??? Hour – A Countdown to MIDNIGHT [Five to]

24 Hours

 

Chapter 4: ??? Hour – A Countdown to MIDNIGHT [Five to]

Lee Joon POV

Minor detail?!

The moment he said those two words, my world went red. Like a cloak, it draped itself in my face so that all I could see was red, red, red. I felt my hands form fists as something primordial snarled inside me, making me want to step forwards and smash this indolent holographic image to fragments regardless of how futile it would be.

But just as I was about to move, a hand shot out and grabbed my shoulder. I spun, eyes flaring, only to see a pair of soft brown eyes. Too soft to hurt.

“Please stop,” the younger boy said, honest worry clouding his eyes. What was his name again? Mee, Mii, oh that’s right. Mir. Simple enough to remember I guess. “Like he said, he’s the one throwing the dices here. Let’s listen first.”

I let out a small grumble but backed down. It was the unavoidable truth.

I turned back to the ringmaster. “Spit it out then,” I snarled. “You got ten seconds.”

The Ringmaster smirked his perpetual twitch of a grin, as if thoroughly amused at my anger. Well soon enough I’d give him something to smirk about. Smug bastard.

[OH? IT’S NOTHING MUCH] The Ringmaster said in a coy tone. [JUST THAT I THOUGHT I SHOULD WARN YOU ABOUT THE WOLF]

I was tired of his sly games and roundabout manners. It seemed that the Thunder boy was as well.

“Enough.” Thunder hissed, his eyes narrowing to slits. “Explain.”

[VERY WELL] The Ringmaster complied, though the very flow of his words and smooth gestures, I had the feeling it was all scripted. The way he had paused, letting us have our moment of hope and then crushing it like Mjölnir bringing down its divine judgment. It was all so…planned. Lights, camera, action. May the audience be pleased. He knew full well such a show would keep their tails wagging. But we were no puppets to be played. It infuriated me.

Oblivious to my rage, the Ringmaster continued his spiel.

[SIMPLY LETTING YOU FIVE JUST COMPLETE SEVEN LEVELS IS FAR TOO SIMPLE, NOT FUN AT ALL]

I beg to disagree.

[THEREFORE, I HAVE INTRODUCED A WILDCARD, A WOLF SO TO SPEAK].The Ringmaster raised one finger theatrically as if to silence our unspoken questions. [NOW, NOW, LET ME CONTINUE]

I barely held back a growl.

[I WILL NOT TELL YOU WHO THE WOLF IS, NEITHER WILL THE WOLF HIMSELF KNOW FOR YOU ARE ALL MEMORYLESS. HOWEVER AS TIME GOES BY AND YOU ALL COMPLETE MORE LEVELS, YOUR MEMORIES WILL RETURN AND THE WOLF WILL REALIZE WHO HE IS]

“And what happens then?” G.O asked grimly. I didn’t even realize I was holding my breath, but the tension in the air was killing us all.

The Ringmaster made a sound of approval, as if he had anticipated these questions. Like actors reciting their designated lines. [HE WILL KILL YOU. ONE BY ONE.]

I choked. Kill us?! Was this the man’s twisted ideas of fun?!

“Kill us?!” Seungho growled, the Ringmaster’s puppeteering finally getting the better of his manners. “But as you said, we are all amnesiac, so why would one of us want to kill the others. We all want to escape. Your plan isn’t going to work.”

[AH, AH, AH] The Ringmaster twitched one hand in front of us, like a schoolmaster reprimanding a particularly cheeky child. [IT WILL WORK. AND IT IS NOT ME WHO WILL ORCHESTRATE YOUR DEATHS. IT IS YOUR OWN SELVES AND PASTS]

“What-“ I started, thoroughly confused and ready to just beat him up for answers heedless of the fact he was a hologram and all. But the Ringmaster interrupted me first.

[BUT ENOUGH ABOUT THAT, YOU’LL HAVE PLENTY OF TIME TO DISCOVER SUCH THINGS LATER.] The Ringmaster straightened himself. [EVERYTHING ELSE WILL COME WITH TIME. HEED MY WARNING. BEWARE OF THE WOLF. AS ALL WOLVES DO, THEY STRIKE FROM THE SHADOWS AND WHEN YOU ARE AT YOUR WEAKEST.]

He paused, allowing us a moment to swallow all that. Then he finished with a flourish. [I WISH YOU ALL THE BEST OF LUCK AND DO NOT FORGET. YOU HAVE 24 HOURS. MAY THE STRONGEST SURVIVE.]

“Hey! Wait a sec-“ I yelled, seeing him sizzle out of existence, but suddenly the grandfather clock began to chime loudly, each bell resounding so loudly I could feel the reverberations through my bones. It made my teeth chatter and my skeleton shake. The world blurred around me, turning to an obscure slur of colors. I stumbled, reaching out for anything stable, but the world was spinning, spinning, spinning and then all of a sudden the floor beneath me dropped and with a lurch I was falling…

                                  falling…

                                              falling…                                                                        

     ...

           ...

                         ...

                                                    [AND SO,TICK TOCK,LET THE GAMES BEGIN]

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annalulz
#1
I'm just rereading this again, hoping that one day you'll decide to update again *cries forever*
annalulz
#2
Chapter 65: I'm screaming omg Fia why why whyyyyy

Bye Mir you lived well. I have the feeling this isn't the last we'll see of him.... we still have the mystery of the coliseum left to puzzle the pieces together, idk why I think they're just appearing in the real world, without the government interfering with the deaths, maybe that's the path they take....

what on Earth is Sanghyun doing??? he doesn't seem completely evil but.... hmmmmm

I hope you can update after your trip, good luck and have fun ^_^
yumzibabe
#3
OMG! Another update!

