Chapter 26: i am absolutely done with jongdae

Chapter 33: This is is cute and lovely

Chapter 31: Way to drop a bombshell Chanyeol haha

Chapter 33: Look, I absolutely love this story, like love it. BUT WHY do GAY couples, consisting of self-proclaimed(or so we assume when reading) males have children that call one mom and the other dad? It irks me. Well, you could somehow say in the case of Baekhyun that it could seem logical but take a trans man with a womb irl, he prooobably wants to be called dad, papa, father, daddy whatever the f but yeah you get me. It just seems, I just don't like it. If it was explained, like somehow mentioned that Luhan wants to be called mom for some reason then sure, but if one of the couple is called mom because he's the cute af fem thing we all love, meaning because of the ship, then i don't like that. In a fic full of fluff and unrealistic(or rare whatever) happiness then add that mummy as much as you want but in realistic fics(big situations don;t mean unrealistic, I mean about emotions), I think it's pretty bad. So like I love like 99,99999999999999999999999999% of the fic, don't be at all discouraged(and nobody hate on me please -.-) because it's awesome, I just HAD to mention this little thang. Keep it up! =)

Chapter 32: i love this fanfic so much..can you please convert this fanfic into pdf ver so that i can save it in my phone and read it whenever i want..pleaseeeeeeeee.....

Chapter 33: Cute ^^

Chapter 33: Just wow Thanks for your Great work
I loved this Story very much :)

Chapter 33: One of the best fanfics i have ever read :) Well done!! <3

Chapter 26: Dang it Chen