21:46 – A Countdown to First Death [02:14am]

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Chapter 12: 21:46 – A Countdown to First Death [02:14am]

G.O POV

The boy stared back at me.

“What’s wrong kid?” I said. “Can you speak? Tell me, who are you? What are you doing here? Are you alone?”

The boy grinned and then spun around on light feet and ran away from me.

“Hey!” I yelled and got to my feet, finding myself chasing after him.  “Stop! Kid! Where are you going?”

Part of me feared this was a trap. But the boy was ten years old. And this was a bloody game. I couldn’t have his death on my conscious.

“Stop! I’m trying to help you!”

The boy ran round a corner. Left, right, left again. I lost track of how far I ran before the boy stopped. It was a sudden movement and I skidded, grabbing the velvety walls for safety.

“K-kid…” I huffed, regaining my breath. “W-“

Another boy stepped out from the corner. He was black haired, pale skinned and he ignored me completely. Instead he ran over to the brown-haired boy, waving one hand eagerly.

“Byunghee!” he called out and I stared at the two of them. Byunghee? Why did that name sound so…familiar…?

“You’re late!” the black-haired boy chided him.

Mianhe,” the brown haired boy called Byunghee smiled at him. “Umma kept nagging at me to do chores before I left and I had to do noona’s share as well.”

“Ahh it having two older sisters doesn’t it,” sympathized the black-haired boy. “One is bad enough as it is.”

“You got that right!” Byunghee agreed, bumping shoulders with his friend.

I stared at the scene of two boys in front of me. In the middle of a red velvet maze. In the middle of the bloody carnival games. What in the world was going on?!

“Hey…you two-“ I reached out to tap the shoulder of the black haired boy, but before I could say anything, the brown haired one named Byunghee continued speaking.

“Hey, so what shall we do today… Changsun!”

 

Joon POV

I was walking aimlessly, taking every left turn I could. There was that rumor that to get out of a maze, simply keep turning left.

Left…left…left…left-

Suddenly there was a golden sparkle. I dashed forwards, feeling like it was a lifeline that I had to grab before it was reeled away. And around the corner was-

Two boys.

One was brown haired and the other black. They were tall and lean but slightly gangly. They looked about fourteen, at that awkward age between being a teenager and still being a kid. It was clear though that the two were best friends from the way they bumped shoulders and whacked each other on the back.

But…what in the world were they doing here?!  In the middle of a maze?

“Hey, you two!” I called out to them but there was no response. They just kept walking with their brotherly banter. “Hey!”

I watched them go with furrowed brows. There was something strange about them. Was it the golden glow around them, or their strange ignorance about their situation? Or was it the strange twist of fear I felt in my stomach.

I had to catch up with them.

I ran forwards, sprinting now and grabbed the black-haired boy on the shoulder.

My hand went right through it. 

Oh. A hologram.

 

G.O POV

Byunghee and Changsun. Two little boys who were a hologram.

My hand has passed through them when I tried to tap the shoulder of the one called Changsun. Only then did I realize what the golden glow was – the air distorting around the image. The very same lines that echoed the ringmaster’s outlines.

They weren’t real.

So why did the ringmaster put them here. In the maze. Were they a distraction? Will-o-wisps meant to lead us astray. Something told me there was more to them that just that.

This was the roman theatre and those two boys had a story to tell. I stepped forwards and watched them. But all they were doing were playing. On some days it was exploring along the sea-side rock walls with their treasures of washed up bottles and broken shells that the boys transformed into stranded SOS messages and the mermaids tools used to grant underwater wishes. On other days there was play fighting. At the end of their time together, they would return home sweaty and red-faced, but pleased and filled with plans to meet up the next day or the day after.

They were so close and yet somehow so far. So carefree and yet not. 

As I watched them, my heart twinged and an impossible sensation of sorrow filled me.

 

Joon POV

The two boys sat on imaginary rocks, the appropriate scenery forming out of thin air. It was like watching a play or a movie, the story so unassumingly innocent.

