19:59 – A Countdown to First Death [04:01am]

24 Hours

 

Chapter 18: 19:59 – A Countdown to First Death [04:01am]
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“What are you doing?!” the male enforcer snarled. “We’re never supposed to take off our visors, especially not in front of criminals!”

“Shut up,” the woman snapped. “This is my little brother and he is most definitely not a criminal.”

“Ahhh,” the male enforcer grinned. “I see…”

“I’m certain that you do not.”

“Oh but I do,” the grin became cocky. “But you know, as enforcers we can’t let emotions cloud our judgments. And he may be family, but you know rules are rules.”

“Shut up,” the woman said in a voice that was to be reckoned with.

“Ji-su noona!” Changsun pressed himself against the bars almost as if they didn’t exist. He reached out, trying to touch her. “Please listen to me!”

“Shhh my silly little brother,” Ji-su knelt down and put a finger to his lips. His eyes grew wide, starved of love. It had been nearly four years since his sister had joined the enforcers and ever since she had left, they had only received one letters with curt words of  “I’m fine, please do not contact” engraved onto white in black print It had broken his heart.

“I believe you.” And that was all Changsun needed to hear. “I’ll get you out of here.”

“Did you not hear me!” the male enforcer growled, annoyed at being ignored. “Enforcer!”

“How many times do I have to tell you to shut your trap, Kim-ssi.” Her politeness was almost frightening. Enforcer Kim swallowed hard. “I am of a higher rank than you. So shut up and let me deal with this.”

But Enforcer Kim wasn’t one to stand down. “You’re thinking with your heart and not your head.”

“Both can think simultaneous,” she snapped back.

Enforcer Kim shook his head and backed away. “You’re wrong.” And then he was gone.

Ji-su turned back to her little brother, her eyes urgent and her hands gripping his thin jail clothes. “Tell me what happened little brother, tell me everything.”

Changsun nodded and proceeded to tell her the tale of the past few weeks.

***

In a hospital room far away, a monitor beeped.

“Byunghee?” came a fearful whisper from a woman clutching the sleeping patient’s hand. Byunghee’s face was twisted with pain. “Are you awake?”

Byunghee coughed, but the monitor indicated no change – he was dead to the world in sleep. 

***

“I see,” Ji-su bit her bottom lip. A habit Changsun knew she did when she was thinking hard. “I’ll go talk to the higher up officers immediately,” she said and stood up.

“Noona!” Changsun cried. He didn’t want to be left alone again.

“Shhh,” she smiled at her little brother affectionately. “I’ll only be gone for an hour or so. Once I tell them your story, they’ll be better equipped to find evidence for your defense. Everything’s going to be okay Changsun.”

Changsun blinked and nodded, squashing the fear of loneliness down. “Arasso noona…”

“Aww don’t give me that look,” Ji-su tugged his cheeks. “I love you little brother.”

"Hey noona..." Changsun said the words before he could regret it. Ji-su turned and tilted her head. 

"Yes?"

"Can I ask you one thing?"

"Anything little brother."

Changsun opened his mouth, half-hesitant. It was the question that always bugged him, nudged him as he drifted to sleep and haunted him at the dinner table that seated four but was set for three.

"Noona...why did you join the enforcers?"

Her reaction was immediate. Black eyes flew wide open and was working like she was trying to formulate an answer but knew whatever it was, it would not be satisfactory. 

"Later Changsun," she finally said. "First comes first is your clearance. Then..."

"Promise you'll tell me," Changsun's eyes bore into her. He would not accept excuses or running away. "I deserve the truth." 

Ji-su looked deep into them and let out a sigh of defeat. "Yes little brother. I promise."

Then she spun on her heel, briefly bending to snatch her discarded visor and she was gone. Changsun never felt more alone. 

***

 

In a skyscraper far away, a phone rings. A man taps a button and a visual flickers into the air immediately. The speaker is dressed in military black, the black visor in his hand. His hair is streaked with white. 

 

"Sir," sculpted words flow through the line. In the skyscraper, a man taps the table with one hand and nods. 

"What is it Enforcer?" he asks in a cold tone. 

"We have an issue on our hands. Something that we could deal with by ourselves but..."

