21:24 – A Countdown to First Death [02:36am]

24 Hours

 

Chapter 13: 21:24 – A Countdown to First Death [02:36am]

G.O POV

It was another hologram. No longer were they the two innocent ten year old kids, black and brown haired. They were teenagers now, eighteen at least and with a very different air about them.

“Hey, Changsun,” the brown haired boy had his hands tucked deep into his pockets. Half in the shadows, he watched his brother paced with wary eyes. “I have something to tell you.”

“You’ve decided then,” Changsun stared at him with sorrowful eyes.

Byunghee nodded. “I have.”

“You’re going to join the pirates.” It wasn’t a question. It was a fact.

Byunghee gave a curt nod.

“Why?” Changsun leaned forwards, his eyes shiny with unshed tears. “You know what messing with the pirates causes.”

Byunghee chewed his bottom lip. “I just…have to…”

“Byunghee!”

“I can’t tell you!” Byunghee shouted. “I want to tell you…but it’s not something that involves you!”

Changsun took a step backwards, his eyes wide with shock. “It doesn’t involve me? Your brother?”

“Not by blood,” Byunghee said coldly.

“Isn’t bonds good enough?”

“I don’t want you to get involved in my mess Changsun,” Byunghee shook his head. “Please understand. I have to do this.”

Changsun looked at his brother and let one tear slip out and run down his cheek. In the moonlight, it was cast silver and his black hair grey. There was a long stretch of silence and then Joon finally spoke, his voice hoarse. “Which gang did you join?”

Byunghee raised his head and stared at the moon. “The BlackBeards.”

Changsun froze. “Are you sure? They have a reputation for being the least moralistic-“

“They offered me the chance. I couldn’t say no.”

Changsun’s head lowered. “I get it brother, just…be careful okay?”

Byunghee shot him a grateful look. “I will. I promise. I won’t do anything bad. It’s my…duty…”

Duty…?

That word struck thunder through me. I was assuaged my memories, black and white and violent. They rocketed through my head and I crumpled to my knees, holding my head as the past seized me.

***

“Why did you do that?!” Byunghee yelled. A storm was gathering, whipping winds sending cold slashes throughout his body. “It was my first job! And I’ve failed now, no thanks to you, brother.” The words came out mocking, tainted with pain.

Changsun clutched his side. His back was to a plastered wall of a worn out warehouse. “I did it for you!” he shouted back, his voice barely audible. The night sky was dark. There were no stars or a moon to brighten it tonight. It was devoid of hope.

“For me? Then you should have just left me alone! I could have done the job by myself!”

“You don’t understand,” Changsun shook his head violently. How to get the words across in such a short period of time. The clock was ticking. Any moment they would be here. “You don’t know what The BlackBeards had in store for you. It was all a-“

And the wind stole his words, snatching it out of his mouth and throwing it far across the harbor. Changsun cursed. That too was lost in the maelstrom.

“It was a-“ he tried again, but the impenetrable wall was growing.

And suddenly there were sirens, blue and red flashes painfully bright against the dark sky. Changsun spun on his heel. What were enforcers doing here?! They weren’t meant to be here! It would ruin everything-

“You sold me out?!” Byunghee snarled, the pain of betrayal fresh in his eyes. It cut invisible wounds into Changsun.

“No, no brother! I didn’t call them-“

“Lies!” Byunghee hissed. He threw one hand out violently, cutting a sharp path through the air as if he very much wanted to slice a knife through Changsun’s chest. “You sold me how. How could you. I know I said we weren’t blood brothers, but still!”

“Listen to be Byunghee,” Changsun tried to cross the distance between them, flinching slightly at Byunghee’s furious gaze and the slice of his hand. “This is all a mistake. You’ve got to listen to me-“

“PUT YOUR HANDS UP!” came a screech cutting through the air. The voice was computerized, cold and unforgiving. The enforcers were well-known to act first, listen later.

Changsun grabbed Byunghee’s arm. “Let’s get out of here first. We’ll talk later.”