I have to admit, I'm really behind on my reading but I will catch up!
School's been crazy busy so I haven't been spending much time on Aff but it's nice seeing your updates.
As busy as I am, I get super excited every time there's an update alert as well as the spoilers I'm getting from yours and annalulz's convo haha.

KEEP IT UP FIA! I'm still here and will be back SOON! :)
annalulz
#4
Chapter 64: SO YOU'RE SAYING THE WHITE SUIT JOON MET WHILE IN JAIL WAS SEUNGHO /SCREAMS

but shouldn't Joon have remembered Seungho was the white suit when he got his memories back? or is this one of those 'oops I have to go fix this later' moments?

Holy shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii-----

I knew it (again) ahahaha. I admit my wish to have Thunder be the wolf was my own biased-ness and wanting him to be bad, but I'm so happy I was right asjdashdialshd

Did he really kill Mir tho? I mean, if they all technically have bodies in the real world, Mir isn't really dead, his data is just lost somewhere right? Unless... dying in the Coliseum truly kills you, but nooooo okay, I don't want Mir dead, bring him back, omg don't let Thunder kill Seungho where is my SeungDoong ansdhadighasda I'm screaming.

Mastermind Doong is so evil TT__TT

BUT WAAAAIIIITTTTTT... why kill them all if he needs them? I mean what's the point of gathering everyone in these Games only to kill them all later? they obviously have something he needs, but wouldn't it be better to have them alive for that? Or does this has something to do with the real purpose of the Coliseum?

WHAT IS THE COLISEUM????
annalulz
#5
Chapter 63: FIA OMG WELCOME BACK I MISSED YOU I MISSED THIS FIC JESUS CHRIST I'M GONNA CRY XD

I want to give a full insight comment but I'm just flailing around from excitement and I don't know what to say. I need to tie this in in my head with the rest of the story first so I'll do that later XD

but omg can I say I KNEW IT even when you weren't sure yourself RM was Rain? I remember you telling me that but maybe I'm wrong. Anyway...

I KNEWWWWW IIIIIITTTT

and I think I was right about Doongie too *insert wolf howl here* hahahaha

but if this is going where I think this is going, the Mastermind behind everything is Sanghyun and I'm feeling his super awesome plan has back-fired on him, so the question remains who is the wolf? who is the ringmaster?

And what in the name of Loki is The Coliseum? there is more to it isn't there? and what are ll these other things Sanghyun knows about the Digiworld. (yeah I'm still calling it that XD)

I was gonna start kicking you about this chapter update but I forgot. But don't worry I'll be kicking you soon for the next one. I am not letting you take a million years for the next update at this point in the game :3
innocent-bystander #6
Chapter 62: The hacking was so intense...
annalulz
#7
Chapter 62: OKAY OHMYGOD WHAT JUST HAPPENED

You updated *cries tears of joy*

First of all, what? Second of all WHAT? Third of all WHAAAATTTT'????!!!

I'm glad Sanghyun could find both his sisters, but damn poor Durami, I honestly hope she can get herself a physical body, but, in the eventual case they go back into the real world, she won't be able to go back :(

And, wow, I wasn't expecting the Christmas Program/Virus to be THAT, and Mir god, he could have killed everyone o.O

Is this how Seungho ended up joining the Ringmaster? I need to check up because I'm really lost on the timeline xD (I will have to reread this again) but by this point, Joon and G.O have already been recruited by the RM? I thought maybe Durami, Sanghyun and Dara could have come up with the Carnival Games and maybe even that Durami was the RM... I still have my suspicions about her but I don't think Dara and Thunder would come up with the games, then again, I don't think Durami would purposefully torture her own brother with the games, so yeah, I'm probably pretty off with that theory... or am I?

I'm glad the Park Siblings could modify the code before Mir killed everyone, but I do have to wonder about his reaction when he sees what happened. I still want Joon and G.O back, give me back my babos TT__TT

Anywayssss, my big question right now is HOW THE HELL DID MIR SEUNGHO AND THUNDER JOINED THE RM? Who is the RM? (sorry for capsing but I'm excited haha, please don't take 1234567890 months to update again ;-;) I did like that little moment where their paths kinda sorta crossed, and ooh Thunder sort of knows who Mir is. Oh wait, this is bad, this is bad bad bad. What if Thunder feels some sort of resentment towards Mir for coding the Xmas program and almost killing his sisters? asjdghasjjasdalsd
annalulz
#8
Chapter 61: okay, omg, I'm dead. Finally a bit of Thunder xD

this part "His body reacted as it
should in times of stress, his
brain sending signals to produce
norepinephrine and cortisol. His
heart rate increased, his
breathing quickened. His eyes
dilated and he could feel his
skin flush" made me feel like I was watching Criminal Minds, or Sherlock haha.

I imagined that the story of the real world would be like that, te pollution and all, but wow, Sanghyun's backstory is so heartbreaking. Are they clones or the product of female and male DNA? (I might be asking too indepth questions for your unplotted backstory sorry xP) but wow, Mir and Doong are sort of crossing paths. And, was that the RM meeting Mir?

The Cryocells remind me if the recuperation chambers in DBZ xD.

And that bit about Dara, that does give hope for Joon and G.O I think. When you told me there were deaths I thought it would be obe of the boys. I guess Dara's death is going to be Sanghyun's bigest motivator, but he only has 24 days, so I guess the games have to happen before those days are over, unless there's no hope for her?

There was something about the timeline of how they were recruited by the RM but I forgot the thought while watching Friends ;-;

I hope you can give us a faster update, gah the MBLAQ tag is dead *cries*