20:24 – A Countdown to First Death [03:36am]

24 Hours

 

Chapter 16: 20:24 – A Countdown to First Death [03:36am]

Joon POV

“Please…” Byunghee said in a ragged voice. “Let me explain.”

I stared at him. He looked so small, so crippled down there on his knees. And then there was Seungho. He was stronger than he looked. That I knew from my brief tussle with him. The skin on my left side still tingled and I knew if I examined them later there would be purple bruises.

“Fine,” I gave in. What would two minutes do to months of rage? “Speak.”

 

Seungho POV

How had this all spiraled out of control so quickly? Just hours ago we had been as tightly-knit as could be. We had survived the first trial. We were ecstatic. We were a family of sorts. A rag-tag brought-together-by-pain family. But a family all the same. And now here we were, fighting, talking about killing. The ringmaster had been right. It wasn’t just him that would kill us. Our pasts were the catalysts.

G.O, or should I say Byunghee, spoke. His voice was quiet. It sounded defeated.

“I wanted to save you!” he said, his voice tight with sorrow. “If I had known the enforcer’s judgment, I would have run straight for you. Heck, if I had known you were in jail I would have been there no matter what broken limbs I had or whatever thunder fell from the sky.”

Joon’s eyes narrowed.

“But you see Changsun, when that explosion went off and you were thrown into the water, I was knocked unconscious.”

“What?!” Joon’s eyes widened.

And so Byunghee told his story.

 

REWIND <<<<<<

Byunghee threw his arms up, a feeble attempt to protect his face as he was thrown backwards. He gritted his teeth, trying to control the pain that threaten to show, but suddenly there was rough slap to his back. In that one moment, Byunghee curled forwards, the after effects squeezing all the air out of his body and sending him reeling, blackness slashing through his vision. It felt like several ribs shattered in the process.  

Byunghee cursed and crawled on all fours, trying to move, but his brain wasn’t computing with his body and his sight was all blurry.

Byunghee tried to stand, but the pain was too great. He could feel the heat his face and he knew he had to hurry. But as sensation returned to his body, so did the pain. He tried not to focus on his haggard breathing or the feeling of stabbing needles every time he in a deep breath.

Shallow breaths Byunghee, he told himself as he clutched his chest.

But the pain was clearing his thoughts and his vision. The surrounds were taking shape. It was then that Byunghee finally took in the situation. His back was to a sturdy black pole, one of the many tall blocks that shipmasters used to chain their boats to. That had been what had stopped him from flying into the harbor and its relentless cold clutches.

Flying into the harbor...

"Changsun!" Byunghee raised his head, looking around vividly for his familiar shock of black hair. Where was he? Then he stopped. He wasn't sure how he would face Changsun. Just moments ago he had rejected him. But that didn't change just how important his brother was to him. Every family had their fights and in he heat of the moment, frustration tossed reason to the winds and Byunghee had been ruled by his emotions. But when it came down to the wire, his brother's safety was all that mattered. 

"Damn," Byunghee swore as he looked ahead of him. It was like an apocalypse early to its own party. Fire raged over the warehouse where the items Byunghee was meant to transport lay. It sizzled through the night sky, lighting it up in a demonic manner. All around him was noise and more flashing lights and he just couldn’t concentrate.

A warehouse he would have been in if Changsun hadn't intervened. 

Damn. Changsun. 

They needed to have words. 

He tried to focus on that. He looked left and right, movements slow like an old man. But everything was a blur. It was too unreal. Tonight should have been the night of his initiation ceremony. The night he finally made his mother proud. The night he finally reclaimed his father’s legacy. Instead, he had roughly pushed away the one man who had been looking out for his safety. He had his reasons of why he was so heated up, but it had been no excuse for how he had treated Changsun. 

Byunghee grabbed the steel pole and hoisted himself upright. The pain was greater than anything he could have imagined, it was like white hot flames had seared his torso. He nearly doubled over, dry-vomiting from the sheer agony the sharp movement brought. But the thought of finding his brother over-rode everything and Byunghee took one ginger step forwards. Stab. Another one. Stab.

Step 1: find Changsun. Step 2: apologize. Step 3: explain to Changsun why he had been so desperate for the job. Step 4-

BOOM!

Another explosion roared, a wild stallion released from its stables, half mad and frothing. Byunghee staggered backwards and toppled onto a small boat. The boat he was meant to escape in. As he tried to upright himself, Byunghee noticed a small black box. A red light at the leftmost corner flickered.

