23:29 – A Countdown to First Death [12:31am]

24 Hours

 

Chapter 6: 23:29 – A Countdown to First Death [12:31am]

Joon POV

Water, cold clammy water was up to my ankles. Uncomfortably cold and sending prickles up my legs, it stank of sewage water, rotten and decaying. I wanted to cover my mouth with my hands and sleeves, but they were both needed to search for a way out. So I in a deep breath and manned up. Scrubbing fear from my face, I stuck them deep into the slimy water and tried to suppress a shiver.

The other four were frantically pressed against the stone walls, pushing bricks in hope for a secret button like in those action movies or loose stones to dislodge. There was nothing and the room was tiny. Panic, panic, panic. Don’t panic, Lee Joon.

“Don’t give up guys,” Mir panted. It was like he could read my mind. “We’ll get out. We have to!”

Words I wanted to believe in.

But the water was rising. It was up to my thighs now and its all-ading chill ran through my body. Shudders rippled and I could do nothing to stop them. It was like standing at the north pole, unable to escape no matter where you ran. Forever and ever I was running. Running but trapped. My soul flying outwards, but my body anchoring it down, chaining it to this terrible place called reality. I tried to ignore the throbbing in my ankles, the heart-pumping in my chest. I wondered if this was how rabbits felt when they died of fear.

“There’s nothing!” Seungho finally snapped, breaking me out of my reverie.

“There’s has to be!” Thunder spun around, splashing murky water in the process. “This is a game! And every game must have a way out. A way to win.”

“Who says this is a game?!” Seungho’s voice came out wrenched and torn in all various ways. It was like a man on the run and the demon finally catching up to him. Desperation spiked and tinged it in every way. “We only have the word of this trickster and that is not good enough! Who says he has planned for us to just die down here, in a watery grave where no one will ever find us!”

“Because I can tell,” I found myself saying. “That gleam in his eyes. He’s having fun with all of this. There is no way he’ll let it end here. It wouldn’t be entertaining.”

Seungho glanced at me, that pure desperation glaze in his eyes slowly dying out.

Mir grasped the opportunity. “We fight till the last moment okay?” he grabbed Seungho by the shoulders and rattled him. “We don’t give up till our last breath!”

Seungho shook his head, ragged droplets flying and nodded. “Got it,” he said in a ragged, drawn-out breath. His chest was still pumping furiously, but he turned back to the wall, scouring those age-old bricks for some long-lost secret.

The water was up to our waists.

 

G.O POV

I found myself unable to speak. In the face of this watery death, in the face of my new found team members shouting and sobbing, in the face of everything. I just couldn’t concentrate.

Water, water, water. It’s everywhere. It’s consuming everything!

I bit my lip so hard I tasted blood. It snapped me out of the prison my body had made for its mind. I had to get out. I had to stop over-thinking everything. Out there was my goal, and the possibility to achieve it. Whatever that goal may be, it was something that i could feel burning in my chest. It whispered fight, win, survive, you owe it to him. Get out of here!

So I turned back to the walls and continued searching. 

The water was up to my chest.

 

Thunder POV

We were floundering now, half-suspended in the water. I didn’t want to think where it came from, but the smell was horrendous. It was filling my every pore and I didn’t realize it was possible to feel so filthy from bathing.

A wave of water pumped out, unexpectedly vicious and I sunk. Water filled my mouth, as foul tasting as I imagined, and I spluttered. In the darkness of the underwater world, I could see nothing but that eerie blue light casting an atlantis-like atmosphere over everything. Down here, it felt almost peaceful. Like I could let go and-

A hand yanked me out. “Got you,” huffed someone. Water was in my ears, my eyes. I could see or hear properly. “You okay?”

It was Seungho. I blinked and coughed and nodded.

“Good,” he smiled softly, a little out of place. My befuddled brain wasn’t keeping up. “I don’t want to lose anyone yet.”

“Thanks,” I finally choked out. His smile vanished and he nodded, all stern and stoic now. Business.

But our position wasn’t good. It was a small room and we have scoured it high and low. To have no found the way out meant there must be some sort of trick involved. Some form of deceit. I said the ringmaster wanted a game, but he also wanted to be entertained. Like kings of the old days, to let prey simply die would be wasteful. They wanted a show, live acting, fear, happiness, sadness, joy, all painted real-time. There had to be a way out-

“There!” It was Mir, his voice bright with discovery.

I looked up.

 

Mir POV

The one place none of us would have looked at. The ceiling. But of course. How else did we get in here? We must have fallen, leagues and leagues down and landed somehow in one piece on this sandy, stony floor. And the exit was there: a trapdoor on the ceiling.

“But to get there…” Thunder had figured it out.

Yes. To get out of here, we would have to wait. Wait and let the room flood. And then swim out.

 

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annalulz
#1
I'm just rereading this again, hoping that one day you'll decide to update again *cries forever*
annalulz
#2
Chapter 65: I'm screaming omg Fia why why whyyyyy

Bye Mir you lived well. I have the feeling this isn't the last we'll see of him.... we still have the mystery of the coliseum left to puzzle the pieces together, idk why I think they're just appearing in the real world, without the government interfering with the deaths, maybe that's the path they take....

what on Earth is Sanghyun doing??? he doesn't seem completely evil but.... hmmmmm

I hope you can update after your trip, good luck and have fun ^_^
yumzibabe
#3
OMG! Another update!

