13:20– A Countdown to Third Death [10:40am]

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Chapter 42:  13:20– A Countdown to Third Death [10:40am]

Thunder POV

Without thinking I jumped, grabbing Seungho’s ankle and yanking him down. We landed hard on the sand below, and the lioness’ extended claws skimmed his scalp by centimeters. A gasp came out as I watched those ivory weapons gorge long streaks into the metal of the ladder like a knife cutting through butter. If I had been just seconds too late, those claws would have sliced through a very different sort of material.

“Run!” Mir yelled and I wanted to yell back, that’s what I’m trying to do!, but all my energy was expended on yanking Seungho onto his feet and pulling him away from the lioness who landed with grace, turning so that her tail lashed. Irritation sparked in her amber eyes. She followed us slowly, impertinently so, as if she thought she had all the time in the world to catch her prey.

Not that we’re that easy, I thought vehemently.

“Head for the other ladder!” Mir said, as he raced ahead of us.

“Stop!” Seungho yelled and reached out, hands tangling in the material of Mir’s shirt and pulling him to a sudden stop.

“Wha-?”

“Look,” Seungho hissed and that was when I realized the sounds of growling had intensified, echoing around me in a 360 stereo.

I turned cautiously, only to see another pair of amber eyes form out of thin air, barely a meter from my face. Eyes that stretched and curved into long, sleek strikes and a burnished orange coat. A tiger in all its burning glory. It huffed, an animalistic little action of freedom and prowled around us in a circle. I had never been stiller.

From my peripheral vision I could see more felines appearing, sleek shadowy shapes of lashing tails and silent paws. They encircled us, their lips hungrily. The air practically crackled with tension; we suffocated under the heavy weight of their watching eyes.

“Mir?” I hissed, tracking the closest lion with my eyes.

“Yeah?” he replied, equally frightened.

“How far away is that rope ladder? If we can get up that platform, we should be safe.”

“About five meters,” Mir whispered in response.

“But how are we going to get there? They’re watching us from every angle,” Seungho hissed. I could feel his hot breath against my neck and it tickled.

 “A distraction?” I suggested, but I knew there was nothing to throw. No movement we could perform without alerting the beasts. “It’ll have to be one of us,” I came to the conclusion. Seungho and Mir both snapped their heads round to look at me.

“Thunder…” Seungho gave me a warning tone.

“Umm hyung…Thunder…” Mir stared past me. I turned to see what he was looking at. At least twenty felines were watching us with a hungry gaze, their eyes fixed and unmoving. If it weren’t for their twitching tails, I would’ve said they were mere statues. The numbers seemed to only be growing. “I don’t think any distractions are going to work here…”

“I think,” I swallowed, “you might be right Mir.”

The lion closest to me twitched his nose and roared wide and loud right in my face. It did not smell good. I held my breath and closed my eyes, trying not to envision the lion behind it.

“Move it!” It was Seungho’s turn to grab my sleeve and drag me away, as the lion snapped close its maw and decided to lunge. As if it were a signal, the other twenty-so animals clicked into action and pounced. Seungho let go of my sleeve and I turned, scrambling and kicking up sand as I avoided one tigress’ vicious swipe.

“Climb first!” Seungho yelled to Mir who was staring at us, frozen on the spot. “Hurry!”

Mir snapped out of his reverie and placed one foot to the swaying rope ladder. It was fragile and shaking, but panic put aside any questions about athletic abilities and he shimmied up the short ladder and onto the platform above. Seungho was seconds behind him, one hand grasping and steadying the ladder just as Mir swung one leg over and onto the platform.

“Duck!” I shouted  as a lion pounced high, paws arcing towards Seungho’s exposed back and I was too far away to do anything this time. But Mir’s hand shot out and he grabbed Seungho’s outstretched one, and in an amazing feat of strength, he hauled Seungho up and onto the platform.

But the force of pulling Seungho up made him topple forwards and Mir was falling…

“NO!” a yell left me without my realization as Mir’s path would lead him right into the jaws of two particularly hungry looking leopards. “Mir!” I called out, knowing it was futile as even if Mir knew, he couldn’t move. And I was too far away to do anything. Seungho, too high up to save him. Powerless. Incapable. Mir falling, lips .

Time seemed to slow as Mir twisted, his amber eyes widening at the realization of his fate and I almost wished he didn’t. The last thing he needed to know was how he was to meet his end.

