Perfect To Me

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SONG: ing Perfect - Pink
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kkshHySfRD8

name: Rachel Porter (age 19)
my bias: Lee Sungmin (Age 25)

setting: His Car/ His House

plot/just short..: Rachel doesn't have a good home life. Infact life is just not good in general and she has been fighting depression for two years and a bad self image her whole life. Her best friend Sunny and her parents encourage her to stay with them as long as she wants. (The three of her love her a lot) But Sunny's older brother Sungmin doesn't live at home and comes over from time to time. He has friendly relationship with Rachel. One night while Rachel is asleep he kidnapps her and puts her in his car. (Front Seat.)
And he drives around and talks to her (basically saying what the song does expecually the chorus.)

Tittle: Perfect To Me

Type of Story: Romance/Drama/Sad  

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Song for story: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cSDZCK3PKKw 

Rachel's POV~

"Good morning Rachel. Come on let's rise and shine, look how great the weather is." Sunny's mother says opening the curtain windows letting the sunshine come into my room. I rub my eyes and look outside. Kids are playing outside my neighborhood, couples are walking together, and the weather is bright and sunny. I should be happy right? Wrong. I've been depressed for what was it, 2 years now? I have a bad image surrounding me of how dull and boring I can be when I honestly don't even know how it started. Everyone mistreats me and I'm forced to always second guess myself.

"What's so great about today? It seems just like any other day." I say in a monotone voice. My door bursts open and my best friend Sunny comes in jumping onto my bed.

"What's great about today is that my big bro is coming home to visit." She seems so hyper and I can't help but give her a slight smile. Her big brother doesn't bother to visit her much, just from time to time.

"Hey kiddo you awake?" Sunny's father asks walking by my room. They've all ben so kind to me. They always mention the same thing over and over; I can stay with them as long as I want. yet, I feel like I'm always a bother.

"Hey Rachel didn't you hear me? My brother's coming over!" Sunny says shaking me to get the message across. I can feel myself getting a little warm inside. Sungmin (Sunny's older brother) is actually a friend of mine. He's not that bad of a guy actually.

Sunny's POV~

"Come on Rachel! How long are you gonna downgrade yourself?" I ask Rachel as she's sitting on the living room couch. She shrugs and looks off into the distance. I look her direction and see her staring at our drive way and can't help but grin from ear to ear. I drag her to my room and shut the door before I confront her,

"You like my big bro dontcha?" She blushes a little but says,

"Not really. I mean he's ok I guess." I roll my eyes at her and ask,

"Why are you always so sad Rachel?" She flinches and I hear her mumble,

"I feel like, I'm just telling myself I'm not good enough or even close to perfect." I grab both of her hands and tell her like any friend would,

"Just change those pesky voices inside your head ne?" She gives me her sad smirks and I hear the front door opening.

Rachel's POV~

"I'm home! Mom Dad? Sunny! Rachel!" I heard Sungmin's usual voice yelling from downstairs. Sunny grabs my hand and drags me downstairs. We turn the corridor and see Sungmin down the hall smiling at us. Sunny runs toward him and jumps into his arms,

"Oppa!~" She chants and he hugs her back.

"Hey Sunny, ok ok I get it you've missed me. Get off ne?" He says in a joking manner and he sees me beside Sunny.

"Hey Rachel how are ya?" He asks giving me his crooked grins I've always been fond of. I shrug and reply,

"Nothing special." He nods but stares at me a second longer before hugging his parents.

Sungmin's POV~

I sprawl myself on the living room sofa and see Rachel sitting beside me on the couch to my right. She simply stares at the screen with no interest and seems to be more interested with the carpet on the floor than anything else.

"Rachel?" I ask her. She looks up and I look into her eyes. they always seem so distant and sad.

It was already midnight and I couldn't fall asleep. My thoughts kept traveling back to Rachel. How she never tries or cares anymore. How my heart skips a beat for her fake, yet soft small smiles. I get out of bed and head toward her room.

I see her sleeping so peacefully and gently lift her bridal style and take her outside.

"Wh-where are we going?" She asks once I place her in the front seat next to the passenger seat.

