22:17 – A Countdown to First Death [1:43am]

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Chapter 11: 22:17 – A Countdown to First Death [1:43am]

Thunder POV

Lights. More blinding and brighter than any sun flickered on, one by one. For a moment I had to shield my eyes from their incessant glare. And then when my eyes grew used to it, I lowered it and was stunned by the new stage in front of me.

Dark red seats, the color of roman crimson was spread out in front of me. I touched the closest seat to me and was surprised at their luxurious feel. It was velvet stitched into those gorgeous wooden inlays. I couldn’t help but run my hand up and down them, as if a cat.

“Where…are we?” Mir broke the silence. I followed his stare, down the river of royal red and to the very far end where there stood a glittering stage. It was beautiful. All polished oakwood for floorings and resplendent curtains.

[YOU ARE IN THE GAME OF REALIZATIONS. THE ROMAN THEATRE] I jumped. I had almost forgotten the ringmaster was still with us.

“Explain the rules,” G.O said shortly.

[SIMPLE.] the ringmaster said. [GET THROUGH THE MAZE AND REACH THE STAGE. ONCE THERE, YOU’LL REALIZE THE TRUE TASK FOR YOURSELVES.]

“What maze?” I looked up at the ringmaster. All I could see for meters was the sprawl of red chairs and a clear aisle down the center.

[THIS MAZE] he smirked and suddenly the red chairs exploded. They grew upwards like a bush out of control and for a moment all I could see was that royal flush. The sound was terrible, like wood crackling and birds flying so close I could feel the air rocket past me. I curled into a ball as if it would protect me from whatever was happening around me.

And then…silence.

I unfurled myself and looked around.

Gone.

“MIR! SEUNGHO-HYUNG! JOON! G.O!” They were gone. Gone. Gone. Gone. I was alone, divided by those red, red walls of velvet. I put all my force behind one of them and pushed hard. No avail. Even if it was a wall of velvet, it was like steel.

This was the maze.

I punched the soft wall and it rebounded. It didn't even hurt. 

I gritted my teeth, got to my feet and proceed to walk down the corridor of shadows. We would get out of here. We were not going to be beaten.

 

Mir POV

Alone.

Again.

“Stop thinking like that,” I whispered to myself furiously. I was alone, but the other four were somewhere out there. It wasn’t like they had left me behind. No. And I was going to find them.

I got to my feet and forged forwards.

 

Seungho POV

The loneliness was so reminiscent, so haunting of that moment just hours ago when I had been locked in a prison with only darkness for company. Without knowing it, the presence of the other four had become something special. A candle that chased away the nightmare, the hallway light that banished the monsters under the bed. They meant more than I had expected. Had we really only known each other for over 2 hours?

I stared at my open hand. It was so cold.

Only moments ago I had been ruffling Thunder’s messy hair and patting Joon on the shoulder. Family.

I clenched my fist.

Time to go retrieve them.

 

Joon POV

My shoulder felt so cold. Absent of Mir’s warmth, only then did I realize what my team members had started becoming to me.

I had woken up with an inexplicit feeling of rage. The need for revenge. The sensation that I couldn’t trust anyone. But slowly, they had slipped under my shield and lent me their umbrella for those rainy days. These people, these insane silly people were willing to share life and limb with me.

I smiled.

It felt like some antique, an old treasure long gone unused. Laughter, smiles. Who would have ever thought I could summon those up in here of all places? A prison. Or something more.

Time to find my friends.

 

G.O POV

Friends.

It was a strange word to roll my tongue around. Friends.

Do you really deserve them? Something inside me cackled. It was a dark, demonic voice, sounding an inexplicable fear in my heart. Do they deserve to have you as a so-called ‘friend’?

What do you mean?! I snapped back.

What else would I mean? The voice inside me said snippily. It means when the tough gets going, so do you. In the end you will care only about yourself. That is how you’ve always been and how you always will be.

GI put a hand to his forehead, wiping away my fringe that was annoying me. I tried to ignore the cold sweat that ran down my temple.

I admit that the only reason he joined up with the other four initially was because I thought it would increase my chances of survival. Then there was news of the wolf and I thought perhaps I would be safer alone. But the ringmaster gave me no say in the matter. He orchestrated everything.

But in a way I’m thankful. If he hadn’t forced me into this, I would have realized how important they had become, how much I relied on them.

I took a step forwards, my march through the darkness. One hand I trailed across the velvet wall, the sensation reminding me that I was still standing on the ground. On and on it went, an endless path. Joon, Mir, Thunder, Seungho. The thought of them kept me going.

One foot in front of the other.

One step. Two steps. Three-

Light flickered in front of me and I froze, steadying myself in anticipation of an attack. But what appeared wasn’t a silver blade or dancing demon. It was a…child?

A small boy. Brown haired, slight build and a mischievous gleam in his eye. He turned around and looked at me. A smile.

I stared back at him.

Why was he here? What was he doing here? Was the ringmaster capturing ten year olds now?!

But he didn’t run. He didn’t look scared.

So…?

I took a step forwards. No movement. 

Another step.

We stood but a meter apart. He flickered with a golden light, as if a halo enveloped him. I was still dripping with water. The boy tilted his head.  

I knelt down and opened my mouth. “Hey kid,” I called out. “Who are you?”

He stared at me and his grin widened. 

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annalulz
#1
I'm just rereading this again, hoping that one day you'll decide to update again *cries forever*
annalulz
#2
Chapter 65: I'm screaming omg Fia why why whyyyyy

Bye Mir you lived well. I have the feeling this isn't the last we'll see of him.... we still have the mystery of the coliseum left to puzzle the pieces together, idk why I think they're just appearing in the real world, without the government interfering with the deaths, maybe that's the path they take....

what on Earth is Sanghyun doing??? he doesn't seem completely evil but.... hmmmmm

I hope you can update after your trip, good luck and have fun ^_^
yumzibabe
#3
OMG! Another update!

