In Your Eyes

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Description

When two different worlds collide, anything can happen. 

But why would this world want to enter someone elses, when the sun won't even let a single ray of its light shine on it?

Unexpected things happen. Sometimes they can be bad.

And sometimes they can be your serendipity.

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In your eyes I am the greatest.

In your eyes I am flawless.

In your eyes I am Kai.

- Kim Jongin (aka. Kai)

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In your eyes I am hated.

In your eyes I am useless.

In your eyes I am just 'that girl'.

- Han Soori

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"I don't care how others see me, I only care about what I am in your eyes."

Foreword

 In this story I will name the chapters either as 'In their eyes', 'In his eyes' or 'In her eyes'. Basically telling you what kind of POV the chapter will be written in; I don't want to linger from different POVs during the chapter so I will just stick to one. 'In their eyes' will show up the least. I hope this system works but if you're not clear with it please tell me so that I can make it more understandable.


annyeong! kore-yan's back:D 

and it's a kai fic again... because he's my bias and i can;)

and i am not the best at writing descriptions but i aimed for it to be quite vague

since my main target is to reveal the characters personality throughout the chapters:)

please do not copy my work, this is my own idea and any similarities

with other stories shall be considered as a coincidence.

i can't promise that this will be an uncliche story but i will definitely try my best:)

please be patient with chapters since this school year is a busy year for me.

but nonetheless i hope you enjoy the story!

p.s don't judge my poster- i had no idea how to lay it out so it turned into a very simplistic one kkk.

and no the quote is not the title.

kore-yan
i shall update for you today, 야속!

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Keycolight #1
Chapter 5: I honestly prefer soori's pov better and in my personal opinion it would be much better if you could stick with just her pov as for me its a bit hard to get the feeling of the constant changing. Not that the plot is bad, it's good actually. I just wish you'd make us curious about kai's character from her pov so we share the same feeling as the first person without have to swapping it on the next chapter 😁
Overall, i like the plot
Keycolight #2
Chapter 2: Subscribed to this story looong time ago. Can't remember when exactly byt my guess is some time around 2015 😅
The first few chapters looks interesting and i hope i'll enjoy the rest of the chapters. It's a well-written fanfic so i'll give it a go. I dont know why didn't i just read this years ago 😅
Neonlights92
#3
Chapter 28: Aaaw, I wanted to know who it was that falsely accused her father, and what happens with Kai's family. But this ending is okay! Keep it up!
Neonlights92
#4
Chapter 26: HAHAHA I love with when a story contain period talk!
Neonlights92
#5
Chapter 23: Mothers... What kind of mother is she!!
Neonlights92
#6
Chapter 19: Who are you Baekhyun..?
Neonlights92
#7
Chapter 14: I'm so glad he's accepting his feeling for her!
Neonlights92
#8
Chapter 10: Poor girl.... My heart breaks for her
Neonlights92
#9
Chapter 7: I wish she would fight back...
hataesun
#10
Chapter 28: Too cute uwaah