I stretched out, a subconscious last resort action.

And then there was a sudden explosion of dirt. My hands instinctively flew up to block my face as dust barreled past, stinging my eyes and face. Around me I could hear mewls and yelps as the felines were pushed backwards by the sheer wind that was blowing. Their sensitive eyes and whiskers would feel even more pain than I did. Surprisingly though I held my ground, skidding only slightly.

Then, as the sandstorm slowly dissipated, I chanced a glance.

Large jagged shards of the dirt and sand that had formed the Big Top’s flooring made a circular ring around where Mir would have fallen. But there was no sign of my friend.

“Mir?” I called out hesitantly, taking a step forwards.

“He’s down there…” someone replied and it was Seungho. He was looking down from above with a stunned expression plastered to his face.

“Inside there?” I pointed.

Seungho nodded and swallowed. “Mir…” he called out. “Are you okay?”

For a moment, silence. And then Mir piped up in a thin, wavering voice. “I-I’m fine…I think…”

Relief filled me like a balloon and helium at the sound of his voice. He was okay. He was alive. And he was…in the middle of a strange earth formation thing?

“Mir? Can you get out of that…thing?” I asked, not entirely sure where to direct my voice.

“Um yeah,” Mir replied and I could hear the shuffling of his feet as presumably he stood up.

How are you going to do that? I wanted to ask. The shards were about ten feet tall and they overlapped so that there seemed to be no way out. Unless Mir could somehow climb the formation-

My thoughts came to an abrupt halt as one shard slid down and seemed to vanish into the floor. Or more like the base crumbled back to dust until it was entirely gone. And what was left behind was Mir’s pale, dusty face. He stood, looking a little unbelieving and with his palm held flat out towards the shard that had retracted.

My mind whirred. “Did…you do that Mir?” I asked. My throat felt dry with dust and sand and disbelief.

Mir just nodded slowly. “I think…so…” he stared at his hands, letting them drop.

What had Mir just done? Manipulate Earth? Wasn’t that just like what…

“The Ringmaster could do…” Mir voiced my thoughts. He slowly looked up to meet my eyes and I could tell inside horrified thoughts were writing soliloquies. Mir’s hands trembled and though in the past fourteen hours Mir had had every reason to misstrust every other living being on this planet, this was the first time I had ever seen Mir have reason to fear himself. 

And it broke my heart. 

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annalulz
#1
I'm just rereading this again, hoping that one day you'll decide to update again *cries forever*
annalulz
#2
Chapter 65: I'm screaming omg Fia why why whyyyyy

Bye Mir you lived well. I have the feeling this isn't the last we'll see of him.... we still have the mystery of the coliseum left to puzzle the pieces together, idk why I think they're just appearing in the real world, without the government interfering with the deaths, maybe that's the path they take....

what on Earth is Sanghyun doing??? he doesn't seem completely evil but.... hmmmmm

I hope you can update after your trip, good luck and have fun ^_^
yumzibabe
#3
OMG! Another update!

I have to admit, I'm really behind on my reading but I will catch up!
School's been crazy busy so I haven't been spending much time on Aff but it's nice seeing your updates.
As busy as I am, I get super excited every time there's an update alert as well as the spoilers I'm getting from yours and annalulz's convo haha.

KEEP IT UP FIA! I'm still here and will be back SOON! :)
annalulz
#4
Chapter 64: SO YOU'RE SAYING THE WHITE SUIT JOON MET WHILE IN JAIL WAS SEUNGHO /SCREAMS

but shouldn't Joon have remembered Seungho was the white suit when he got his memories back? or is this one of those 'oops I have to go fix this later' moments?

Holy shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii-----

I knew it (again) ahahaha. I admit my wish to have Thunder be the wolf was my own biased-ness and wanting him to be bad, but I'm so happy I was right asjdashdialshd

Did he really kill Mir tho? I mean, if they all technically have bodies in the real world, Mir isn't really dead, his data is just lost somewhere right? Unless... dying in the Coliseum truly kills you, but nooooo okay, I don't want Mir dead, bring him back, omg don't let Thunder kill Seungho where is my SeungDoong ansdhadighasda I'm screaming.

