? Unless... dying in the Coliseum truly kills you, but nooooo okay, I don't want Mir dead, bring him back, omg don't let Thunder kill Seungho where is my SeungDoong ansdhadighasda I'm screaming.

Mastermind Doong is so evil TT__TT

BUT WAAAAIIIITTTTTT... why kill them all if he needs them? I mean what's the point of gathering everyone in these Games only to kill them all later? they obviously have something he needs, but wouldn't it be better to have them alive for that? Or does this has something to do with the real purpose of the Coliseum?

WHAT IS THE COLISEUM????
annalulz
#5
Chapter 63: FIA OMG WELCOME BACK I MISSED YOU I MISSED THIS FIC JESUS CHRIST I'M GONNA CRY XD

I want to give a full insight comment but I'm just flailing around from excitement and I don't know what to say. I need to tie this in in my head with the rest of the story first so I'll do that later XD

but omg can I say I KNEW IT even when you weren't sure yourself RM was Rain? I remember you telling me that but maybe I'm wrong. Anyway...

I KNEWWWWW IIIIIITTTT

and I think I was right about Doongie too *insert wolf howl here* hahahaha

but if this is going where I think this is going, the Mastermind behind everything is Sanghyun and I'm feeling his super awesome plan has back-fired on him, so the question remains who is the wolf? who is the ringmaster?

And what in the name of Loki is The Coliseum? there is more to it isn't there? and what are ll these other things Sanghyun knows about the Digiworld. (yeah I'm still calling it that XD)

I was gonna start kicking you about this chapter update but I forgot. But don't worry I'll be kicking you soon for the next one. I am not letting you take a million years for the next update at this point in the game :3
innocent-bystander #6
Chapter 62: The hacking was so intense...
annalulz
#7
Chapter 62: OKAY OHMYGOD WHAT JUST HAPPENED

You updated *cries tears of joy*

First of all, what? Second of all WHAT? Third of all WHAAAATTTT'????!!!

I'm glad Sanghyun could find both his sisters, but damn poor Durami, I honestly hope she can get herself a physical body, but, in the eventual case they go back into the real world, she won't be able to go back :(

And, wow, I wasn't expecting the Christmas Program/Virus to be THAT, and Mir god, he could have killed everyone o.O

Is this how Seungho ended up joining the Ringmaster? I need to check up because I'm really lost on the timeline xD (I will have to reread this again) but by this point, Joon and G.O have already been recruited by the RM? I thought maybe Durami, Sanghyun and Dara could have come up with the Carnival Games and maybe even that Durami was the RM... I still have my suspicions about her but I don't think Dara and Thunder would come up with the games, then again, I don't think Durami would purposefully torture her own brother with the games, so yeah, I'm probably pretty off with that theory... or am I?

I'm glad the Park Siblings could modify the code before Mir killed everyone, but I do have to wonder about his reaction when he sees what happened. I still want Joon and G.O back, give me back my babos TT__TT

Anywayssss, my big question right now is HOW THE HELL DID MIR SEUNGHO AND THUNDER JOINED THE RM? Who is the RM? (sorry for capsing but I'm excited haha, please don't take 1234567890 months to update again ;-;) I did like that little moment where their paths kinda sorta crossed, and ooh Thunder sort of knows who Mir is. Oh wait, this is bad, this is bad bad bad. What if Thunder feels some sort of resentment towards Mir for coding the Xmas program and almost killing his sisters? asjdghasjjasdalsd
annalulz
#8
Chapter 61: okay, omg, I'm dead. Finally a bit of Thunder xD

this part "His body reacted as it
should in times of stress, his
brain sending signals to produce
norepinephrine and cortisol. His
heart rate increased, his
breathing quickened. His eyes
dilated and he could feel his
skin flush" made me feel like I was watching Criminal Minds, or Sherlock haha.

I imagined that the story of the real world would be like that, te pollution and all, but wow, Sanghyun's backstory is so heartbreaking. Are they clones or the product of female and male DNA? (I might be asking too indepth questions for your unplotted backstory sorry xP) but wow, Mir and Doong are sort of crossing paths. And, was that the RM meeting Mir?

The Cryocells remind me if the recuperation chambers in DBZ xD.

And that bit about Dara, that does give hope for Joon and G.O I think. When you told me there were deaths I thought it would be obe of the boys. I guess Dara's death is going to be Sanghyun's bigest motivator, but he only has 24 days, so I guess the games have to happen before those days are over, unless there's no hope for her?

There was something about the timeline of how they were recruited by the RM but I forgot the thought while watching Friends ;-;

I hope you can give us a faster update, gah the MBLAQ tag is dead *cries*