Beep. Beep. Beep.

Byunghee stared at it and slowly realization washed over him like a cold shower.

Bomb.

Too late.

It exploded and Byunghee was lost in a world of crunched wood, flying shrapnel and lost legacies.

► PLAY

Byunghee POV

“You were right Changsun,” I said. “The BlackBeards never wanted me to succeed. The bomb in the warehouse was to cover their traces. The bomb in the boat that I was supposed to use to transport the goods was meant to kill me.”

Joon stared at me. He hadn’t moved an inch since I had begun telling my story. The only thing that had changed was the growing expression of horror.

I continued. “The explosion very nearly killed me if I jumped into the harbor first. However, the blowback force blew me into the pier and I lost consciousness.”

“And…?” Joon his lips nervously.

“The enforcers rescued me. The small scale bomb alerted them to where I was and they found me quickly. I was send to hospital where I was unconscious for the next two days…”

“And then when I woke up, they told me that you had been arrested and thrown into jail." I looked at him mournfully. "I protested, asking them to let me see you. To explain. And only then did they tell me that 24 hours after being locked away,you...you had vanished without a trace."

 

Joon POV

Unconscious for two days? Nearly killed by the BlackBeards…?! Asked to see me, only to be too late? Was what Byunghee was telling me the truth? Had he really tried to come for me but failed?!  

I opened my mouth, ready to speak but no words came out. What could I say to him?

I stared at Byunghee’s face, so distressed was his eyes and so grieved was the press of his mouth. I wanted to believe him, I really did. But the fear and the anger of those days in jail kept coming back to me, a zombie resurrected, a black cloud that would never leave. I could not simply forget those memories, those horrific moments when I was sentenced for a crime I did not commit and my sister was killed for doing what was right.

“Say something,” Byunghee said in a ragged voice.

My mouth opened and closed.

“I-“

Suddenly the floor underneath us rumbled like a giant waking from its century long sleep.

“What?!” cried out Seungho as he tried to keep balance.

It felt like the wooden floor beneath us was rearranging itself, the boards slipping here and there and then we were moving and the entire scenery was shifting. The red walls of velvet vanished and then there was bright lights and a wide open plane.

I stared around me, my guard still up. Still wary.

“Where are we?” Byunghee whispered, equally wide-eyed.

Behind me was a dark sheath of wood, to the sides were two dark corridors. And in front of us was a thick waterfall of royal red. Curtains.

Seungho answered Byunghee’s question in a hushed whisper, magnified a thousandfold in the empty space.

“We’re standing on the Roman Theatre stage.”

 

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annalulz
#1
I'm just rereading this again, hoping that one day you'll decide to update again *cries forever*
annalulz
#2
Chapter 65: I'm screaming omg Fia why why whyyyyy

Bye Mir you lived well. I have the feeling this isn't the last we'll see of him.... we still have the mystery of the coliseum left to puzzle the pieces together, idk why I think they're just appearing in the real world, without the government interfering with the deaths, maybe that's the path they take....

what on Earth is Sanghyun doing??? he doesn't seem completely evil but.... hmmmmm

I hope you can update after your trip, good luck and have fun ^_^
yumzibabe
#3
OMG! Another update!

I have to admit, I'm really behind on my reading but I will catch up!
School's been crazy busy so I haven't been spending much time on Aff but it's nice seeing your updates.
As busy as I am, I get super excited every time there's an update alert as well as the spoilers I'm getting from yours and annalulz's convo haha.

KEEP IT UP FIA! I'm still here and will be back SOON! :)
annalulz
#4
Chapter 64: SO YOU'RE SAYING THE WHITE SUIT JOON MET WHILE IN JAIL WAS SEUNGHO /SCREAMS

but shouldn't Joon have remembered Seungho was the white suit when he got his memories back? or is this one of those 'oops I have to go fix this later' moments?

Holy shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii-----

I knew it (again) ahahaha. I admit my wish to have Thunder be the wolf was my own biased-ness and wanting him to be bad, but I'm so happy I was right asjdashdialshd

Did he really kill Mir tho? I mean, if they all technically have bodies in the real world, Mir isn't really dead, his data is just lost somewhere right? Unless... dying in the Coliseum truly kills you, but nooooo okay, I don't want Mir dead, bring him back, omg don't let Thunder kill Seungho where is my SeungDoong ansdhadighasda I'm screaming.