"Just a drive. Don't worry I won't kill you." I say hoping to get a small laugh from her, yet she just sat there almost like a statue.

I start the car and pull out of the drive way.

Rachel's POV~

It was quiet in the car for a long time before I spoke up and told him,

"You made a wrong turn. It's a one way." He smirks and replies,

"We all make a wrong turn once or twice in our lives."

"I made more than that." I say. He simply sighs and asks,

"Bad decisions?" I nod and he shakes it off like nothing and tells me,

"That's alright, you just have to make sure you dig yourself out." I gave out a small smirk and replied,

"Welcome to my silly life." We didn't talk for a while until Sungmin decided to turn on his radio and Pink's "in' Perfect" came on. He gave me a small smile as if I found this song amusing and told me,

"This song kind of reminds me of you."

Sungmin's POV~

Rachel looked like she tried to listen to the song and when it was over she asked me,

"I get the chorus." I glance at her for a second before returning my eyes to the road, encouraging her to go on.

"I mean, I get when she asks if I ever feel like I'm less than perfect and how you don't feel like you're anything. Yet..." She drifts off and I complete it for her,

"You're perfect." She looks my way and I see her blushing a little and giving me a half-hearted smile.

"Yeah that." I shake my head and tell her,

"No, I meant that YOU are perfect, to me. Like the song says." She blushes even more and tucks away a strand of hair behind her ear.

"No I'm nowhere near perfect. I can find a bunch of flaws about myself." She says in a timid voice. I shake my head again and tell her,

"You're so mean when you talk about yourself. And I wanna tell you that you're wrong. I can find so many perfection about you."

For the longest of times, that was when I saw Rachel giving me her genuine full smile that sent my heart racing.

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ourhouserp #1
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PinkCookie
#2
great story
Kimjade
#3
Chapter 47: I came back and read my one shot again. It was really good. It made me get all fluttery inside thinking about Seunghyun and Jiyong blushing and being cute. ^-^
I think it was a real nice idea to do one shots for people to. I admire that you finnished them all as well. I get bored easily and if I write one shots I usually can't find the inspiratin to finnish them. Your a cool author.
Thanks again for that one shot of mine. ^-^
Yeoniie
#4
yayayayayya finally I'm done reading!!<br />
LOLLL YOUNGMINNIE YOU'RE SOOOOOOO CUTEEEE <3333<br />
I love when he kept saying to marry her in the future, and she said they could married in the moon XD<br />
and i loveeee how you make Youngmin to stand as a man,,<br />
and i'm also glad that there's nooooo harsh fighting between Joonie and Youngminnie <333<br />
<br />
I'M SOOOOOO LOVING ITTT! THANK YOU YOU'RE SOOOO GOOD!<br />
I'm soo happy and satisfied, once more, THANKS!<br />
and good luck on your other stories, HWAITING!
dora_yang_vip
#5
thank you so muchhhh!!!!<3 i loved my story~~~ youare amazing!
zenlover
#6
Oh thx so much for the one shot^^<br />
its cute xD<br />
fighting for ur next fic
--insipidlove
#7
Omg thank you so much for the one-shot!!<br />
Kikwang was so cute and omg he likes my character!! Kyaaa and BEAST is totally teasing him lol ^^<br />
seems like she practiced Secret's song after he left so that she can really be the queen of facial expressions!! Thank you soooo much!!<br />
<br />
Eun Kyung and Kevin so cute!!!! <3
Taisha #8
Wahh~~ I like it so~~~ much~ Cute, and adorable,and aww.I couldn't stop smiling the WHOLE time^^ And the story before mine, there should be a part 2!Lol^^ I like it~~Love it!Thanks so much!<br />
GOMAWO~~^Taisha <<3
Jessichu
#9
thank you so much for the 'kyusica' fic ^___^<br />
you did a really awesome job and i love how he just hugs her at the end.<br />
hehe. Its really sweet! THANKS again! <33
lazy-ssi #10
That was awesome. I almost cried myself. D:<br />
I regret writing about Seulong dying but it made the story more interesting. I loved it .<br />
Thank you a bunch.