Byunghee stared at the hand wrapped around his wrist. He didn’t know which way to run. The enforcers would surely throw him into jail no matter that he had not committed a crime. But then there was Changsun. How could he trust the traitor?

“Come on!” Changsun tugged Byunghee’s hand in the opposite direction of those bright lights.

“YOU HAVE THREE SECONDS TO SURRENDER, AFTER WHICH WE WILL USE FORCE,” came the mechanized warning.

“Byunghee!” Changsun yelled. Byunghee stared into his eyes. Never had he seen his brother so scared. Fear for whom Byunghee did not know. “Byunghee-“

Byunghee snatched his hand back.

Changsun’s eyes flew wide open. Brother, he mouthed.

But before the words could take shape, the enforcers grabbed both of them and were forcing them down onto their knees.

“Lee Changsun,” one of the enforcers said in a monotonous voice. Byunghee couldn’t see his eyes. They were shielded by dark glass from a helmet. It covered the upper half of his face. All he could see were that thin-lipped mouth. “You are arrested for possession of the Christmas virus and possible trafficking of it."

“What?!” Changsun stared at him. “But I didn’t. I just stopped-“

He held his tongue. Tell the truth and Byunghee would be at fault.

“You have the right to remain silent. We will question you all fully back at base.” The enforced pulled out silver handcuffs and snapped them onto Changsun’s wrists.

“You too, Jung Byunghee.” He gazed at Byunghee’s face. If he noted the expression of bewilderment, and despair that was so much like a witch’s bitter brew for revenge, it did not show through the dark glass. The enforcer pulled out another pair of handcuffs. But before he could fasten them onto Byunghee’s trembling and scarred wrists, there was an explosion. In the whirlwind of ear-shattering music and scalding heat, the two enforcers and the two teenagers were blown backwards. All Changsun saw was white light and then nothing more.

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annalulz
#1
I'm just rereading this again, hoping that one day you'll decide to update again *cries forever*
annalulz
#2
Chapter 65: I'm screaming omg Fia why why whyyyyy

Bye Mir you lived well. I have the feeling this isn't the last we'll see of him.... we still have the mystery of the coliseum left to puzzle the pieces together, idk why I think they're just appearing in the real world, without the government interfering with the deaths, maybe that's the path they take....

what on Earth is Sanghyun doing??? he doesn't seem completely evil but.... hmmmmm

I hope you can update after your trip, good luck and have fun ^_^
yumzibabe
#3
OMG! Another update!

I have to admit, I'm really behind on my reading but I will catch up!
School's been crazy busy so I haven't been spending much time on Aff but it's nice seeing your updates.
As busy as I am, I get super excited every time there's an update alert as well as the spoilers I'm getting from yours and annalulz's convo haha.

KEEP IT UP FIA! I'm still here and will be back SOON! :)
annalulz
#4
Chapter 64: SO YOU'RE SAYING THE WHITE SUIT JOON MET WHILE IN JAIL WAS SEUNGHO /SCREAMS

but shouldn't Joon have remembered Seungho was the white suit when he got his memories back? or is this one of those 'oops I have to go fix this later' moments?

Holy shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii-----

I knew it (again) ahahaha. I admit my wish to have Thunder be the wolf was my own biased-ness and wanting him to be bad, but I'm so happy I was right asjdashdialshd

Did he really kill Mir tho? I mean, if they all technically have bodies in the real world, Mir isn't really dead, his data is just lost somewhere right? Unless... dying in the Coliseum truly kills you, but nooooo okay, I don't want Mir dead, bring him back, omg don't let Thunder kill Seungho where is my SeungDoong ansdhadighasda I'm screaming.

Mastermind Doong is so evil TT__TT

BUT WAAAAIIIITTTTTT... why kill them all if he needs them? I mean what's the point of gathering everyone in these Games only to kill them all later? they obviously have something he needs, but wouldn't it be better to have them alive for that? Or does this has something to do with the real purpose of the Coliseum?

