11:16– A Countdown to Third Death [12:44pm]

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Chapter 45:  11:16– A Countdown to Third Death [12:44pm]

Mir POV

We were falling fast. Hurtling downwards, and I knew at this rate even before the lions and the leopards and the tigers, the fall would kill us. But I had fallen before and survived.

I closed my eyes and tried to envision it. I already had the feeling, my heart leaping and twisting and turning. All I needed was to imagine it. Round, circular platforms. Strong winds.

There.

I opened my eyes and felt something akin to solid ground beneath my body.

“M-mir!” Seungho’s voice came from my right. I turned to see him panting hard, hands pressed to the ground as if he could barely believe what was happening. I almost couldn’t either. The scale of what I had created was like that of the ring of earth shards I had first made. Platforms of the wind barrier were all that held up Seungho, Thunder and I. Not the small little shield I had made earlier but large surface areas that was enough to support the three of our sprawled bodies.

It was exhausting.

Almost immediately I felt a sudden drain on my body. It was like my very energy was being out. My limbs trembled and sweat its way down my temple.

“Mir?” Seungho crawled over, terror evident in his eyes. Despite that he gripped my shoulders, this time full of fear and worry, but fear and worry for me! His hands tried to steady me. I leaned against him, breathing harshly as I tried to maintain the wind platforms. “Speak to me Mir!”

But I couldn’t. My mouth opened, but it was dry and small cracked sounds were all that were able to come out.

“Mir!”

“I-“ I can’t hold this up, was what I wanted to say. But I had to. I didn’t need to look down to know there were several hundreds of meters left for us to fall from, but what other choice did I have?

“Mir?” He was shaking me now. Don’t shake me hyung! I wanted to whimper. I couldn’t concentrate, and my hold was letting up. I couldn’t control these powers. Not powers discovered only an hour ago and controlled solely by emotion and imagination.

My head was clouding over, the pain and the stress building up like a thunder cloud, heavy and thick and ready to let loose havoc.

“Hy…ung…”

“Don’t give up Mir,” a voice cut through the clouds. And then suddenly the weight felt lighter. The vice bands that had constricted themselves around my throat, around my wrists and my waist and arms, those restraints were gone and all of a sudden I could breath. I looked up, eyes blurry with tears and there stood Thunder.

He didn’t look like how Seungho looked, on hands and feet and clinging tightly to me. How one over a hundred feet high in the air and balancing on tiny, unsteady platforms of wind should look like.  He stood up straight as fear was a four lettered word he had never heard of before. His eyes were bright and his mouth a set, grim line of determination. 

“Stand up Mir,” he ordered and I rose shakily on one knee, Seungho supporting me.

“What…did you do?” I rasped.

Thunder looked down at me and held out one hand. “I only did what you did,” he answered simply as I took his hand. He pulled me up, somehow suddenly so strong and so bright thAT I wondered where this Thunder had come from. He was such an enigma, one second a frightened boy trapped in a cage of thorns and the next a sun shining brighter than any light.

“You can control these powers as well?” Seungho said quietly. I could almost hear his brain clicking and whirring, trying to accept the fact that these powers were not solely the Ringmaster and mine. 

“I think so,” Thunder ducked his head. “Not too well since I’m just following Mir’s lead.”

“What do you mean?” Seungho sounded puzzled. As the only one who couldn't use powers - or hadn't tapped into the ability yet, I couldn't tell as of now - he couldn't begin to comprehend how these powers worked. It was like weaving a pattern or drawing a picture. If the guiding lines were already drawn then envisioning what you wanted became unimaginably easier. 

“I’m just adding another layer of the shield to Mir’s,” Thunder tried to explain, brow furrowed with the effort of both speaking and wielding the strange powers we had suddenly chanced upon for the first time. “Mir’s doing most of the work. I’m just like a second person pushing him upright so he doesn’t fall.”

“That’s amazing Thunder,” I managed. “But how did you know you could use these powers?”

“The same way you did Mir,” Thunder grunted. “A little heart-stopping moment and then I realized you couldn’t hold us up. So I tried to copy what you did, and boom.”

