22:39 – A Countdown to First Death [01:21am]

24 Hours

 

Chapter 9: 22:39 – A Countdown to First Death [01:21am]

Lee Joon POV

Light. Warmth. What…is this…softness?

My eyes snapped opened and I rolled to one side, pushing someone in my haste and coughed up gallons of water. Only then, spent and exhausted, did I stop feeling like I was going to die.

“What…happened?” I rasped. I winced against the bright lights and tried to make out the other four in front of me. A gentle hand against my forehead, another one patting my back and encouraging the last spurts of water out.

“You nearly drowned,” came a soft reply. Thunder. His voice was so different. He was a chameleon. When he was angry, they sparked like wildfire. When he was worried, they tampered down to a softness like a child’s blanket – warm and comforting. I wrapped them around me and tried to still my shivering body.

“Mir and Thunder saved you,” Seungho continued. “They went after you and brought you back.”

“Even then,” Thunder smiled. “We nearly lost you. You’d been under for too long. It was really Mir who saved you.”

Questions must have been clear in my eyes. I had no energy for words. I simply looked towards Mir where he crouched, his back to me. What was wrong?

G.O let out a short bark. “He’s embarrassed,” he supplied the answer.

That only made me more confused.

Thunder and Seungho was smiling as well. Now I was really curious!

“What…did you do…Mir?” I said.

I saw his back jilt, shock running through him like electricity. He slowly turned around and I saw his face, bright as beet-root.

“Mir?”

Another jump. An even darker shade of red.

He scuffed one wet boot on the floor. It squeaked and he raised his face to meet mine. Our eyes met and he jumped backwards.

“Aww come on Mir,” Thunder grinned. “You only saved him with a little CPR, nothing much,”

“Oh,” CPR. “Well thanks Mir for…”

Oh…wait…CPR…Cardiopulmonary resuscitation, often known as artificial respiration. Involves…

“YOU KISSED ME?!”

 

Mir POV

Well he didn’t have to say it like that?!

I-I-I mean it wasn’t an actual kiss! I was just trying to save him! I-I-I mean when we pulled him out, he was blue with cold and still as stone. I was exhausted, drained and felt like I could sleep a thousand years. But once the black spots had vanished and vision had been restored, the sight of his pale face made me forget everything else.

I scrambled over to where Seungho and G.O were trying to pump water out of his chest.

One, two, pump. Three, four, pump.

“He’s not responding,” came Seungho’s curt response. It was tight with worry.

“Perhaps we should try mouth-to-mouth,” G.O stopped to look at him. Seungho stopped for a moment and looked G.O in the eye. He wasn’t joking.

“I-“

“I’ll do it,” I had said, shuffling into placed before any of them could have protested. I in a deep breath and placed my lips to his. Cold to semi-warm. Dying to living.

Wake up Lee Joon.

Exhale.

Pump.

Inhale.

Lips.

Exhale.

Pump.

Wake up!

And then - a miracle! His eyes flew open and his body re-animated. He was alive.

I rolled away, relief flooding my body and turning my limbs to jelly. He was going to be okay. He was going to be-

“It was really Mir who saved you.” Thunder was speaking gently to Joon, but I detected a note of glee in his voice.

It was really Mir who saved you-

A kiss.

 I felt my face heat up, burningly hot against the cold pallor of my skin. No, no! I was just trying to help him! That’s what medics do right! It didn’t mean anything, it didn’t-

“Mir-“

Joon’s voice was hoarse. He still sounded like he housed a sea in his stomach, so rough and tumbled was the wave that blew me over as he spoke my name. This sensation…what was it?

“Mir?” he repeated and I turned against what logic dictated. Basically that I should find a hole and bury myself in it.

“Aww come on Mir,” Thunder grinned. “You only saved him with a little CPR, nothing much,”

Oooooh please Thunder, for the love of all that exists above, please just shut up right now.

“Oh,” Joon’s voice was filled with surprise. I blinked. It was surprisingly nonchalant.  Was he covering up his embarrassment as well? That kind of hurt…

“Well thanks Mir for…” he paused. Blinked. “YOU KISSED ME?!”

Oh bones. I grimaced. “It was CPR!” I protested. I felt my face betray me.

Joon’s mouth was opening and closing at almost the same frequency that he was shuddering at. “B-b-but…”

I looked down at the ground.

Thunder burst out laughing. I shot a glare at him and he grinned back. “Aww come on you two, lighten up. We’re alive!” he cheered and fell backwards so that he lay splayed on the floor. Seungho shared his grin and ruffled his damp hair. “We’re alive!”

