14:06 –Second Death [09:53am]

24 Hours

Chapter 40: 14:06 –Second Death [09:53am]

Mir POV

The world felt as if in slow-motion as I watched Byunghee’s hand unclench from the knife’s hilt and drop to his side like the nerves had been cut. And then he feel backwards, slowly, like a leaf in autumn. It was as if the world had been tilted on its side and gravity was tugging him down, down, down.

He crumpled.

“Byunghee!” I yelled and was at his side in an instant.

From the corner of my eye I could see the Ringmaster smirking, avidly interested in the turn of events. I tuned him out.

“Byunghee!” I gripped his fingers and willed him to speak. They were so, so cold. “Why did you do that?!”

His eyes fluttered open. “As you said Mir...the rules were simple.” As he spoke, blood bubbled with spit and frothed forth. 

“Idiot! Idiot! Idiot! I thought this was going to be a fair fight to death!” Tears were streaming down my cheeks now, dripping onto Byunghee’s face and entwining with the knife wound I had landed on his cheek.

“Mir,” he said and it sounded like a sigh. “I want you to live.”

“B-but, then, why were you trying to kill me?”

Byunghee let out a tired chuckle. “Because it’s what Changsun would have wanted.”

“Changsun?” Now I was confused.

“Mir, you’re the first person Changsun has ever loved. And by love I mean the forever-I-want-hold-hands-with kind. You don’t know how difficult it is for that man to trust others, and yet you won him over in less than 24 hours.”

“But Changsun is dead…”

“And that’s my fault,” Byunghee said softly. “No Mir, I didn’t kill him. And I’m not the wolf. I promise you this.”

My eyebrows furrowed. “Then…?”

“But I owe Changsun. I’m the reason he’s in this prison, that he was on that stage with me right before he was killed. I asked the Ringmaster to save him as my wish, and whilst he granted it, he didn’t grant it in the way I would have wanted him to. Neither did he grant Changsun’s wish properly. Watch out for the Ringmaster Mir,” his fingers suddenly tightened on my hand. “Don’t trust what he says about granting wishes. Wishes should be granted by oneself and no one else.”

“But Byunghee…”

“Don’t cry pabo,” he said affectionately. “My wish has been granted and I don’t need to play this accursed game anymore. You on the other hand Mir, you have lots left to do.”

“But…but…to sacrifice yourself like that… then why did you even try to kill me?”

“Because I needed to make sure,” Byunghee whispered. I had to lean in close to hear him properly. “To make sure that even if I died and you lived, that you wouldn’t kill yourself. I needed to test your resolve to continue living. Or else my death would be meaningless.”

“And that’s what Changsun would have wanted? For me to continue living?”

“Yes.”

“Are you sure? Wouldn’t he want me to be right next to him in death?”

“Pabo!” he snapped, but it was soft and without force. “Do you really Changsun is that sort of person?”

“No, mianhe,” I ducked my head. How could I ever think of Changsun like that?

“My brother is the most self-sacrificing, loyal, brilliant man there ever is. And death won’t change that. He loves you, and he would want you to live no matter what.”

“Even at the cost of his own brother’s life?”

“I owe Changsun that. For not saving him back then, I’d give up everything to make sure the one person he treasured most in the world was saved.”

I was full on crying now.

“Byunghee…” I whispered, leaning in to sob against his chest. 

“Don’t be sad…Mir…” he whispered, but his voice was getting weaker and weaker. “Promise me you’ll live.”

“I promise,” I sobbed. “I promise Byunghee!”

“Good,” he sighed and his lids fluttered close. Against his chest I could feel his heart slowing, a thud…thud…thud… and then nothing more.

 

Seungho POV

This wasn’t how it was meant to end.

I stared at the scene in front of me: Mir crouched over Byunghee’s fallen body, the hilt of the knife still distinctly clear. 

Once Byunghee had fallen the cages had lowered like a bumpy elevator, the long black pylons vanishing into the blood-soaked sand. The spikes and thorns had fallen aside to release me and I was free, but the cost had been too high.

“Byunghee,” I whispered, but didn’t go close. This was Mir’s moment to say goodbye and I could not interrupt it.

Instead I stood, hands clenched and tried to quash the rising anger and grief in my chest. 

 

Thunder POV

Byunghee. Dead.

This was too much.

