19:52 – A Countdown to First Death [04:08am]

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Chapter 19: 19:52 – A Countdown to First Death [04:08am] 

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“NO!” screamed Ji-su as she struggled in the white-haired enforcer’s iron held grip. “Please! Don’t! He’s my only brother!”

 “Be quiet Enforcer Lee and stop struggling!” the older enforced huffed. Old age was indeed showing its signs. “Cease your tantrum!”

“I am not a child wailing over meaningless matters!” Ji-su snapped. “This is my little brother’s life we are talking about!”

“The judgment has been made!”

“What?!” she twisted and stared at the enforcer. “But the court-“

“The word of the government is absolute.”

“No!” she shook her head with disbelief. “The investigation isn’t complete. The evidence against him isn’t absolute. Byunghee hasn’t-“

“BE QUIET ENFORCER!” The white-haired enforcer had clearly lost his impatience alongside his ability to restrain Ji-su.  

“But-“ she wriggled out of his grip. “Changsun!” she reached out for him and Changsun for her.

And then what happened next tore his heart in two.

One moment there was his sister straining to touch him, her soft eyes fixated on his face and a firm line of determination clear in her expression. She was going to rescue him no matter what. Even if it took breaking him out of jail, defying the law and who knows what other illegal means.

Then in the next second, there was a ZAP and the crackle of burnt skin filled the air. His sister mouthed his name, then her eyes rolled back and she collapsed on the floor.

“NOONA!” Changsun screamed louder than he thought was ever possible. “NOONA!”

“Oh shut up,” the white haired officer panted. He held a taser in one hand, right behind where his sister had stood just seconds ago.

“What are you doing?!” Changsun yelled as the officer pulled out a black handheld box, his fists gripping the bars so tightly the skin pulled taut and white.

“Calling for backup,” the man glared at him being pressing a button. “Requesting backup in cell 42. Now. Hurry. There is no danger. I just need men to remove a…liability…”

Liability? Changsun’s eyes grew wide.

“What are you going to do to my noona?!” he banged his fists uselessly against the steel bars.

The officer wiped his brow. “She has been one of the best I have seen in years, but she has always been too strong-minded.” The officer shook his head sadly, as if Ji-su had achieved a low grade and he would have to put her in for detention rather than she disobeying him and the current results playing out.  

“What are you going to do?” It came out a hollow whisper. A demand. A plead.

Two men stormed in. “Sir!” they saluted.

“Good,” the officer bent to pick up his fallen hat. “Remove the liability.”

Both men bent and hooked an arm under Ji-su’s limp ones.

“WHAT ARE YOU GOING TO DO TO MY SISTER?!” Changsun yelled – a lion’s roar when his family was threatened. The two enforcers jumped with shock.

The white haired officer however just sighed. “When enforcers enroll, they go through two years of hard training and one year as a shadow assistant. Then they can finally begin working.”

Changsun thought he would go mad having to listen to a stupid old man’s rambles.

“Your sister did very well in climbing the ranks so quickly. In just one year,” the old man shook his head with wonder. “But boy,” he looked at Joon, “Do you know what we do to enforcers who disobey us?”

Changsun stared at him, dry mouth and dry throat. “What?” he whispered hoarsely.

“We can’t have them spilling our secrets. Nor can we have them escaping and possibly being a force that might oppose us someday.”

“What. Do. You. Do.” Changsun’s eyes were wide with the fear, his words curt with panic. He knew the answer already, but it wasn’t real till verbalized by an outside party.

The white haired officer gave him a pitying look. “We cull them.”

“NOOOOOOOO!!!!” Changsun yelled, his hands rattling the bars. He didn’t care that they were made out of ten tons of steel or that they were reinforced with iron. He didn’t care there was a firewall behind them preventing them being hacked or that if he didn’t watch it, there was nerve gas in the cell which at a button’s press would knock him out. His sister was being hoisted away, to her certain death, and it was because she had tried to save him from a crime he had not committed.

“NOONA! NOONA!” he screamed, not caring of how shrill it came out or how twisted his face was with desperation. “WAKE UP!”