We were. We’d survived our first trial.

I felt a tired chuckle escape my mouth. “Alive,” I shaped the words with my lips. It was a glorious feeling. “Ahaha,” laughter bubbled out and I couldn’t stop it. Didn’t want to either. We were alive.

I leaned back and my shoulder touched Joon’s. He jolted for a second, but then relaxed. He looked at me and Thunder laughing like we’d gone mad from inhaling too much water. Seungho and G.O fell to their knees and joined in with our good-natured laugh. I looked up at Joon.

He turned away from me.

I bit my lip. Was he still going to be a stranger? After our trial together? Had he not seen what we could acomplish together rather than apart?

Then I got a proper look at his face. The corners of his lips were twitching. Was he?

Joon cracked up laughing. All four of us stopped to look at him in wonderment.

“What?” he gasped, rubbing tears from his eyes.

“Y-you…laughed?! You smiled!” I said.

“And?” his eyes creased with amusement. “What did you think I was? A soldier?!”

“But…you never laughed before. You never showed signs of wanting to be friends with us!”

Joon gave me a crooked smile that stole my breath away. “I’m guarded. What can I say? But it’s not like I hate you guys. I mean…you saved me.”

I blinked.

His turned away slightly so I no longer had a direct view of his face. “T-thank you…” he mumbled.

I felt my buoyant. “What did you just say?” I had to reaffirm what I had just heard.

His back went stick-straight and he trembled slightly. Then he gripped his hands tightly and turned to face me in the eye. “I said ‘thank you’!” His movement was so sudden that unexpectedly we were but a breath away from each other’s face. We both froze in that position, eyes locked on one another.

And then Joon was scooting away. “Sorry!” he looked mortified, his face turning a lovely shade of crimson. “I just wanted to…thank you for saving me.”

I couldn’t look at him. “It’s only natural,” I replied.

That made him swing his head back to look at me. “Really?” he whispered. “For a stranger?”

I matched his gaze and told him the truth. “You never felt like a stranger.”

It was his turn to blink. Then he laughed again, that infectious shoulder-shaking laughter that made my heart soar. He grabbed me in close and whispered to my ear, “Thank you Mir, for saving me.”

“I told you hyung,” I twitched uncomfortably. “It’s what anyone would have done.”

“But it was you Mir,” he held me in tight. “So it’s you I’m thanking. Thank you. Thank you for saving me. And for thinking me worthy of saving.”

[LEVEL ONE COMPLETE] 

[PROCEEDING TO LEVEL TWO]

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[AND SO, THE COUNTDOWN TO FIRST DEATH CONTINUES...]

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annalulz
#1
I'm just rereading this again, hoping that one day you'll decide to update again *cries forever*
annalulz
#2
Chapter 65: I'm screaming omg Fia why why whyyyyy

Bye Mir you lived well. I have the feeling this isn't the last we'll see of him.... we still have the mystery of the coliseum left to puzzle the pieces together, idk why I think they're just appearing in the real world, without the government interfering with the deaths, maybe that's the path they take....

what on Earth is Sanghyun doing??? he doesn't seem completely evil but.... hmmmmm

I hope you can update after your trip, good luck and have fun ^_^
yumzibabe
#3
OMG! Another update!

I have to admit, I'm really behind on my reading but I will catch up!
School's been crazy busy so I haven't been spending much time on Aff but it's nice seeing your updates.
As busy as I am, I get super excited every time there's an update alert as well as the spoilers I'm getting from yours and annalulz's convo haha.

KEEP IT UP FIA! I'm still here and will be back SOON! :)
annalulz
#4
Chapter 64: SO YOU'RE SAYING THE WHITE SUIT JOON MET WHILE IN JAIL WAS SEUNGHO /SCREAMS

but shouldn't Joon have remembered Seungho was the white suit when he got his memories back? or is this one of those 'oops I have to go fix this later' moments?

Holy shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii-----

I knew it (again) ahahaha. I admit my wish to have Thunder be the wolf was my own biased-ness and wanting him to be bad, but I'm so happy I was right asjdashdialshd

Did he really kill Mir tho? I mean, if they all technically have bodies in the real world, Mir isn't really dead, his data is just lost somewhere right? Unless... dying in the Coliseum truly kills you, but nooooo okay, I don't want Mir dead, bring him back, omg don't let Thunder kill Seungho where is my SeungDoong ansdhadighasda I'm screaming.