"Speak," snaps the well-dressed man. He wears a blue pinstripe suit today. 

"But it involves the Christmas virus and I believe you requested you be informed of anything to do with the subject."

"I did..." the man replies slowly, mulling something over in his mind. The white-haired enforcer watches nervously. Military is one thing, the government a whole other realm. 

The enforcer continues, "We have detained a man suspected of trafficking the virus. He pleads innocence." The enforcer then waits. 

Finally the governmental man speaks, "Very well. I'll come down personally. Be prepared to recieve me in a hour's time." He flicks off the screen before the enforcer can say any more and spins around in his chair. He clasps his hands tightly together and closes his eyes. 

"I'll save you," he whispers to a photo. It is black and white and faded with time, the edges creased with touch. 

Then he puts away the photo in a drawer, stands up and goes to his wardrobe. There, he pulls out a standard white suit. It gleams against the night skyline of the destitute world he lives in. There are no stars in the sky. The man puts on the suit and quickly leaves, the door shutting quietly behind him. 

***

It had been nearly two hours since Ji-su had gone. Changsun was beginning to worry.

Sudden footsteps alerted him to the return of people. More than one, that much he could tell.

“Sir!” came a frustrated voice. Ji-su’s. “It’s clear he’s innocent!”

“Enough Enforcer Lee,” snapped the voice of an older man. “Be quiet or you will compromise your position. I’ve been thinking of promoting you, but if you continue to speak in that manner, I will rethink my offer."

It was three people however who entered the room where Changsun was jailed. He looked at them. One was his sister, eyes narrowed and cheeks flushed. The man who had spoken back to her was old enough, around fifty with peppered white hair and cold black eyes. From his garments, he seeemed to be of a high position. What he was doing down here Changsun wasn’t sure.

The third man was not an enforcer. He wore the white suit of a government official. Some high class job. Now Changsun was definitely confused as to why a white collar was down here on the mid-levels. He stood slightly back from the other two and surveyed the jail - and Changsun in it - with disdainful eyes from behind his blue shaded sunglasses.

“Sir,” the older enforcer bowed. “This is the criminal caught attempting to transport vials of the Christmas virus.”

The white collar stepped forwards and tugged down his sunglasses. His eyes were cold as ice.

“Did any traces of the virus escape?” he asked, his voice was like warm honey, contrasting his eyes greatly. 

“None, sir,” the enforcer said. “The fire should have burnt it all up.”

“Should?” the white collar’s voice turned deadly. He slowly turned his head to look at the enforcer who gulped.

“Well…tests are still ongoing and”

“Never mind,” the man snapped. “When you get a report, let me know. The government will be thoroughly interested in why this man was in possession of the Christmas virus to begin with and where it was going. Have you interrogated him yet?”

Changsun did not like the way they were treating him as if he was not there.

“No sir,” the officer bowed again. “He keeps claiming he’s innocent.”

“Oh?”

“He is!” Ji-su stepped forwards. The white haired officers’ eyes bulged.

“Who are you?” the white collar barked.

“Enforcer Lee Ji-su,” she gave a curt bow and saluted. “I’m his older sister.”

“Oh,” the white collar nodded, falsely amicably. “And you say he’s innocent. On what basis? Your words? His words?”

“Yes.”

No hesitation.

“Excuse me for being doubtful then.”

Changsun bristled. No one offended his sister and got away with it. He opened his mouth, ready to speak, but then Ji-su signaled at him to keep quiet. He nodded and pouted instead.

“It started with his words, but further investigation into the site of crime has proved that Changsun only ever came in contact with the virus that day. He didn’t plant them there and he wasn’t planning on transporting them.”

“Then what was he going to do? Sniff them?” Disdainful words. Oh how Changsun would love to punch that white collar in the face and show him blood for the first time in his life.

“Sir,” Ji-su gave a bow but Changsun knew better. Her seething anger was barely held in check. “I believe Changsun was trying to stop someone else from transporting the virus.”

“Who?”

Ji-su hesitated. She knew it was Byunghee, but like Changsun she did not want to rat him out. 

“Enough.” The white collar was tired. “Interrogate him thoroughly. Then convict him.”