I have to admit, I'm really behind on my reading but I will catch up!
School's been crazy busy so I haven't been spending much time on Aff but it's nice seeing your updates.
As busy as I am, I get super excited every time there's an update alert as well as the spoilers I'm getting from yours and annalulz's convo haha.

KEEP IT UP FIA! I'm still here and will be back SOON! :)
annalulz
#4
Chapter 64: SO YOU'RE SAYING THE WHITE SUIT JOON MET WHILE IN JAIL WAS SEUNGHO /SCREAMS

but shouldn't Joon have remembered Seungho was the white suit when he got his memories back? or is this one of those 'oops I have to go fix this later' moments?

Holy shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii-----

I knew it (again) ahahaha. I admit my wish to have Thunder be the wolf was my own biased-ness and wanting him to be bad, but I'm so happy I was right asjdashdialshd

Did he really kill Mir tho? I mean, if they all technically have bodies in the real world, Mir isn't really dead, his data is just lost somewhere right? Unless... dying in the Coliseum truly kills you, but nooooo okay, I don't want Mir dead, bring him back, omg don't let Thunder kill Seungho where is my SeungDoong ansdhadighasda I'm screaming.

Mastermind Doong is so evil TT__TT

BUT WAAAAIIIITTTTTT... why kill them all if he needs them? I mean what's the point of gathering everyone in these Games only to kill them all later? they obviously have something he needs, but wouldn't it be better to have them alive for that? Or does this has something to do with the real purpose of the Coliseum?

WHAT IS THE COLISEUM????
annalulz
#5
Chapter 63: FIA OMG WELCOME BACK I MISSED YOU I MISSED THIS FIC JESUS CHRIST I'M GONNA CRY XD

I want to give a full insight comment but I'm just flailing around from excitement and I don't know what to say. I need to tie this in in my head with the rest of the story first so I'll do that later XD

but omg can I say I KNEW IT even when you weren't sure yourself RM was Rain? I remember you telling me that but maybe I'm wrong. Anyway...

I KNEWWWWW IIIIIITTTT

and I think I was right about Doongie too *insert wolf howl here* hahahaha

but if this is going where I think this is going, the Mastermind behind everything is Sanghyun and I'm feeling his super awesome plan has back-fired on him, so the question remains who is the wolf? who is the ringmaster?

And what in the name of Loki is The Coliseum? there is more to it isn't there? and what are ll these other things Sanghyun knows about the Digiworld. (yeah I'm still calling it that XD)

I was gonna start kicking you about this chapter update but I forgot. But don't worry I'll be kicking you soon for the next one. I am not letting you take a million years for the next update at this point in the game :3
innocent-bystander #6
Chapter 62: The hacking was so intense...
annalulz
#7
Chapter 62: OKAY OHMYGOD WHAT JUST HAPPENED

You updated *cries tears of joy*

First of all, what? Second of all WHAT? Third of all WHAAAATTTT'????!!!

I'm glad Sanghyun could find both his sisters, but damn poor Durami, I honestly hope she can get herself a physical body, but, in the eventual case they go back into the real world, she won't be able to go back :(

And, wow, I wasn't expecting the Christmas Program/Virus to be THAT, and Mir god, he could have killed everyone o.O

Is this how Seungho ended up joining the Ringmaster? I need to check up because I'm really lost on the timeline xD (I will have to reread this again) but by this point, Joon and G.O have already been recruited by the RM? I thought maybe Durami, Sanghyun and Dara could have come up with the Carnival Games and maybe even that Durami was the RM... I still have my suspicions about her but I don't think Dara and Thunder would come up with the games, then again, I don't think Durami would purposefully torture her own brother with the games, so yeah, I'm probably pretty off with that theory... or am I?

I'm glad the Park Siblings could modify the code before Mir killed everyone, but I do have to wonder about his reaction when he sees what happened. I still want Joon and G.O back, give me back my babos TT__TT

Anywayssss, my big question right now is HOW THE HELL DID MIR SEUNGHO AND THUNDER JOINED THE RM? Who is the RM? (sorry for capsing but I'm excited haha, please don't take 1234567890 months to update again ;-;) I did like that little moment where their paths kinda sorta crossed, and ooh Thunder sort of knows who Mir is. Oh wait, this is bad, this is bad bad bad. What if Thunder feels some sort of resentment towards Mir for coding the Xmas program and almost killing his sisters? asjdghasjjasdalsd
annalulz
#8
Chapter 61: okay, omg, I'm dead. Finally a bit of Thunder xD

this part "His body reacted as it
should in times of stress, his
brain sending signals to produce
norepinephrine and cortisol. His
heart rate increased, his
breathing quickened. His eyes
dilated and he could feel his
skin flush" made me feel like I was watching Criminal Minds, or Sherlock haha.

I imagined that the story of the real world would be like that, te pollution and all, but wow, Sanghyun's backstory is so heartbreaking. Are they clones or the product of female and male DNA? (I might be asking too indepth questions for your unplotted backstory sorry xP) but wow, Mir and Doong are sort of crossing paths. And, was that the RM meeting Mir?

The Cryocells remind me if the recuperation chambers in DBZ xD.

And that bit about Dara, that does give hope for Joon and G.O I think. When you told me there were deaths I thought it would be obe of the boys. I guess Dara's death is going to be Sanghyun's bigest motivator, but he only has 24 days, so I guess the games have to happen before those days are over, unless there's no hope for her?

There was something about the timeline of how they were recruited by the RM but I forgot the thought while watching Friends ;-;

I hope you can give us a faster update, gah the MBLAQ tag is dead *cries*