22:32 – A Countdown to First Death [01:28am]

24 Hours

 

Chapter 10: 22:32 – A Countdown to First Death [01:28am]

Seungho POV

[WELL WELL,] came a very unpleasant crackle. [IT SEEMS YOU BOYS OUTDID MY EXPECTATIONS.]

“Oh yeah?” I spun round to face the red hologram. “And what did you expect?”

Bemused expression versus raised eyebrow.

[WHY THAT YOU’D ALL DIE ON THE FIRST LEVEL ALONE.]

Bastard. He didn’t have to be so forthright. Ever heard of a little lie and pretense?

“Hey fancy pants!” G.O snapped, drawing his attention. “I have some questions for you.”

[SPEAK]

“Are you seriously trying to kill us? Since when was that part of the plan?”

The ringmaster chuckled, a deep-throated noise that sounded like he was being choked. I wrinkled my nose with disgust. [OF COURSE. WAS THAT NOT OBVIOUS?]

“Who do you think you are?!” G.O got to his feet, his words becoming heated. “Who do you think you are to play around with lives? You’re no god!”

The ringmaster gave him a pitying look. [BUT MY BOY, I AM GOD.]

Beside me I heard Mir choke. “What?!” he exclaimed.

The ringmaster gave us all a cursory gaze. [GOD. WHAT DEFINES GOD?]

“An almighty presence. An unfathomable presence. We don’t know who he, or more aptly put, it is. But it has power greater than we can all imagine. Power that can shape and warp this world. Power to create and destroy," I answered on behalf of everyone else. 

[AND…] The ringmaster stared me down. [DOES THAT NOT DESCRIBE WHAT I CAN DO?]

Blasphemy. “No it doesn’t,” I snapped. “Sure you kidnapped the five of us, locked us in a prison and are controlling us all through machinery and so on, but that doesn’t make you God. You can’t produce things from thin air, control water or-"

I ate my words.

The ringmaster raised one hand and flourished it, like a magician showing off his deck of cards or a circus master welcoming the crowd. As he did so, the water from the trapdoor rose and twined its way through the air. Our mouth collectively fell. The ringmaster gestured, a conductor of an orchestra, and the water twirled through the air like a dragon through the sky. It formed shapes and dissolved them almost simultaneously. It wrote words and then erased them. And then the ringmaster clapped his hands together and the water crashed to the ground, mere droplets.

There was a stunned silence.

[IS THAT SATISFACTORY?] he rumbled.

 I swallowed hard. “I-impossible. What was that trick!”

[YOU STILL DO NOT BELIEVE ME?] The ringmaster shook his head like he pitied me. [WHAT MORE MUST I DO TO CONVINCE YOU? FORM MOUNTAINS?] He lifted one hand and a mound from the floor rose up, spiraling into a mountain. [CREATE LIFE?] he pointed to his mountain which shuddered and then suddenly a mole popped out, blinking against the bright lights. It let out a small squeak and buried downwards. [OR PERHAPS] he turned to us [IF I KILL ONE YOU…]

I took a hasty step backwards. 

And then something that felt like an invisible hand shot out. It wrapped its ghostly fingers around my neck, making me stumble backwards and fumble for air. It was choking me, wringing out every bit of oxygen. I gasped for breath and fell to my knees.

“ENOUGH!” a voice yelled. It sounded miles away. “You’ve proven your point. Now stop!”

The hand vanished. I gulped in air, grateful to be alive.

[ENOUGH? DO YOU ACCEPT I AM GOD?] the ringmaster leaned forwards, eyes glinting cruelly. [WELL SEUNGHO?]

I peered up, my vision blurry, towards this man who called himself god. And I could do two things. One was to accept that he was god. In his definition, he was this little world’s god. The little world that was our prison and the carnival and perhaps out deathbeds should he so wish it to be. He may not be that holy god whom people write bibles about and worship, but he was a god in his own right. However, what sort of cruel god was he?

My second option-

“You may think you are god with all your fancy magic tricks,” I swiped my mouth with the back on my hand and stood on my own two feet. “But I do not recognize you as god. And a god with no believers is just an old man with a hat full of tricks that no one wants to see!”