“It’s been a while Byunghee,” the black haired boy commented. His eyes possessed a strange heaviness, as if gravity had him in its clutches. “How have you been?”

“I know Changsun,” Byunghee replied tiredly. He had dark circles under his eyes. “Home’s been tough and lately there’s not enough food to go around.”

Changsun made a murmur of agreement. “My sister joined the enforcers the other day,” he confessed.

“What?!” Byunghee grabbed Changsun’s shoulders. “But you know what they do to them! The rumors! Whoever joins the enforcers never come back!”

“I know,” Changsun growled. “But…but…it was her choice. It’s been tough…ever since the purge-“ he stopped there.

“I get it brother,” Byunghee held up one hand. “You don’t need to tell me. We’re all going through the same thing.”

“Thank you,” Changsun let out a sigh. “Putting it in words is like... admitting this nightmare is happening…”

“I get it. I’m the same,” Byunghee leaned against Changsun’s shoulder. “Promise me one thing brother.”

“Anything.”

“Promise that no matter what, we’ll have each other backs,” Byunghee whispered.

Changsun let out a small laugh and rested his head on top of Byunghee’s. “Pabo,” he said jokingly. “You don’t need to ask. It’s a given.”

I stared as the hologram faded away, nothing but golden dust left behind. What was this show? This act? What was its message?

I stared even after the two forms were long gone. Something about the talk was gripping my heart with cold fingers. I tried to still my trembling hands.

What was wrong with me? Why did that little show affect me so much? I stared at my hand and tried to ignore this feeling of dread.

 

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annalulz
#1
I'm just rereading this again, hoping that one day you'll decide to update again *cries forever*
annalulz
#2
Chapter 65: I'm screaming omg Fia why why whyyyyy

Bye Mir you lived well. I have the feeling this isn't the last we'll see of him.... we still have the mystery of the coliseum left to puzzle the pieces together, idk why I think they're just appearing in the real world, without the government interfering with the deaths, maybe that's the path they take....

what on Earth is Sanghyun doing??? he doesn't seem completely evil but.... hmmmmm

I hope you can update after your trip, good luck and have fun ^_^
yumzibabe
#3
OMG! Another update!

I have to admit, I'm really behind on my reading but I will catch up!
School's been crazy busy so I haven't been spending much time on Aff but it's nice seeing your updates.
As busy as I am, I get super excited every time there's an update alert as well as the spoilers I'm getting from yours and annalulz's convo haha.

KEEP IT UP FIA! I'm still here and will be back SOON! :)
annalulz
#4
Chapter 64: SO YOU'RE SAYING THE WHITE SUIT JOON MET WHILE IN JAIL WAS SEUNGHO /SCREAMS

but shouldn't Joon have remembered Seungho was the white suit when he got his memories back? or is this one of those 'oops I have to go fix this later' moments?

Holy shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii-----

I knew it (again) ahahaha. I admit my wish to have Thunder be the wolf was my own biased-ness and wanting him to be bad, but I'm so happy I was right asjdashdialshd

Did he really kill Mir tho? I mean, if they all technically have bodies in the real world, Mir isn't really dead, his data is just lost somewhere right? Unless... dying in the Coliseum truly kills you, but nooooo okay, I don't want Mir dead, bring him back, omg don't let Thunder kill Seungho where is my SeungDoong ansdhadighasda I'm screaming.

Mastermind Doong is so evil TT__TT

BUT WAAAAIIIITTTTTT... why kill them all if he needs them? I mean what's the point of gathering everyone in these Games only to kill them all later? they obviously have something he needs, but wouldn't it be better to have them alive for that? Or does this has something to do with the real purpose of the Coliseum?