Still…

A shudder of a pain ran its way through my bloodstream. Without realizing it I had let out a gasp of pain.

“Mir!” Seungho was at my side again. “What’s wrong?”

“I can’t hold this up hyung,” Thunder huffed. His hands were clenched tightly and I could see the lines of pain etch their way across his face. He too couldn’t control this power well. “We need to get out of here quickly.”

“H-how?” I panted. We were still floating in mid-air with no ladder nearby.

“Can you move this wind platform?” Seungho asked suddenly.

“W-what?”

“Move it,” Seungho repeated himself. “Can you propel us upwards or sideways?”

“I…” Could I?

“Try it Mir,” Thunder spoke. Effort was clearing taking its toll as his voice wobbled. “Imagine the tornado again. But this time it’s below us and blowing us upwards. I’ll do the same.”

“Okay,” I breathed and closed my eyes. We had no other alternative. Through the pain and the heat of Seungho’s grip on my shoulder, holding me up, I tried to envision it. The swirling of winds, circular and powerful. A gale propelling us higher and higher and-

-we suddenly rocketed upwards. It was so violently fast that we were all forced to our hands and knees, gripping and slipping for purchase as the winds Thunder and I imagined guided us upwards. The thought of what we would do when we reached the top did not even occur to me.

Platforms and rope ladders flash by as we rose. I caught a glimpse of eyes in the shadows, long grey metal contraptions and large, round, spiked objects. I shuddered to think that we would have had to encounter these traps if we had continued to climb via the ladders. Evidently the crumbling platform must have been a trap as well. The Ringmaster was not one to underestimate.

A clawing feeling began to clutch its hands around my heart again and I knew it was the feeling of me reaching my limits. I couldn’t hold up these winds forever, and neither could Thunder. But we had to. We had to reach the top and complete level 4 and, and, and-

I felt my limbs give way beneath me and black stars danced in my vision. A numbing sensation overcame my body and the last thing I could feel before the world went black was the impression that we were rising and falling again. Like children on a trampoline. Only this time I knew that if we fell, we would not rise again...

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annalulz
#1
I'm just rereading this again, hoping that one day you'll decide to update again *cries forever*
annalulz
#2
Chapter 65: I'm screaming omg Fia why why whyyyyy

Bye Mir you lived well. I have the feeling this isn't the last we'll see of him.... we still have the mystery of the coliseum left to puzzle the pieces together, idk why I think they're just appearing in the real world, without the government interfering with the deaths, maybe that's the path they take....

what on Earth is Sanghyun doing??? he doesn't seem completely evil but.... hmmmmm

I hope you can update after your trip, good luck and have fun ^_^
yumzibabe
#3
OMG! Another update!

I have to admit, I'm really behind on my reading but I will catch up!
School's been crazy busy so I haven't been spending much time on Aff but it's nice seeing your updates.
As busy as I am, I get super excited every time there's an update alert as well as the spoilers I'm getting from yours and annalulz's convo haha.

KEEP IT UP FIA! I'm still here and will be back SOON! :)
annalulz
#4
Chapter 64: SO YOU'RE SAYING THE WHITE SUIT JOON MET WHILE IN JAIL WAS SEUNGHO /SCREAMS

but shouldn't Joon have remembered Seungho was the white suit when he got his memories back? or is this one of those 'oops I have to go fix this later' moments?

Holy shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii-----

I knew it (again) ahahaha. I admit my wish to have Thunder be the wolf was my own biased-ness and wanting him to be bad, but I'm so happy I was right asjdashdialshd

Did he really kill Mir tho? I mean, if they all technically have bodies in the real world, Mir isn't really dead, his data is just lost somewhere right? Unless... dying in the Coliseum truly kills you, but nooooo okay, I don't want Mir dead, bring him back, omg don't let Thunder kill Seungho where is my SeungDoong ansdhadighasda I'm screaming.

Mastermind Doong is so evil TT__TT

BUT WAAAAIIIITTTTTT... why kill them all if he needs them? I mean what's the point of gathering everyone in these Games only to kill them all later? they obviously have something he needs, but wouldn't it be better to have them alive for that? Or does this has something to do with the real purpose of the Coliseum?