The red hologram came close to me so that we were eye to eye. I could hear the hiss of the air from the image projected and even though I knew he wasn’t there, what he had just shown me was enough proof that he could kill me if I got on his bad side. Sweat trickled down my brow.

The ringmaster grinned. A row of shiny white teeth as sharp as a lion's canine. 

[VERY GOOD SEUNGHO,] he leaned back and away from me. [I DID NOT PICK YOU ALL TO BE SUBSERVIANT WIMPS. I LIKE PEOPLE WHO CAN THINK FOR THEMSELVES EVEN IN THE FACE OF DANGER. EVEN IF-] and he glanced back at me. [EVEN IF YOU ARE ALL GOING TO DIE.]

“We are not going to die,” I said firmly, resolution in my words and my eyes.

[GOOD GOOD,] the ringmaster tipped his hat to me. [IT WOULD BE BORING ELSEWISE.]

I growled.

[NOW. THE GAME OF REFLECTIONS HAS BEEN COMPLETED. DEATHS: NONE. PENCANCE OF GOODWILL ACCOMPLISHED. TIME STANDS AS 01:35. YOU HAVE 22 HOURS AND 25 MINUTES REMAINING TILL ZERO.]

Wait…what did he say? Penance? Time?

“Wha-“

[PROCEEDING TO LEVEL 2]

And then the ground rumbled and shook and before we knew it, we were speeding upwards on some sort of platform, higher and higher at a speed impossibly fast. The G-force made my knees crumble and my hands splay out for support. Around me, I could see the other four mirroring my pose. Their facial expressions were one of shock and disbelief.

And then it stopped. A rocky, haltering stop. And we were five dots in the midst of utter blackness.

[WELL NOW,] the ringmaster glanced at all of us. He wouldn’t even give us a minute breather. [WELCOME TO LEVEL 2: THE GAME OF REALIZATION. GOOD LUCK AND HAVE A NICE DEATH.]

 

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annalulz
#1
I'm just rereading this again, hoping that one day you'll decide to update again *cries forever*
annalulz
#2
Chapter 65: I'm screaming omg Fia why why whyyyyy

Bye Mir you lived well. I have the feeling this isn't the last we'll see of him.... we still have the mystery of the coliseum left to puzzle the pieces together, idk why I think they're just appearing in the real world, without the government interfering with the deaths, maybe that's the path they take....

what on Earth is Sanghyun doing??? he doesn't seem completely evil but.... hmmmmm

I hope you can update after your trip, good luck and have fun ^_^
yumzibabe
#3
OMG! Another update!

I have to admit, I'm really behind on my reading but I will catch up!
School's been crazy busy so I haven't been spending much time on Aff but it's nice seeing your updates.
As busy as I am, I get super excited every time there's an update alert as well as the spoilers I'm getting from yours and annalulz's convo haha.

KEEP IT UP FIA! I'm still here and will be back SOON! :)
annalulz
#4
Chapter 64: SO YOU'RE SAYING THE WHITE SUIT JOON MET WHILE IN JAIL WAS SEUNGHO /SCREAMS

but shouldn't Joon have remembered Seungho was the white suit when he got his memories back? or is this one of those 'oops I have to go fix this later' moments?

Holy shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii-----

I knew it (again) ahahaha. I admit my wish to have Thunder be the wolf was my own biased-ness and wanting him to be bad, but I'm so happy I was right asjdashdialshd

Did he really kill Mir tho? I mean, if they all technically have bodies in the real world, Mir isn't really dead, his data is just lost somewhere right? Unless... dying in the Coliseum truly kills you, but nooooo okay, I don't want Mir dead, bring him back, omg don't let Thunder kill Seungho where is my SeungDoong ansdhadighasda I'm screaming.

Mastermind Doong is so evil TT__TT

BUT WAAAAIIIITTTTTT... why kill them all if he needs them? I mean what's the point of gathering everyone in these Games only to kill them all later? they obviously have something he needs, but wouldn't it be better to have them alive for that? Or does this has something to do with the real purpose of the Coliseum?

