My Annoying Suitor

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Song: Don't say you love me - Krissy and Erika
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d4sBSyqugQg

Name: Jung Eun Soo - 17

Bias: Kim Jaejoong - 17

Title: My Annoying Suitor

Story Type: Romance and Comedy

Setting: School - Home

Plot:

Eun Soo is one of just a normal average student who always gets annoyed easily at boys but then sometimes she's very close with them at the fact that she only have a father and 2 brothers at home -.-',
but then besides her life at home, at school she is actually always gets teased by Jaejoong that she likes him, because of the bothering at all the time, she then gets used to it and realizes something as days passed,
[Again! xD can you decide on the scenes? also include a scene that she dream about him and then she gets annoyed once she woke up]  

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Song for story: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d4sBSyqugQg

Eun Soo's POV~

"Come on Eun Soo, admit it." I heard Jaejoong whispering to me. I looked around but didn't see him anywhere.

"Admit what?" I ask trying to focus on his voice. He replies in a velvet tone,

"You know what. Why don't you just admit you have strong feelings for me?" I felt a steady drum in the background, or was that my heart?

"I don't know what you're talking about." He comes from behind me and wraps his arms around my waist.

"Yah get off!" I say yet my body won't push him away. He chuckles and gives me that annoying smirk I hate.

"Don't you love me?" He said. He spun me around so I was forced to face him. 

"Wh-what are you going to do?" I ask nervous. He leans in and-


BEEP!*

I almost fell out of my bed at the sound of my alarm clock.

"Aish. What's wrong with your mind lately Eun Soo?" I mumbled to myself as I put the alarm clock on snooze. I wanted to catch a few more minutes of sleep until my two twin brothers came into my room.

"Eun Soo's on my side of the war!" One yelled.

"No she's on mine!" The other one said.

"I'm on neither of your sides!" I yell as I throw a pillow at them. I miss and they exchange evil looks.

"She's against both of us!" They yell in harmony and shoot me with their Nerf guns. -.-

"Hey Hey, let's let your sister get ready for school peacefully." My father says coming into my room. Seriously, is my room the only place they can hang out at?!

"Thanks dad." I say and he gives me a fatherly smile.

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"Morning!" I say greeting my guy friends. They wave back and ask me,

"So you got a good night's rest for today?" I suddenly remember my dream and shiver at the thought.

"Talk about a nightmare." I grumble.

"So then she was like- hey watch where you're going!" Some guy says bumping into me. He stood there, probably waiting for an apology. But I instead reply,

"Why don't you open up your snake slits for eyes and watch where you're gong you bean bag!" I say and storm off.

"Ouch, didn't need to go all godzilla on that guy." My best friend Yunho (who happens to be Jaejoong's best friend as well -.-) says. I roll my eyes at him and he chuckles.

"Oh great." I mutter when I see the group of girls surrounding someone I can't stand. Yunho ruffles my hair and says,

"You know, he's not that bad of a guy." I roll my eyes at him and he heads off toward his own class.

Jaejoong's POV~

"Oppa! Are you free after school today?"

"Jaejoong-oppa! I made you a special lunch~" My fans cheer. Ah, the sweet smell of desperation with a hint of perfume. I look around and see my prey.

"Eun Soo!~" I chant and skip toward her. She automatically holds out a fist as I try to hug her. Yeah, that's gonna hurt tomorrow.

"Don't touch me." She says giving me her usual glare. My face simply stays like this : ^.^

"Ne ne, I had a dream about you. Did you have a dream about me?" I ask. She blushes and I smile.

"You did didn't you! That proves it!" I say pointing toward her blushing face.

"Proves what?" She asks annoyed.

"It proves that we are meant for each other~" I say. She pushes past me and says,

"Just go somewhere Jaejoong." Yet I follow her happily like a little puppy ^^

Eun Soo's POV~

"Aish, how did this happen again?" I ask looking into my locker. My lunch has been spilled all over my books and there was another threat note.

Stay away from Jaejoong-oppa! You've been warned >:o

Talk about lame. I look into my wallet and I sadly don't have enough money to buy the school's lunch. I hear my tummy growling. I gently pat it and say,

"I'm sorry. Can you wait till we get home?" I grumbles louder -.- Guess not.

"Eun Soo you ok?" I turn around and see Jaejoong staring at me with his usual puppy dog eyes. I sigh and say,

"Yeah I'm fine, just no lunch that's it." He brightens up as if me starving to death is a good thing. He takes a hold of my arm and leads me to the rooftop.

"Y-yah where are we going?" I ask. He smiles and says,

"You're in luck. My mom accidentally packed me two lunches. I already ate mine so you can have the other one."

Once we reached the rooftop, he sits me down on a bench and hands me a brown lunch bag. 

"Are you sure? I mean, your mom made it for you." He nods and insists. I give him a shy,

"Thanks." And start off with the sandwich. My eyes widen and I comment,

"It's really good." Jaejoong chuckles and I blush.

"What?" I ask annoyed. He wipes at a corner of my mouth and says,

"You had some mayo." I blush turn away.

Jaejoong's POV~ 

Once Eun Soo finished eating, the bell rang and we both separated for class. I caught up with Yunho and he patted me on the back.

"Hey, didn't see you at lunch today." My stomach growled and Yunho smirked.

"What, you're going on some diet or something?" I chuckled and replied,

"Nah, I just gave my one lunch to someone else."

"Ehh?! And not me?! Dude come on your cooking is awesome!" I pull him into a head lock and say,

"Arasso I'll make you lunch tomorrow."

