Chapter 6: OMG. THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL. Thank you for writing this. I hope you're still writing, even if it's something small nowadays. I hope you're healthy too, or at least as healthy as you can be.
Chapter 6: Oh my... I cry so hard. Of course you had to go and kill my two favorites off first... I have a feeling the rest will die too. It would make sense... But my heart.. It hurts. Your writing skills are amazing btw and the whole idea of the Fade.. It's brilliant.
Chapter 6: Wow.... Okay wow. Just wow. I mean, wow. Okay I don't know anymore. It was just freaking amazing and wow. Okay okay. Hahahahahahaha! I truly anticipate this. I love you. Omygod.
Chapter 6: Please update soon I want to know if Yoongi is ok or did the fade take him an who is left alive I know the fade hasn't even started on Seokjin yet but the others I know that some of them have been taken by the fade I'm crying again
This....is...so great....
This is the first time I've ever read a story that so painfully beautiful.
I cried so hard and after that I had to watch BTS' funny videos otherwise I might end up crying again.
You're so genius for writing the story that fits so much with mv.
Ah, and here I am crying again.....
Chapter 1: I just begin to read this - and the first chapter reminds me so much of Wayward Pines! It's just one chapter but I already creeped out by it, hahaha.
Anyway, you should start your own book - or you already have it? Your writing is just so good, really, and it will be great if you can make ur own novel!! (Just saying)
Well, still five chapters to go, I'll comment again when I finished!
Chapter 6: Oh my gosh...this is why I soooo love your writing style. Well, not that I'm complaining but some of the other long stories I had read with other authors somehow bored me when they update with chapters that is kinda repeating what had already happened and kept on messing up with the plot, making it confusing. In here, you expressed the storyline perfectly and you fitted it to their MV. I absolutely love how it was all fluffy at first but then the conflict comes and /boom/. It's a legit heartbreaker. I really like the plot twists. I honestly thought that Hoseok will be the first to die/fade, but it was actually the cute and playful Jungkook. When you added one of my fave phrases, "What goes around comes around", I was totally amused. And this last chapter that I read, with the lily symbolism, hope for the cure, Taehyung getting better (My happy feels were holding onto it) to Yoongi dying. I thought that this chapter will end happily, but no. And also, thank you for that small hint of YoonMin c: I am patiently waiting for your update soon and keep up the good work :D (sorry for the long comment...)
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