WHAT IS THE COLISEUM????
annalulz
#5
Chapter 63: FIA OMG WELCOME BACK I MISSED YOU I MISSED THIS FIC JESUS CHRIST I'M GONNA CRY XD

I want to give a full insight comment but I'm just flailing around from excitement and I don't know what to say. I need to tie this in in my head with the rest of the story first so I'll do that later XD

but omg can I say I KNEW IT even when you weren't sure yourself RM was Rain? I remember you telling me that but maybe I'm wrong. Anyway...

I KNEWWWWW IIIIIITTTT

and I think I was right about Doongie too *insert wolf howl here* hahahaha

but if this is going where I think this is going, the Mastermind behind everything is Sanghyun and I'm feeling his super awesome plan has back-fired on him, so the question remains who is the wolf? who is the ringmaster?

And what in the name of Loki is The Coliseum? there is more to it isn't there? and what are ll these other things Sanghyun knows about the Digiworld. (yeah I'm still calling it that XD)

I was gonna start kicking you about this chapter update but I forgot. But don't worry I'll be kicking you soon for the next one. I am not letting you take a million years for the next update at this point in the game :3
innocent-bystander #6
Chapter 62: The hacking was so intense...
annalulz
#7
Chapter 62: OKAY OHMYGOD WHAT JUST HAPPENED

You updated *cries tears of joy*

First of all, what? Second of all WHAT? Third of all WHAAAATTTT'????!!!

I'm glad Sanghyun could find both his sisters, but damn poor Durami, I honestly hope she can get herself a physical body, but, in the eventual case they go back into the real world, she won't be able to go back :(

And, wow, I wasn't expecting the Christmas Program/Virus to be THAT, and Mir god, he could have killed everyone o.O

Is this how Seungho ended up joining the Ringmaster? I need to check up because I'm really lost on the timeline xD (I will have to reread this again) but by this point, Joon and G.O have already been recruited by the RM? I thought maybe Durami, Sanghyun and Dara could have come up with the Carnival Games and maybe even that Durami was the RM... I still have my suspicions about her but I don't think Dara and Thunder would come up with the games, then again, I don't think Durami would purposefully torture her own brother with the games, so yeah, I'm probably pretty off with that theory... or am I?

I'm glad the Park Siblings could modify the code before Mir killed everyone, but I do have to wonder about his reaction when he sees what happened. I still want Joon and G.O back, give me back my babos TT__TT

Anywayssss, my big question right now is HOW THE HELL DID MIR SEUNGHO AND THUNDER JOINED THE RM? Who is the RM? (sorry for capsing but I'm excited haha, please don't take 1234567890 months to update again ;-;) I did like that little moment where their paths kinda sorta crossed, and ooh Thunder sort of knows who Mir is. Oh wait, this is bad, this is bad bad bad. What if Thunder feels some sort of resentment towards Mir for coding the Xmas program and almost killing his sisters? asjdghasjjasdalsd
annalulz
#8
Chapter 61: okay, omg, I'm dead. Finally a bit of Thunder xD

this part "His body reacted as it
should in times of stress, his
brain sending signals to produce
norepinephrine and cortisol. His
heart rate increased, his
breathing quickened. His eyes
dilated and he could feel his
skin flush" made me feel like I was watching Criminal Minds, or Sherlock haha.

I imagined that the story of the real world would be like that, te pollution and all, but wow, Sanghyun's backstory is so heartbreaking. Are they clones or the product of female and male DNA? (I might be asking too indepth questions for your unplotted backstory sorry xP) but wow, Mir and Doong are sort of crossing paths. And, was that the RM meeting Mir?

The Cryocells remind me if the recuperation chambers in DBZ xD.

And that bit about Dara, that does give hope for Joon and G.O I think. When you told me there were deaths I thought it would be obe of the boys. I guess Dara's death is going to be Sanghyun's bigest motivator, but he only has 24 days, so I guess the games have to happen before those days are over, unless there's no hope for her?

There was something about the timeline of how they were recruited by the RM but I forgot the thought while watching Friends ;-;

I hope you can give us a faster update, gah the MBLAQ tag is dead *cries*