“What?!” Ji-su bolted forwards and grabbed the tradesman’s shirt. “No!”

The government official yanked himself out of her grip and dusted himself off. The white haired officer looked like he was about to have a heart attack. “Don’t touch me,” the white collar hissed. “Your brother was found in contact with the virus. I despise anyone who has anything to do with virus. So many people have died from the Christmas virus and yet you continue to protect him? You disgust me.”

“Sir!” Ji-su protested, but the white haired officer suddenly grabbed her arms and held her locked. “No!” she struggled in vain. He may have been fifty, but he was an enforcer for a reason. “Please! He’s my little brother! The only family I have left!”

“Begging gets you nowhere,” the government man said coldly. He snapped his sunglasses back on and turned away. “You should have never done it in the first place.”

“But I didn’t!” Changsun screamed. “I was trying to stop my friend who did!”

The white collar stopped and turned slightly. “Tell me who he is and I will reconsider.”

Changsun was frozen. Should he sell Byunghee out? Byunghee was the one who had caused all this mess and Changsun was a tiny raft in the maelstrom. But he couldn’t. Not to his brother.

Changsun shook his head.

“Then it’s too bad.” The white collar turned around.

“Listen to me!” Changsun yelled. “It wasn’t me and it wasn’t my friend.”

“You’re contradicting yourself,” the white collar pointed out.

“My friend was tricked! They were going to turn him into a scrapegoat!”

“Who were?”

“The pirates! The BlackBeards!”

“Why? Why go that far when the virus was just going to burn away in the fire? A waste."

“I don’t know!” Changsun yelled, frustration coloring the world red. None of it made sense. Nothing of this cruel, cruel world.

“Tell me one more thing,” The white collar said, his back to Changsun. Never had Changsun hated the government more. “Do you regret any of this?”

Changsun stared, wide-mouth. Did he regret nearly dying, getting jailed and being accused incorrectly? Did he regret saving his brother from certain death?

“No.”

The white collar chuckled, “I see.” And then he strode away in that measured pace of a king and the door slammed shut behind him.

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annalulz
#1
I'm just rereading this again, hoping that one day you'll decide to update again *cries forever*
annalulz
#2
Chapter 65: I'm screaming omg Fia why why whyyyyy

Bye Mir you lived well. I have the feeling this isn't the last we'll see of him.... we still have the mystery of the coliseum left to puzzle the pieces together, idk why I think they're just appearing in the real world, without the government interfering with the deaths, maybe that's the path they take....

what on Earth is Sanghyun doing??? he doesn't seem completely evil but.... hmmmmm

I hope you can update after your trip, good luck and have fun ^_^
yumzibabe
#3
OMG! Another update!

I have to admit, I'm really behind on my reading but I will catch up!
School's been crazy busy so I haven't been spending much time on Aff but it's nice seeing your updates.
As busy as I am, I get super excited every time there's an update alert as well as the spoilers I'm getting from yours and annalulz's convo haha.

KEEP IT UP FIA! I'm still here and will be back SOON! :)
annalulz
#4
Chapter 64: SO YOU'RE SAYING THE WHITE SUIT JOON MET WHILE IN JAIL WAS SEUNGHO /SCREAMS

but shouldn't Joon have remembered Seungho was the white suit when he got his memories back? or is this one of those 'oops I have to go fix this later' moments?

Holy shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii-----

I knew it (again) ahahaha. I admit my wish to have Thunder be the wolf was my own biased-ness and wanting him to be bad, but I'm so happy I was right asjdashdialshd

Did he really kill Mir tho? I mean, if they all technically have bodies in the real world, Mir isn't really dead, his data is just lost somewhere right? Unless... dying in the Coliseum truly kills you, but nooooo okay, I don't want Mir dead, bring him back, omg don't let Thunder kill Seungho where is my SeungDoong ansdhadighasda I'm screaming.

Mastermind Doong is so evil TT__TT

BUT WAAAAIIIITTTTTT... why kill them all if he needs them? I mean what's the point of gathering everyone in these Games only to kill them all later? they obviously have something he needs, but wouldn't it be better to have them alive for that? Or does this has something to do with the real purpose of the Coliseum?