“You find this entertaining?” I snarled at the Ringmaster’s amused smirk.

[OF COURSE] he replied without an ounce of shame, fingers tapping the frozen clock next to him.

[TIME REMAINING: 8 SECONDS] 

I trembled with anger.

Byunghee had saved us.

But he hadn’t deserved to die.

The Ringmaster stood and hovered forwards. [AND SO THE COUNTDOWN TO SECOND DEATH HAS COME] he announced. Over Byunghee’s body, Mir lifted his head and glared with tear-streaked cheeks.

“You killed him,” Mir spat, fire and rust a chemical combination.

[YOU SAY THAT DESPITE HAVING SEEING WHOSE HAND WIELDED THAT KNIFE FIRST HAND?]

“You may have not killed Byunghee directly, but your stupid games have.”

[CORRECT YOU ARE,] the Ringmaster bowed his head. [BUT THAT WAS THE PRICE YOU PAID IN ORDER TO HAVE YOUR WISHES GRANTED. YOUR LIVES ARE MINE TO COMMAND]

“No they are not!” Mir rose to his feet, eyes livid. “You don’t grant our wishes. You manipulate them and toy with them, claiming that you have, but only in ways that benefits you.”

The Ringmaster’s eyes gleamed. [AND YOU HAVE A PROBLEM WITH THAT?]

“I do.”

[THEN IT’S SIMPLE] he said. [ESCAPE THE COLISEUM AND YOU’LL HAVE BOTH YOUR WISH AND YOUR FREEDOM]

“Freedom won’t bring back Changsun and Byunghee,” Mir snapped.

[NO IT WON’T] The Ringmaster sounded amused. [BUT IT WILL HAVE TO SUFFICE. SO SHALL WE PROCEED TO LEVEL FOUR?]

I staggered backwards as the floor suddenly rumbled. Exactly like how our transition from level 2 to level 3 had been, the floor beneath each of us rose, propelling us skyward and leaving Byunghee’s body behind.

“No!” yelled Mir, reaching out for Byunghee’s corpse, but the floors grew walls and extended out, shutting us in and locking us into a cage of darkness. 

...

...

...

[AND SO THE COUNTDOWN TO SECOND DEATH STRIKES ZERO]

[DEAD: 2, LIVING: 3]

[A COUNTDOWN TO THIRD DEATH BEGINS NOW]

[LET LEVEL FOUR BEGIN]

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annalulz
#1
I'm just rereading this again, hoping that one day you'll decide to update again *cries forever*
annalulz
#2
Chapter 65: I'm screaming omg Fia why why whyyyyy

Bye Mir you lived well. I have the feeling this isn't the last we'll see of him.... we still have the mystery of the coliseum left to puzzle the pieces together, idk why I think they're just appearing in the real world, without the government interfering with the deaths, maybe that's the path they take....

what on Earth is Sanghyun doing??? he doesn't seem completely evil but.... hmmmmm

I hope you can update after your trip, good luck and have fun ^_^
yumzibabe
#3
OMG! Another update!

I have to admit, I'm really behind on my reading but I will catch up!
School's been crazy busy so I haven't been spending much time on Aff but it's nice seeing your updates.
As busy as I am, I get super excited every time there's an update alert as well as the spoilers I'm getting from yours and annalulz's convo haha.

KEEP IT UP FIA! I'm still here and will be back SOON! :)
annalulz
#4
Chapter 64: SO YOU'RE SAYING THE WHITE SUIT JOON MET WHILE IN JAIL WAS SEUNGHO /SCREAMS

but shouldn't Joon have remembered Seungho was the white suit when he got his memories back? or is this one of those 'oops I have to go fix this later' moments?

Holy shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii-----

I knew it (again) ahahaha. I admit my wish to have Thunder be the wolf was my own biased-ness and wanting him to be bad, but I'm so happy I was right asjdashdialshd

Did he really kill Mir tho? I mean, if they all technically have bodies in the real world, Mir isn't really dead, his data is just lost somewhere right? Unless... dying in the Coliseum truly kills you, but nooooo okay, I don't want Mir dead, bring him back, omg don't let Thunder kill Seungho where is my SeungDoong ansdhadighasda I'm screaming.