Eun Soo's POV~

"Is Jung Eun Soo present?" A girl comes into the classroom.

"Here." I say raising my hand. Is it just me or did she glare at me?

"Mrs. Choi wants to see you." I nod and my teacher excuses me. As we walk down the hall, she makes a right turn when Mrs. Choi's class is usually on the left side of the building.

"Um, isn't her class in the left wing?" I comment. She whips around and slaps me. I lose my balance for a second and find myself on the floor.

"What the heck is wrong with you?" I yell. She steps on my skirt so I can't get up. Soon, some girls come behind her and say,

"Stay away from Jaejoong-oppa! We saw you both on the rooftop today. And to think he wasted his own lunch on you!" So these are the idiots who keep sending me threat notes.

"He didn't waste it, he had two lunches." They rolled there eyes at me.

"He's just too kind to really tell you how he gave you his own lunch! In Algebra, the teacher kept commenting on Jaejoong's growling stomach." -.- Wow, so he was that hungry?

"We just want you to back off." They said putting on a fake smile. I know I should've told them he's the one who keeps running up to me. But being my cocky self, I replied,

"Make me." Their faces turned into scowls and before I could get up, one grabbed my hair and the other one was hitting me in the gut.

"Hey what are you doing?!" I hear an almost too familiar voice.

Jaejoong's POV~

"O-oppa. It's not what it looks like." They stuttered as I saw Eun Soo leaning against the wall for support. Her uniform was dirt stricken and her lip was bleeding. I gently picked her up bridal style and glared at the group of girls.

"Stay away from her." I said and took her to the infirmary.

"Are you ok Eun Soo?" I ask looking at her swollen right cheek. She gives me a small smile and replies,

"Yup, I'm as tough as nails."

Eun Soo's POV~

The nurse wasn't there when we got there (where do the nurses go when we actually need them?! >.<) So Jaejoong cleansed some of my minor wounds and out a band aid on my elbow.

"Were they always bullying you?" He asked after an awkward moment of silence. I smirked and said,

"What's it to you?" He looks up and gives me a serious look.

"I'm not kidding. How long have they been bullying you?" I gulped down and replied,

"About a month." He gently tucks away a stray piece of hair from my face and says,

"I'm sorry I haven't noticed it before. I promise I'll protect you from now on, ne?" I blush and felt my heart skip a beat. I just noticed something, Jaejoong's always there for me. Even when I don't realize it, he's always trying to make me laugh and manages to put a smile on my face.

"Yeh." I reply. He nods and says,

"I should get to class. My teacher's probably thinking I have some weird bathroom situation since I've been gone so long." I giggle and before he leaves I call out,

"Jaejoong?" his head pops in and I give him a warm smile.

Jaejoong's POV~

"I think I owe you a lunch. So after school today do you wanna come with me to this new udon restaurant? My treat." Eun Soo said and I could've jumped through the roof at that point. But I decided to play it cool and replied,

"I'd like that." She nodded and as soon as I shut the door behind me I yelled into the halls,

"She likes me!" The school principle happened to be passing by and yanked me by my ear.

"Looks like you, Mr. Kim, want a detention?" I heard Eun Soo's laugh coming from the room.

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PinkCookie
#2
great story
Kimjade
#3
Chapter 47: I came back and read my one shot again. It was really good. It made me get all fluttery inside thinking about Seunghyun and Jiyong blushing and being cute. ^-^
I think it was a real nice idea to do one shots for people to. I admire that you finnished them all as well. I get bored easily and if I write one shots I usually can't find the inspiratin to finnish them. Your a cool author.
Thanks again for that one shot of mine. ^-^
Yeoniie
#4
yayayayayya finally I'm done reading!!<br />
LOLLL YOUNGMINNIE YOU'RE SOOOOOOO CUTEEEE <3333<br />
I love when he kept saying to marry her in the future, and she said they could married in the moon XD<br />
and i loveeee how you make Youngmin to stand as a man,,<br />
and i'm also glad that there's nooooo harsh fighting between Joonie and Youngminnie <333<br />
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I'M SOOOOOO LOVING ITTT! THANK YOU YOU'RE SOOOO GOOD!<br />
I'm soo happy and satisfied, once more, THANKS!<br />
and good luck on your other stories, HWAITING!
dora_yang_vip
#5
thank you so muchhhh!!!!<3 i loved my story~~~ youare amazing!
zenlover
#6
Oh thx so much for the one shot^^<br />
its cute xD<br />
fighting for ur next fic
--insipidlove
#7
Omg thank you so much for the one-shot!!<br />
Kikwang was so cute and omg he likes my character!! Kyaaa and BEAST is totally teasing him lol ^^<br />
seems like she practiced Secret's song after he left so that she can really be the queen of facial expressions!! Thank you soooo much!!<br />
<br />
Eun Kyung and Kevin so cute!!!! <3
Taisha #8
Wahh~~ I like it so~~~ much~ Cute, and adorable,and aww.I couldn't stop smiling the WHOLE time^^ And the story before mine, there should be a part 2!Lol^^ I like it~~Love it!Thanks so much!<br />
GOMAWO~~^Taisha <<3
Jessichu
#9
thank you so much for the 'kyusica' fic ^___^<br />
you did a really awesome job and i love how he just hugs her at the end.<br />
hehe. Its really sweet! THANKS again! <33
lazy-ssi #10
That was awesome. I almost cried myself. D:<br />
I regret writing about Seulong dying but it made the story more interesting. I loved it .<br />
Thank you a bunch.