WHAT IS THE COLISEUM????
annalulz
#5
Chapter 63: FIA OMG WELCOME BACK I MISSED YOU I MISSED THIS FIC JESUS CHRIST I'M GONNA CRY XD

I want to give a full insight comment but I'm just flailing around from excitement and I don't know what to say. I need to tie this in in my head with the rest of the story first so I'll do that later XD

but omg can I say I KNEW IT even when you weren't sure yourself RM was Rain? I remember you telling me that but maybe I'm wrong. Anyway...

I KNEWWWWW IIIIIITTTT

and I think I was right about Doongie too *insert wolf howl here* hahahaha

but if this is going where I think this is going, the Mastermind behind everything is Sanghyun and I'm feeling his super awesome plan has back-fired on him, so the question remains who is the wolf? who is the ringmaster?

And what in the name of Loki is The Coliseum? there is more to it isn't there? and what are ll these other things Sanghyun knows about the Digiworld. (yeah I'm still calling it that XD)

I was gonna start kicking you about this chapter update but I forgot. But don't worry I'll be kicking you soon for the next one. I am not letting you take a million years for the next update at this point in the game :3
innocent-bystander #6
Chapter 62: The hacking was so intense...
annalulz
#7
Chapter 62: OKAY OHMYGOD WHAT JUST HAPPENED

You updated *cries tears of joy*

First of all, what? Second of all WHAT? Third of all WHAAAATTTT'????!!!

I'm glad Sanghyun could find both his sisters, but damn poor Durami, I honestly hope she can get herself a physical body, but, in the eventual case they go back into the real world, she won't be able to go back :(

And, wow, I wasn't expecting the Christmas Program/Virus to be THAT, and Mir god, he could have killed everyone o.O

Is this how Seungho ended up joining the Ringmaster? I need to check up because I'm really lost on the timeline xD (I will have to reread this again) but by this point, Joon and G.O have already been recruited by the RM? I thought maybe Durami, Sanghyun and Dara could have come up with the Carnival Games and maybe even that Durami was the RM... I still have my suspicions about her but I don't think Dara and Thunder would come up with the games, then again, I don't think Durami would purposefully torture her own brother with the games, so yeah, I'm probably pretty off with that theory... or am I?

I'm glad the Park Siblings could modify the code before Mir killed everyone, but I do have to wonder about his reaction when he sees what happened. I still want Joon and G.O back, give me back my babos TT__TT

Anywayssss, my big question right now is HOW THE HELL DID MIR SEUNGHO AND THUNDER JOINED THE RM? Who is the RM? (sorry for capsing but I'm excited haha, please don't take 1234567890 months to update again ;-;) I did like that little moment where their paths kinda sorta crossed, and ooh Thunder sort of knows who Mir is. Oh wait, this is bad, this is bad bad bad. What if Thunder feels some sort of resentment towards Mir for coding the Xmas program and almost killing his sisters? asjdghasjjasdalsd
annalulz
#8
Chapter 61: okay, omg, I'm dead. Finally a bit of Thunder xD

this part "His body reacted as it
should in times of stress, his
brain sending signals to produce
norepinephrine and cortisol. His
heart rate increased, his
breathing quickened. His eyes
dilated and he could feel his
skin flush" made me feel like I was watching Criminal Minds, or Sherlock haha.

I imagined that the story of the real world would be like that, te pollution and all, but wow, Sanghyun's backstory is so heartbreaking. Are they clones or the product of female and male DNA? (I might be asking too indepth questions for your unplotted backstory sorry xP) but wow, Mir and Doong are sort of crossing paths. And, was that the RM meeting Mir?

The Cryocells remind me if the recuperation chambers in DBZ xD.

And that bit about Dara, that does give hope for Joon and G.O I think. When you told me there were deaths I thought it would be obe of the boys. I guess Dara's death is going to be Sanghyun's bigest motivator, but he only has 24 days, so I guess the games have to happen before those days are over, unless there's no hope for her?

There was something about the timeline of how they were recruited by the RM but I forgot the thought while watching Friends ;-;

I hope you can give us a faster update, gah the MBLAQ tag is dead *cries*