WHAT IS THE COLISEUM????
annalulz
#5
Chapter 63: FIA OMG WELCOME BACK I MISSED YOU I MISSED THIS FIC JESUS CHRIST I'M GONNA CRY XD

I want to give a full insight comment but I'm just flailing around from excitement and I don't know what to say. I need to tie this in in my head with the rest of the story first so I'll do that later XD

but omg can I say I KNEW IT even when you weren't sure yourself RM was Rain? I remember you telling me that but maybe I'm wrong. Anyway...

I KNEWWWWW IIIIIITTTT

and I think I was right about Doongie too *insert wolf howl here* hahahaha

but if this is going where I think this is going, the Mastermind behind everything is Sanghyun and I'm feeling his super awesome plan has back-fired on him, so the question remains who is the wolf? who is the ringmaster?

And what in the name of Loki is The Coliseum? there is more to it isn't there? and what are ll these other things Sanghyun knows about the Digiworld. (yeah I'm still calling it that XD)

I was gonna start kicking you about this chapter update but I forgot. But don't worry I'll be kicking you soon for the next one. I am not letting you take a million years for the next update at this point in the game :3
innocent-bystander #6
Chapter 62: The hacking was so intense...
annalulz
#7
Chapter 62: OKAY OHMYGOD WHAT JUST HAPPENED

You updated *cries tears of joy*

First of all, what? Second of all WHAT? Third of all WHAAAATTTT'????!!!

I'm glad Sanghyun could find both his sisters, but damn poor Durami, I honestly hope she can get herself a physical body, but, in the eventual case they go back into the real world, she won't be able to go back :(

And, wow, I wasn't expecting the Christmas Program/Virus to be THAT, and Mir god, he could have killed everyone o.O

Is this how Seungho ended up joining the Ringmaster? I need to check up because I'm really lost on the timeline xD (I will have to reread this again) but by this point, Joon and G.O have already been recruited by the RM? I thought maybe Durami, Sanghyun and Dara could have come up with the Carnival Games and maybe even that Durami was the RM... I still have my suspicions about her but I don't think Dara and Thunder would come up with the games, then again, I don't think Durami would purposefully torture her own brother with the games, so yeah, I'm probably pretty off with that theory... or am I?

I'm glad the Park Siblings could modify the code before Mir killed everyone, but I do have to wonder about his reaction when he sees what happened. I still want Joon and G.O back, give me back my babos TT__TT

Anywayssss, my big question right now is HOW THE HELL DID MIR SEUNGHO AND THUNDER JOINED THE RM? Who is the RM? (sorry for capsing but I'm excited haha, please don't take 1234567890 months to update again ;-;) I did like that little moment where their paths kinda sorta crossed, and ooh Thunder sort of knows who Mir is. Oh wait, this is bad, this is bad bad bad. What if Thunder feels some sort of resentment towards Mir for coding the Xmas program and almost killing his sisters? asjdghasjjasdalsd
annalulz
#8
Chapter 61: okay, omg, I'm dead. Finally a bit of Thunder xD

this part "His body reacted as it
should in times of stress, his
brain sending signals to produce
norepinephrine and cortisol. His
heart rate increased, his
breathing quickened. His eyes
dilated and he could feel his
skin flush" made me feel like I was watching Criminal Minds, or Sherlock haha.

I imagined that the story of the real world would be like that, te pollution and all, but wow, Sanghyun's backstory is so heartbreaking. Are they clones or the product of female and male DNA? (I might be asking too indepth questions for your unplotted backstory sorry xP) but wow, Mir and Doong are sort of crossing paths. And, was that the RM meeting Mir?

The Cryocells remind me if the recuperation chambers in DBZ xD.

And that bit about Dara, that does give hope for Joon and G.O I think. When you told me there were deaths I thought it would be obe of the boys. I guess Dara's death is going to be Sanghyun's bigest motivator, but he only has 24 days, so I guess the games have to happen before those days are over, unless there's no hope for her?

There was something about the timeline of how they were recruited by the RM but I forgot the thought while watching Friends ;-;

I hope you can give us a faster update, gah the MBLAQ tag is dead *cries*