Mastermind Doong is so evil TT__TT

BUT WAAAAIIIITTTTTT... why kill them all if he needs them? I mean what's the point of gathering everyone in these Games only to kill them all later? they obviously have something he needs, but wouldn't it be better to have them alive for that? Or does this has something to do with the real purpose of the Coliseum?

WHAT IS THE COLISEUM????
annalulz
#5
Chapter 63: FIA OMG WELCOME BACK I MISSED YOU I MISSED THIS FIC JESUS CHRIST I'M GONNA CRY XD

I want to give a full insight comment but I'm just flailing around from excitement and I don't know what to say. I need to tie this in in my head with the rest of the story first so I'll do that later XD

but omg can I say I KNEW IT even when you weren't sure yourself RM was Rain? I remember you telling me that but maybe I'm wrong. Anyway...

I KNEWWWWW IIIIIITTTT

and I think I was right about Doongie too *insert wolf howl here* hahahaha

but if this is going where I think this is going, the Mastermind behind everything is Sanghyun and I'm feeling his super awesome plan has back-fired on him, so the question remains who is the wolf? who is the ringmaster?

And what in the name of Loki is The Coliseum? there is more to it isn't there? and what are ll these other things Sanghyun knows about the Digiworld. (yeah I'm still calling it that XD)

I was gonna start kicking you about this chapter update but I forgot. But don't worry I'll be kicking you soon for the next one. I am not letting you take a million years for the next update at this point in the game :3
innocent-bystander #6
Chapter 62: The hacking was so intense...
annalulz
#7
Chapter 62: OKAY OHMYGOD WHAT JUST HAPPENED

You updated *cries tears of joy*

First of all, what? Second of all WHAT? Third of all WHAAAATTTT'????!!!

I'm glad Sanghyun could find both his sisters, but damn poor Durami, I honestly hope she can get herself a physical body, but, in the eventual case they go back into the real world, she won't be able to go back :(

And, wow, I wasn't expecting the Christmas Program/Virus to be THAT, and Mir god, he could have killed everyone o.O

Is this how Seungho ended up joining the Ringmaster? I need to check up because I'm really lost on the timeline xD (I will have to reread this again) but by this point, Joon and G.O have already been recruited by the RM? I thought maybe Durami, Sanghyun and Dara could have come up with the Carnival Games and maybe even that Durami was the RM... I still have my suspicions about her but I don't think Dara and Thunder would come up with the games, then again, I don't think Durami would purposefully torture her own brother with the games, so yeah, I'm probably pretty off with that theory... or am I?

I'm glad the Park Siblings could modify the code before Mir killed everyone, but I do have to wonder about his reaction when he sees what happened. I still want Joon and G.O back, give me back my babos TT__TT

Anywayssss, my big question right now is HOW THE HELL DID MIR SEUNGHO AND THUNDER JOINED THE RM? Who is the RM? (sorry for capsing but I'm excited haha, please don't take 1234567890 months to update again ;-;) I did like that little moment where their paths kinda sorta crossed, and ooh Thunder sort of knows who Mir is. Oh wait, this is bad, this is bad bad bad. What if Thunder feels some sort of resentment towards Mir for coding the Xmas program and almost killing his sisters? asjdghasjjasdalsd
annalulz
#8
Chapter 61: okay, omg, I'm dead. Finally a bit of Thunder xD

this part "His body reacted as it
should in times of stress, his
brain sending signals to produce
norepinephrine and cortisol. His
heart rate increased, his
breathing quickened. His eyes
dilated and he could feel his
skin flush" made me feel like I was watching Criminal Minds, or Sherlock haha.

I imagined that the story of the real world would be like that, te pollution and all, but wow, Sanghyun's backstory is so heartbreaking. Are they clones or the product of female and male DNA? (I might be asking too indepth questions for your unplotted backstory sorry xP) but wow, Mir and Doong are sort of crossing paths. And, was that the RM meeting Mir?

The Cryocells remind me if the recuperation chambers in DBZ xD.

And that bit about Dara, that does give hope for Joon and G.O I think. When you told me there were deaths I thought it would be obe of the boys. I guess Dara's death is going to be Sanghyun's bigest motivator, but he only has 24 days, so I guess the games have to happen before those days are over, unless there's no hope for her?

There was something about the timeline of how they were recruited by the RM but I forgot the thought while watching Friends ;-;

I hope you can give us a faster update, gah the MBLAQ tag is dead *cries*