WHAT IS THE COLISEUM????
annalulz
#5
Chapter 63: FIA OMG WELCOME BACK I MISSED YOU I MISSED THIS FIC JESUS CHRIST I'M GONNA CRY XD

I want to give a full insight comment but I'm just flailing around from excitement and I don't know what to say. I need to tie this in in my head with the rest of the story first so I'll do that later XD

but omg can I say I KNEW IT even when you weren't sure yourself RM was Rain? I remember you telling me that but maybe I'm wrong. Anyway...

I KNEWWWWW IIIIIITTTT

and I think I was right about Doongie too *insert wolf howl here* hahahaha

but if this is going where I think this is going, the Mastermind behind everything is Sanghyun and I'm feeling his super awesome plan has back-fired on him, so the question remains who is the wolf? who is the ringmaster?

And what in the name of Loki is The Coliseum? there is more to it isn't there? and what are ll these other things Sanghyun knows about the Digiworld. (yeah I'm still calling it that XD)

I was gonna start kicking you about this chapter update but I forgot. But don't worry I'll be kicking you soon for the next one. I am not letting you take a million years for the next update at this point in the game :3
innocent-bystander #6
Chapter 62: The hacking was so intense...
annalulz
#7
Chapter 62: OKAY OHMYGOD WHAT JUST HAPPENED

You updated *cries tears of joy*

First of all, what? Second of all WHAT? Third of all WHAAAATTTT'????!!!

I'm glad Sanghyun could find both his sisters, but damn poor Durami, I honestly hope she can get herself a physical body, but, in the eventual case they go back into the real world, she won't be able to go back :(

And, wow, I wasn't expecting the Christmas Program/Virus to be THAT, and Mir god, he could have killed everyone o.O

Is this how Seungho ended up joining the Ringmaster? I need to check up because I'm really lost on the timeline xD (I will have to reread this again) but by this point, Joon and G.O have already been recruited by the RM? I thought maybe Durami, Sanghyun and Dara could have come up with the Carnival Games and maybe even that Durami was the RM... I still have my suspicions about her but I don't think Dara and Thunder would come up with the games, then again, I don't think Durami would purposefully torture her own brother with the games, so yeah, I'm probably pretty off with that theory... or am I?

I'm glad the Park Siblings could modify the code before Mir killed everyone, but I do have to wonder about his reaction when he sees what happened. I still want Joon and G.O back, give me back my babos TT__TT

Anywayssss, my big question right now is HOW THE HELL DID MIR SEUNGHO AND THUNDER JOINED THE RM? Who is the RM? (sorry for capsing but I'm excited haha, please don't take 1234567890 months to update again ;-;) I did like that little moment where their paths kinda sorta crossed, and ooh Thunder sort of knows who Mir is. Oh wait, this is bad, this is bad bad bad. What if Thunder feels some sort of resentment towards Mir for coding the Xmas program and almost killing his sisters? asjdghasjjasdalsd
annalulz
#8
Chapter 61: okay, omg, I'm dead. Finally a bit of Thunder xD

this part "His body reacted as it
should in times of stress, his
brain sending signals to produce
norepinephrine and cortisol. His
heart rate increased, his
breathing quickened. His eyes
dilated and he could feel his
skin flush" made me feel like I was watching Criminal Minds, or Sherlock haha.

I imagined that the story of the real world would be like that, te pollution and all, but wow, Sanghyun's backstory is so heartbreaking. Are they clones or the product of female and male DNA? (I might be asking too indepth questions for your unplotted backstory sorry xP) but wow, Mir and Doong are sort of crossing paths. And, was that the RM meeting Mir?

The Cryocells remind me if the recuperation chambers in DBZ xD.

And that bit about Dara, that does give hope for Joon and G.O I think. When you told me there were deaths I thought it would be obe of the boys. I guess Dara's death is going to be Sanghyun's bigest motivator, but he only has 24 days, so I guess the games have to happen before those days are over, unless there's no hope for her?

There was something about the timeline of how they were recruited by the RM but I forgot the thought while watching Friends ;-;

I hope you can give us a faster update, gah the MBLAQ tag is dead *cries*