I have to admit, I'm really behind on my reading but I will catch up!
School's been crazy busy so I haven't been spending much time on Aff but it's nice seeing your updates.
As busy as I am, I get super excited every time there's an update alert as well as the spoilers I'm getting from yours and annalulz's convo haha.

KEEP IT UP FIA! I'm still here and will be back SOON! :)
annalulz
#4
Chapter 64: SO YOU'RE SAYING THE WHITE SUIT JOON MET WHILE IN JAIL WAS SEUNGHO /SCREAMS

but shouldn't Joon have remembered Seungho was the white suit when he got his memories back? or is this one of those 'oops I have to go fix this later' moments?

Holy shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii-----

I knew it (again) ahahaha. I admit my wish to have Thunder be the wolf was my own biased-ness and wanting him to be bad, but I'm so happy I was right asjdashdialshd

Did he really kill Mir tho? I mean, if they all technically have bodies in the real world, Mir isn't really dead, his data is just lost somewhere right? Unless... dying in the Coliseum truly kills you, but nooooo okay, I don't want Mir dead, bring him back, omg don't let Thunder kill Seungho where is my SeungDoong ansdhadighasda I'm screaming.

Mastermind Doong is so evil TT__TT

BUT WAAAAIIIITTTTTT... why kill them all if he needs them? I mean what's the point of gathering everyone in these Games only to kill them all later? they obviously have something he needs, but wouldn't it be better to have them alive for that? Or does this has something to do with the real purpose of the Coliseum?

WHAT IS THE COLISEUM????
annalulz
#5
Chapter 63: FIA OMG WELCOME BACK I MISSED YOU I MISSED THIS FIC JESUS CHRIST I'M GONNA CRY XD

I want to give a full insight comment but I'm just flailing around from excitement and I don't know what to say. I need to tie this in in my head with the rest of the story first so I'll do that later XD

but omg can I say I KNEW IT even when you weren't sure yourself RM was Rain? I remember you telling me that but maybe I'm wrong. Anyway...

I KNEWWWWW IIIIIITTTT

and I think I was right about Doongie too *insert wolf howl here* hahahaha

but if this is going where I think this is going, the Mastermind behind everything is Sanghyun and I'm feeling his super awesome plan has back-fired on him, so the question remains who is the wolf? who is the ringmaster?

And what in the name of Loki is The Coliseum? there is more to it isn't there? and what are ll these other things Sanghyun knows about the Digiworld. (yeah I'm still calling it that XD)

I was gonna start kicking you about this chapter update but I forgot. But don't worry I'll be kicking you soon for the next one. I am not letting you take a million years for the next update at this point in the game :3
innocent-bystander #6
Chapter 62: The hacking was so intense...
annalulz
#7
Chapter 62: OKAY OHMYGOD WHAT JUST HAPPENED

You updated *cries tears of joy*

First of all, what? Second of all WHAT? Third of all WHAAAATTTT'????!!!

I'm glad Sanghyun could find both his sisters, but damn poor Durami, I honestly hope she can get herself a physical body, but, in the eventual case they go back into the real world, she won't be able to go back :(

And, wow, I wasn't expecting the Christmas Program/Virus to be THAT, and Mir god, he could have killed everyone o.O

Is this how Seungho ended up joining the Ringmaster? I need to check up because I'm really lost on the timeline xD (I will have to reread this again) but by this point, Joon and G.O have already been recruited by the RM? I thought maybe Durami, Sanghyun and Dara could have come up with the Carnival Games and maybe even that Durami was the RM... I still have my suspicions about her but I don't think Dara and Thunder would come up with the games, then again, I don't think Durami would purposefully torture her own brother with the games, so yeah, I'm probably pretty off with that theory... or am I?

I'm glad the Park Siblings could modify the code before Mir killed everyone, but I do have to wonder about his reaction when he sees what happened. I still want Joon and G.O back, give me back my babos TT__TT

Anywayssss, my big question right now is HOW THE HELL DID MIR SEUNGHO AND THUNDER JOINED THE RM? Who is the RM? (sorry for capsing but I'm excited haha, please don't take 1234567890 months to update again ;-;) I did like that little moment where their paths kinda sorta crossed, and ooh Thunder sort of knows who Mir is. Oh wait, this is bad, this is bad bad bad. What if Thunder feels some sort of resentment towards Mir for coding the Xmas program and almost killing his sisters? asjdghasjjasdalsd
annalulz
#8
Chapter 61: okay, omg, I'm dead. Finally a bit of Thunder xD

this part "His body reacted as it
should in times of stress, his
brain sending signals to produce
norepinephrine and cortisol. His
heart rate increased, his
breathing quickened. His eyes
dilated and he could feel his
skin flush" made me feel like I was watching Criminal Minds, or Sherlock haha.

I imagined that the story of the real world would be like that, te pollution and all, but wow, Sanghyun's backstory is so heartbreaking. Are they clones or the product of female and male DNA? (I might be asking too indepth questions for your unplotted backstory sorry xP) but wow, Mir and Doong are sort of crossing paths. And, was that the RM meeting Mir?

The Cryocells remind me if the recuperation chambers in DBZ xD.

And that bit about Dara, that does give hope for Joon and G.O I think. When you told me there were deaths I thought it would be obe of the boys. I guess Dara's death is going to be Sanghyun's bigest motivator, but he only has 24 days, so I guess the games have to happen before those days are over, unless there's no hope for her?

There was something about the timeline of how they were recruited by the RM but I forgot the thought while watching Friends ;-;

I hope you can give us a faster update, gah the MBLAQ tag is dead *cries*