WHAT IS THE COLISEUM????
annalulz
#5
Chapter 63: FIA OMG WELCOME BACK I MISSED YOU I MISSED THIS FIC JESUS CHRIST I'M GONNA CRY XD

I want to give a full insight comment but I'm just flailing around from excitement and I don't know what to say. I need to tie this in in my head with the rest of the story first so I'll do that later XD

but omg can I say I KNEW IT even when you weren't sure yourself RM was Rain? I remember you telling me that but maybe I'm wrong. Anyway...

I KNEWWWWW IIIIIITTTT

and I think I was right about Doongie too *insert wolf howl here* hahahaha

but if this is going where I think this is going, the Mastermind behind everything is Sanghyun and I'm feeling his super awesome plan has back-fired on him, so the question remains who is the wolf? who is the ringmaster?

And what in the name of Loki is The Coliseum? there is more to it isn't there? and what are ll these other things Sanghyun knows about the Digiworld. (yeah I'm still calling it that XD)

I was gonna start kicking you about this chapter update but I forgot. But don't worry I'll be kicking you soon for the next one. I am not letting you take a million years for the next update at this point in the game :3
innocent-bystander #6
Chapter 62: The hacking was so intense...
annalulz
#7
Chapter 62: OKAY OHMYGOD WHAT JUST HAPPENED

You updated *cries tears of joy*

First of all, what? Second of all WHAT? Third of all WHAAAATTTT'????!!!

I'm glad Sanghyun could find both his sisters, but damn poor Durami, I honestly hope she can get herself a physical body, but, in the eventual case they go back into the real world, she won't be able to go back :(

And, wow, I wasn't expecting the Christmas Program/Virus to be THAT, and Mir god, he could have killed everyone o.O

Is this how Seungho ended up joining the Ringmaster? I need to check up because I'm really lost on the timeline xD (I will have to reread this again) but by this point, Joon and G.O have already been recruited by the RM? I thought maybe Durami, Sanghyun and Dara could have come up with the Carnival Games and maybe even that Durami was the RM... I still have my suspicions about her but I don't think Dara and Thunder would come up with the games, then again, I don't think Durami would purposefully torture her own brother with the games, so yeah, I'm probably pretty off with that theory... or am I?

I'm glad the Park Siblings could modify the code before Mir killed everyone, but I do have to wonder about his reaction when he sees what happened. I still want Joon and G.O back, give me back my babos TT__TT

Anywayssss, my big question right now is HOW THE HELL DID MIR SEUNGHO AND THUNDER JOINED THE RM? Who is the RM? (sorry for capsing but I'm excited haha, please don't take 1234567890 months to update again ;-;) I did like that little moment where their paths kinda sorta crossed, and ooh Thunder sort of knows who Mir is. Oh wait, this is bad, this is bad bad bad. What if Thunder feels some sort of resentment towards Mir for coding the Xmas program and almost killing his sisters? asjdghasjjasdalsd
annalulz
#8
Chapter 61: okay, omg, I'm dead. Finally a bit of Thunder xD

this part "His body reacted as it
should in times of stress, his
brain sending signals to produce
norepinephrine and cortisol. His
heart rate increased, his
breathing quickened. His eyes
dilated and he could feel his
skin flush" made me feel like I was watching Criminal Minds, or Sherlock haha.

I imagined that the story of the real world would be like that, te pollution and all, but wow, Sanghyun's backstory is so heartbreaking. Are they clones or the product of female and male DNA? (I might be asking too indepth questions for your unplotted backstory sorry xP) but wow, Mir and Doong are sort of crossing paths. And, was that the RM meeting Mir?

The Cryocells remind me if the recuperation chambers in DBZ xD.

And that bit about Dara, that does give hope for Joon and G.O I think. When you told me there were deaths I thought it would be obe of the boys. I guess Dara's death is going to be Sanghyun's bigest motivator, but he only has 24 days, so I guess the games have to happen before those days are over, unless there's no hope for her?

There was something about the timeline of how they were recruited by the RM but I forgot the thought while watching Friends ;-;

I hope you can give us a faster update, gah the MBLAQ tag is dead *cries*