Mastermind Doong is so evil TT__TT

BUT WAAAAIIIITTTTTT... why kill them all if he needs them? I mean what's the point of gathering everyone in these Games only to kill them all later? they obviously have something he needs, but wouldn't it be better to have them alive for that? Or does this has something to do with the real purpose of the Coliseum?

WHAT IS THE COLISEUM????
annalulz
#5
Chapter 63: FIA OMG WELCOME BACK I MISSED YOU I MISSED THIS FIC JESUS CHRIST I'M GONNA CRY XD

I want to give a full insight comment but I'm just flailing around from excitement and I don't know what to say. I need to tie this in in my head with the rest of the story first so I'll do that later XD

but omg can I say I KNEW IT even when you weren't sure yourself RM was Rain? I remember you telling me that but maybe I'm wrong. Anyway...

I KNEWWWWW IIIIIITTTT

and I think I was right about Doongie too *insert wolf howl here* hahahaha

but if this is going where I think this is going, the Mastermind behind everything is Sanghyun and I'm feeling his super awesome plan has back-fired on him, so the question remains who is the wolf? who is the ringmaster?

And what in the name of Loki is The Coliseum? there is more to it isn't there? and what are ll these other things Sanghyun knows about the Digiworld. (yeah I'm still calling it that XD)

I was gonna start kicking you about this chapter update but I forgot. But don't worry I'll be kicking you soon for the next one. I am not letting you take a million years for the next update at this point in the game :3
innocent-bystander #6
Chapter 62: The hacking was so intense...
annalulz
#7
Chapter 62: OKAY OHMYGOD WHAT JUST HAPPENED

You updated *cries tears of joy*

First of all, what? Second of all WHAT? Third of all WHAAAATTTT'????!!!

I'm glad Sanghyun could find both his sisters, but damn poor Durami, I honestly hope she can get herself a physical body, but, in the eventual case they go back into the real world, she won't be able to go back :(

And, wow, I wasn't expecting the Christmas Program/Virus to be THAT, and Mir god, he could have killed everyone o.O

Is this how Seungho ended up joining the Ringmaster? I need to check up because I'm really lost on the timeline xD (I will have to reread this again) but by this point, Joon and G.O have already been recruited by the RM? I thought maybe Durami, Sanghyun and Dara could have come up with the Carnival Games and maybe even that Durami was the RM... I still have my suspicions about her but I don't think Dara and Thunder would come up with the games, then again, I don't think Durami would purposefully torture her own brother with the games, so yeah, I'm probably pretty off with that theory... or am I?

I'm glad the Park Siblings could modify the code before Mir killed everyone, but I do have to wonder about his reaction when he sees what happened. I still want Joon and G.O back, give me back my babos TT__TT

Anywayssss, my big question right now is HOW THE HELL DID MIR SEUNGHO AND THUNDER JOINED THE RM? Who is the RM? (sorry for capsing but I'm excited haha, please don't take 1234567890 months to update again ;-;) I did like that little moment where their paths kinda sorta crossed, and ooh Thunder sort of knows who Mir is. Oh wait, this is bad, this is bad bad bad. What if Thunder feels some sort of resentment towards Mir for coding the Xmas program and almost killing his sisters? asjdghasjjasdalsd
annalulz
#8
Chapter 61: okay, omg, I'm dead. Finally a bit of Thunder xD

this part "His body reacted as it
should in times of stress, his
brain sending signals to produce
norepinephrine and cortisol. His
heart rate increased, his
breathing quickened. His eyes
dilated and he could feel his
skin flush" made me feel like I was watching Criminal Minds, or Sherlock haha.

I imagined that the story of the real world would be like that, te pollution and all, but wow, Sanghyun's backstory is so heartbreaking. Are they clones or the product of female and male DNA? (I might be asking too indepth questions for your unplotted backstory sorry xP) but wow, Mir and Doong are sort of crossing paths. And, was that the RM meeting Mir?

The Cryocells remind me if the recuperation chambers in DBZ xD.

And that bit about Dara, that does give hope for Joon and G.O I think. When you told me there were deaths I thought it would be obe of the boys. I guess Dara's death is going to be Sanghyun's bigest motivator, but he only has 24 days, so I guess the games have to happen before those days are over, unless there's no hope for her?

There was something about the timeline of how they were recruited by the RM but I forgot the thought while watching Friends ;-;

I hope you can give us a faster update, gah the MBLAQ tag is dead *cries*