In Their Eyes | 14

In Your Eyes
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"Did you see her?"

"I did. I can conrfirm that what you said was true."

"How is she?"

"She's living alone."

"Keep a close eye on her. Thank you, Baekhyun."

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 "Thank you," the lady donning a beige trench coat, pulled off a smile as she bid goodbye to the server of her hot chocolate. She headed to the exit and pulled out her phone, texting the person she had been dying to see for so long. 

Hey, I'm in town meet me at my favourite mall! Bring the yoda along!

She had just pressed the send button when suddenly the feeling of someone hitting against her shoulder scared her, and the next thing she knew, her hot chocolate was spillt all over a girl, who was neither angry or happy about the situation.

"I am so sorry, I swear... i-it was that man who bumped into-"

"Don't worry about it." A small voice escaped from the other girl, who looked too pretty to be dressed in a white oversized shirt (that was now tinted with the smell and colour of hot chocolate) and simple skinny jeans. 

"Here, here have my coat, cover yourself!" The other female barely had the chance to stop her because she had already found herself in the luxurious coat. 

"I can't possibly let you freeze-"

"Silly! I'm buying younew stuff, I mean I ruined that shirt of yours! C'mon, follow me to my car!" Her voice sounding guilty over ruining a piece of rag. But nevertheless, the lost girl just followed the older one, not wanting to be rude. Inside the car, which was much more spacious in the inside than how it had looked on the outside, the young girl kept silent, while the older one would glance from time to time. 

When she had finally had enough of the sound of breathing, the driver turned to the passenger and smiled. "I'm Yura."

"My name is Soori."

"You know it's weird, for someone called Soori, you don't talk much..."

De ja vu much? 

Small talks and a few giggles were shared in the car ride and before the two knew it, they had arrived at their destination. And the first thing Yura did was grab hold of the younger's hand and dragged her over to shops that she had never planned on entering her whole life. And it seemed that the workers seemed to think like her because as Yura entered, they had welcomed her warmly, but once their eyes moved on to her figure, she could easily see the questioning look on their faces.

"This place is Tommy Hilfiger, it's my favourite and it's so affordable!" Yura beamed and left her all alone to look for things herself, while she was stood in the middle of the shop, feeling the judgeful eyes of the employees. A few more seconds and she couldn't handle it anymore so she wandered around sneaking a look at the clothing that were new to her eyes. A certain sweatshirt caught her eyes and she dared to look at the price tag.

₩209,255. Affordable my .

"You want it?" Soori, turned to find Yura smiling with a red dress hanging down one of her arms. She simply s

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Keycolight #1
Chapter 5: I honestly prefer soori's pov better and in my personal opinion it would be much better if you could stick with just her pov as for me its a bit hard to get the feeling of the constant changing. Not that the plot is bad, it's good actually. I just wish you'd make us curious about kai's character from her pov so we share the same feeling as the first person without have to swapping it on the next chapter 😁
Overall, i like the plot
Keycolight #2
Chapter 2: Subscribed to this story looong time ago. Can't remember when exactly byt my guess is some time around 2015 😅
The first few chapters looks interesting and i hope i'll enjoy the rest of the chapters. It's a well-written fanfic so i'll give it a go. I dont know why didn't i just read this years ago 😅
Neonlights92
#3
Chapter 28: Aaaw, I wanted to know who it was that falsely accused her father, and what happens with Kai's family. But this ending is okay! Keep it up!
Neonlights92
#4
Chapter 26: HAHAHA I love with when a story contain period talk!
Neonlights92
#5
Chapter 23: Mothers... What kind of mother is she!!
Neonlights92
#6
Chapter 19: Who are you Baekhyun..?
Neonlights92
#7
Chapter 14: I'm so glad he's accepting his feeling for her!
Neonlights92
#8
Chapter 10: Poor girl.... My heart breaks for her
Neonlights92
#9
Chapter 7: I wish she would fight back...
hataesun
#10
Chapter 28: Too cute uwaah