Mastermind Doong is so evil TT__TT

BUT WAAAAIIIITTTTTT... why kill them all if he needs them? I mean what's the point of gathering everyone in these Games only to kill them all later? they obviously have something he needs, but wouldn't it be better to have them alive for that? Or does this has something to do with the real purpose of the Coliseum?

WHAT IS THE COLISEUM????
annalulz
#5
Chapter 63: FIA OMG WELCOME BACK I MISSED YOU I MISSED THIS FIC JESUS CHRIST I'M GONNA CRY XD

I want to give a full insight comment but I'm just flailing around from excitement and I don't know what to say. I need to tie this in in my head with the rest of the story first so I'll do that later XD

but omg can I say I KNEW IT even when you weren't sure yourself RM was Rain? I remember you telling me that but maybe I'm wrong. Anyway...

I KNEWWWWW IIIIIITTTT

and I think I was right about Doongie too *insert wolf howl here* hahahaha

but if this is going where I think this is going, the Mastermind behind everything is Sanghyun and I'm feeling his super awesome plan has back-fired on him, so the question remains who is the wolf? who is the ringmaster?

And what in the name of Loki is The Coliseum? there is more to it isn't there? and what are ll these other things Sanghyun knows about the Digiworld. (yeah I'm still calling it that XD)

I was gonna start kicking you about this chapter update but I forgot. But don't worry I'll be kicking you soon for the next one. I am not letting you take a million years for the next update at this point in the game :3
innocent-bystander #6
Chapter 62: The hacking was so intense...
annalulz
#7
Chapter 62: OKAY OHMYGOD WHAT JUST HAPPENED

You updated *cries tears of joy*

First of all, what? Second of all WHAT? Third of all WHAAAATTTT'????!!!

I'm glad Sanghyun could find both his sisters, but damn poor Durami, I honestly hope she can get herself a physical body, but, in the eventual case they go back into the real world, she won't be able to go back :(

And, wow, I wasn't expecting the Christmas Program/Virus to be THAT, and Mir god, he could have killed everyone o.O

Is this how Seungho ended up joining the Ringmaster? I need to check up because I'm really lost on the timeline xD (I will have to reread this again) but by this point, Joon and G.O have already been recruited by the RM? I thought maybe Durami, Sanghyun and Dara could have come up with the Carnival Games and maybe even that Durami was the RM... I still have my suspicions about her but I don't think Dara and Thunder would come up with the games, then again, I don't think Durami would purposefully torture her own brother with the games, so yeah, I'm probably pretty off with that theory... or am I?

I'm glad the Park Siblings could modify the code before Mir killed everyone, but I do have to wonder about his reaction when he sees what happened. I still want Joon and G.O back, give me back my babos TT__TT

Anywayssss, my big question right now is HOW THE HELL DID MIR SEUNGHO AND THUNDER JOINED THE RM? Who is the RM? (sorry for capsing but I'm excited haha, please don't take 1234567890 months to update again ;-;) I did like that little moment where their paths kinda sorta crossed, and ooh Thunder sort of knows who Mir is. Oh wait, this is bad, this is bad bad bad. What if Thunder feels some sort of resentment towards Mir for coding the Xmas program and almost killing his sisters? asjdghasjjasdalsd
annalulz
#8
Chapter 61: okay, omg, I'm dead. Finally a bit of Thunder xD

this part "His body reacted as it
should in times of stress, his
brain sending signals to produce
norepinephrine and cortisol. His
heart rate increased, his
breathing quickened. His eyes
dilated and he could feel his
skin flush" made me feel like I was watching Criminal Minds, or Sherlock haha.

I imagined that the story of the real world would be like that, te pollution and all, but wow, Sanghyun's backstory is so heartbreaking. Are they clones or the product of female and male DNA? (I might be asking too indepth questions for your unplotted backstory sorry xP) but wow, Mir and Doong are sort of crossing paths. And, was that the RM meeting Mir?

The Cryocells remind me if the recuperation chambers in DBZ xD.

And that bit about Dara, that does give hope for Joon and G.O I think. When you told me there were deaths I thought it would be obe of the boys. I guess Dara's death is going to be Sanghyun's bigest motivator, but he only has 24 days, so I guess the games have to happen before those days are over, unless there's no hope for her?

There was something about the timeline of how they were recruited by the RM but I forgot the thought while watching Friends ;-;

I hope you can give us a faster update, gah the MBLAQ tag is dead *cries*