The two enforcers trembled at the wave of emotion but continued to drag Ji-su’s limp body out of the room. The white haired tipped his hat to Changsun and followed suit.

“Goodbye Lee Changsun,” he said solemnly. “We probably won’t meet again.” And then the door shut behind him.  

Changsun let out an inhuman cry, so raw and animalistic that the three enforcers who heard it on the other side of the door shuddered and made the sign against the devil. There was something primitive about it, so soul-shattering that they couldn’t help but believe in black magic despite the fact many people scoffed its existence.

“Hurry up,” the white haired officer muttered. He didn’t want to hear the screams anymore. Even the officer monitoring Changsun via CCTV turned off the sound and tried to forget that painful cry which resounded even minutes after he muted it. He locked the doors, double checked the barriers and then plunged the room into darkness.

It wasn’t till two hours later when a hat, an officer’s badge with the words Rank IV printed on it, a certificate of death and a lock of soft black hair was delivered to Changsun’s cell did Changsun finally stop screaming and began crying instead, the hat curled to his chest and those incriminating words “Officer Lee Ji-su, as of 04:24 on the 25th of January 20xx, has been culled for disobeying orders”  printed in unmistakable black visible even when he closed his eyes and drifted off into restless sleep.

***

“Lee Changsun,” his name spoken in soft, clipped words. Precise like a well-educated man. Changsun opened his eyes that were glued together with tainted tears and dried sorrow. Uncurling himself hurt. He had cried himself to sleep and lay unmoving for the past five hours.

As he awoke, the pain of his sister’s death cut him anew. Tears sprung to his eyes unbidden.

“Lee Changsun,” the man repeated. Changsun searched for the source of the voice in the midst of the blackness. “Focus. You have a greater task ahead of you.”

“Who…are you?” he croaked, his throat raw from screaming and crying.

“My name is of no importance. Not in the face of what I am about to offer you.” A moment of musing. “Perhaps though, a name would help.”

Changsun blinked. Who was this man?

There was a moment of shuffling, a shadow growing closer and then a white face in the darkness. The man glanced at him and said, “How about you call me the Ringmaster.”

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annalulz
#1
I'm just rereading this again, hoping that one day you'll decide to update again *cries forever*
annalulz
#2
Chapter 65: I'm screaming omg Fia why why whyyyyy

Bye Mir you lived well. I have the feeling this isn't the last we'll see of him.... we still have the mystery of the coliseum left to puzzle the pieces together, idk why I think they're just appearing in the real world, without the government interfering with the deaths, maybe that's the path they take....

what on Earth is Sanghyun doing??? he doesn't seem completely evil but.... hmmmmm

I hope you can update after your trip, good luck and have fun ^_^
yumzibabe
#3
OMG! Another update!

I have to admit, I'm really behind on my reading but I will catch up!
School's been crazy busy so I haven't been spending much time on Aff but it's nice seeing your updates.
As busy as I am, I get super excited every time there's an update alert as well as the spoilers I'm getting from yours and annalulz's convo haha.

KEEP IT UP FIA! I'm still here and will be back SOON! :)
annalulz
#4
Chapter 64: SO YOU'RE SAYING THE WHITE SUIT JOON MET WHILE IN JAIL WAS SEUNGHO /SCREAMS

but shouldn't Joon have remembered Seungho was the white suit when he got his memories back? or is this one of those 'oops I have to go fix this later' moments?

Holy shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii-----

I knew it (again) ahahaha. I admit my wish to have Thunder be the wolf was my own biased-ness and wanting him to be bad, but I'm so happy I was right asjdashdialshd

Did he really kill Mir tho? I mean, if they all technically have bodies in the real world, Mir isn't really dead, his data is just lost somewhere right? Unless... dying in the Coliseum truly kills you, but nooooo okay, I don't want Mir dead, bring him back, omg don't let Thunder kill Seungho where is my SeungDoong ansdhadighasda I'm screaming.

Mastermind Doong is so evil TT__TT

BUT WAAAAIIIITTTTTT... why kill them all if he needs them? I mean what's the point of gathering everyone in these Games only to kill them all later? they obviously have something he needs, but wouldn't it be better to have them alive for that? Or does this has something to do with the real purpose of the Coliseum?