Mastermind Doong is so evil TT__TT

BUT WAAAAIIIITTTTTT... why kill them all if he needs them? I mean what's the point of gathering everyone in these Games only to kill them all later? they obviously have something he needs, but wouldn't it be better to have them alive for that? Or does this has something to do with the real purpose of the Coliseum?

WHAT IS THE COLISEUM????
annalulz
#5
Chapter 63: FIA OMG WELCOME BACK I MISSED YOU I MISSED THIS FIC JESUS CHRIST I'M GONNA CRY XD

I want to give a full insight comment but I'm just flailing around from excitement and I don't know what to say. I need to tie this in in my head with the rest of the story first so I'll do that later XD

but omg can I say I KNEW IT even when you weren't sure yourself RM was Rain? I remember you telling me that but maybe I'm wrong. Anyway...

I KNEWWWWW IIIIIITTTT

and I think I was right about Doongie too *insert wolf howl here* hahahaha

but if this is going where I think this is going, the Mastermind behind everything is Sanghyun and I'm feeling his super awesome plan has back-fired on him, so the question remains who is the wolf? who is the ringmaster?

And what in the name of Loki is The Coliseum? there is more to it isn't there? and what are ll these other things Sanghyun knows about the Digiworld. (yeah I'm still calling it that XD)

I was gonna start kicking you about this chapter update but I forgot. But don't worry I'll be kicking you soon for the next one. I am not letting you take a million years for the next update at this point in the game :3
innocent-bystander #6
Chapter 62: The hacking was so intense...
annalulz
#7
Chapter 62: OKAY OHMYGOD WHAT JUST HAPPENED

You updated *cries tears of joy*

First of all, what? Second of all WHAT? Third of all WHAAAATTTT'????!!!

I'm glad Sanghyun could find both his sisters, but damn poor Durami, I honestly hope she can get herself a physical body, but, in the eventual case they go back into the real world, she won't be able to go back :(

And, wow, I wasn't expecting the Christmas Program/Virus to be THAT, and Mir god, he could have killed everyone o.O

Is this how Seungho ended up joining the Ringmaster? I need to check up because I'm really lost on the timeline xD (I will have to reread this again) but by this point, Joon and G.O have already been recruited by the RM? I thought maybe Durami, Sanghyun and Dara could have come up with the Carnival Games and maybe even that Durami was the RM... I still have my suspicions about her but I don't think Dara and Thunder would come up with the games, then again, I don't think Durami would purposefully torture her own brother with the games, so yeah, I'm probably pretty off with that theory... or am I?

I'm glad the Park Siblings could modify the code before Mir killed everyone, but I do have to wonder about his reaction when he sees what happened. I still want Joon and G.O back, give me back my babos TT__TT

Anywayssss, my big question right now is HOW THE HELL DID MIR SEUNGHO AND THUNDER JOINED THE RM? Who is the RM? (sorry for capsing but I'm excited haha, please don't take 1234567890 months to update again ;-;) I did like that little moment where their paths kinda sorta crossed, and ooh Thunder sort of knows who Mir is. Oh wait, this is bad, this is bad bad bad. What if Thunder feels some sort of resentment towards Mir for coding the Xmas program and almost killing his sisters? asjdghasjjasdalsd
annalulz
#8
Chapter 61: okay, omg, I'm dead. Finally a bit of Thunder xD

this part "His body reacted as it
should in times of stress, his
brain sending signals to produce
norepinephrine and cortisol. His
heart rate increased, his
breathing quickened. His eyes
dilated and he could feel his
skin flush" made me feel like I was watching Criminal Minds, or Sherlock haha.

I imagined that the story of the real world would be like that, te pollution and all, but wow, Sanghyun's backstory is so heartbreaking. Are they clones or the product of female and male DNA? (I might be asking too indepth questions for your unplotted backstory sorry xP) but wow, Mir and Doong are sort of crossing paths. And, was that the RM meeting Mir?

The Cryocells remind me if the recuperation chambers in DBZ xD.

And that bit about Dara, that does give hope for Joon and G.O I think. When you told me there were deaths I thought it would be obe of the boys. I guess Dara's death is going to be Sanghyun's bigest motivator, but he only has 24 days, so I guess the games have to happen before those days are over, unless there's no hope for her?

There was something about the timeline of how they were recruited by the RM but I forgot the thought while watching Friends ;-;

I hope you can give us a faster update, gah the MBLAQ tag is dead *cries*