WHAT IS THE COLISEUM????
annalulz
#5
Chapter 63: FIA OMG WELCOME BACK I MISSED YOU I MISSED THIS FIC JESUS CHRIST I'M GONNA CRY XD

I want to give a full insight comment but I'm just flailing around from excitement and I don't know what to say. I need to tie this in in my head with the rest of the story first so I'll do that later XD

but omg can I say I KNEW IT even when you weren't sure yourself RM was Rain? I remember you telling me that but maybe I'm wrong. Anyway...

I KNEWWWWW IIIIIITTTT

and I think I was right about Doongie too *insert wolf howl here* hahahaha

but if this is going where I think this is going, the Mastermind behind everything is Sanghyun and I'm feeling his super awesome plan has back-fired on him, so the question remains who is the wolf? who is the ringmaster?

And what in the name of Loki is The Coliseum? there is more to it isn't there? and what are ll these other things Sanghyun knows about the Digiworld. (yeah I'm still calling it that XD)

I was gonna start kicking you about this chapter update but I forgot. But don't worry I'll be kicking you soon for the next one. I am not letting you take a million years for the next update at this point in the game :3
innocent-bystander #6
Chapter 62: The hacking was so intense...
annalulz
#7
Chapter 62: OKAY OHMYGOD WHAT JUST HAPPENED

You updated *cries tears of joy*

First of all, what? Second of all WHAT? Third of all WHAAAATTTT'????!!!

I'm glad Sanghyun could find both his sisters, but damn poor Durami, I honestly hope she can get herself a physical body, but, in the eventual case they go back into the real world, she won't be able to go back :(

And, wow, I wasn't expecting the Christmas Program/Virus to be THAT, and Mir god, he could have killed everyone o.O

Is this how Seungho ended up joining the Ringmaster? I need to check up because I'm really lost on the timeline xD (I will have to reread this again) but by this point, Joon and G.O have already been recruited by the RM? I thought maybe Durami, Sanghyun and Dara could have come up with the Carnival Games and maybe even that Durami was the RM... I still have my suspicions about her but I don't think Dara and Thunder would come up with the games, then again, I don't think Durami would purposefully torture her own brother with the games, so yeah, I'm probably pretty off with that theory... or am I?

I'm glad the Park Siblings could modify the code before Mir killed everyone, but I do have to wonder about his reaction when he sees what happened. I still want Joon and G.O back, give me back my babos TT__TT

Anywayssss, my big question right now is HOW THE HELL DID MIR SEUNGHO AND THUNDER JOINED THE RM? Who is the RM? (sorry for capsing but I'm excited haha, please don't take 1234567890 months to update again ;-;) I did like that little moment where their paths kinda sorta crossed, and ooh Thunder sort of knows who Mir is. Oh wait, this is bad, this is bad bad bad. What if Thunder feels some sort of resentment towards Mir for coding the Xmas program and almost killing his sisters? asjdghasjjasdalsd
annalulz
#8
Chapter 61: okay, omg, I'm dead. Finally a bit of Thunder xD

this part "His body reacted as it
should in times of stress, his
brain sending signals to produce
norepinephrine and cortisol. His
heart rate increased, his
breathing quickened. His eyes
dilated and he could feel his
skin flush" made me feel like I was watching Criminal Minds, or Sherlock haha.

I imagined that the story of the real world would be like that, te pollution and all, but wow, Sanghyun's backstory is so heartbreaking. Are they clones or the product of female and male DNA? (I might be asking too indepth questions for your unplotted backstory sorry xP) but wow, Mir and Doong are sort of crossing paths. And, was that the RM meeting Mir?

The Cryocells remind me if the recuperation chambers in DBZ xD.

And that bit about Dara, that does give hope for Joon and G.O I think. When you told me there were deaths I thought it would be obe of the boys. I guess Dara's death is going to be Sanghyun's bigest motivator, but he only has 24 days, so I guess the games have to happen before those days are over, unless there's no hope for her?

There was something about the timeline of how they were recruited by the RM but I forgot the thought while watching Friends ;-;

I hope you can give us a faster update, gah the MBLAQ tag is dead *cries*