Ch. 28

The Exchange Student

cont.

"THE RIDE IS STARTING IN 3. 2. 1." I closed my eyes and gripped Taemin's hand, and we were off. 

It started off mildly, with a few twists and turns, and then came up to a huge drop. The coaster trudged slowly up the ride and then slowly reached the top....only to fall instantly down the steep drop. I screamed loudly and heard Taemin next to me screaming as well.

The adrenaline shot through me and as the roller coaster continued I kept my eyes closed and I held the metal bar tightly.

Finally the ride slowed down. I could hear myself breathing loudly as we stopped.

"Hey..you can let go of me now." Taemin said.

I opened my eyes and looked down. I was gripping Taemin's hand still. I let go, leaving an imprint of my hand on his skin. I blushed and he smiled and laughed. "Sorry" I said, turning away.

"Did you enjoy it?" he asked, helping me off the ride.

I glared at him. "That was so scary!" I said.

He giggled and said, "I was scared too. But you were holding on so tight I thought I'd be okay."
I blushed again and he took the moment to plant a kiss on my cheek, holding my face and then letting go quickly. I blushed more and he laughed, "You're so cute!"

After awhile, Taemin noticed a Haunted House. I shook my head. "No. NOOOO TAEMIN YOU ALREADY MADE ME GO ON THE ROLLERCOASTER!"

It was no use. He pulled me into the line for that too. As mad as I was, I was looking forward to him "protecting" me from anything scary in there.

We entered the haunted house. A voice came on. "Please stay on the red path. Nothing in here will actually harm you, please stay on the path and refrain from touching or hurting anything that comes in the house. Thank you."

Soon Taemin nudged me forward, walking behind me with his hands on my shoulders. We walked slowly down the eerie hallway, it was narrow and dark with few lights that flickered on and off.

"Taemin..let's leave please" I said, scared to death.

He moved his hands to my waist and hugged me, then took my hand and said "I'll go first then"

We walked forward and suddenly a light flickered and all you could see for the second it was on was a large clown face. I screamed and turned around, finding myself hitting Taemin's chest. He held me tight and we kept moving, and he didn't let go of my hands.

Soon we came to a door. Taemin opened it slowly and we entered what looked like a jail cell. There was a dummy sitting in the corner with "blood" stained on its face and clothes. It looked really realistic. It scared me and I jumped. I turned to the side to see a woman with a table saw. She turned it on and cut an "arm" with it, and soon I felt droplets of liquid hit me as if blood was splattering as she cut.

I turned away and suddenly the dummy got up and moved toward me. It was alive?! I screamed, then remembered they couldn't do anything to hurt you. I covered my mouth and kept walking, holding tighter to Taemin. Then, I felt his hand let go of me. And immediately the lights went dark. Everyone screamed and I didn't know where to go.

"Taemin!" I screamed. No answer.

"TAEMIN!"

Soon a voice went on the intercom. "We're sorry, we're experiencing technical difficulties...the lights will be on shortly." Was this part of the house? Or was it real? And where was Taemin!

 

ok y chapter again. forgivee meee

 

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Illynay_SEB
#1
Chapter 29: Hi author-nim! I'm just happened to find your story now.. sorry.. if you don't mind, may I ask what is the girl's name in this story?
shineegirl18 #2
Chapter 32: Hi author-nim. I am a new reader and guess what, i just read your fanfic in just one day. I really love the story. I really imagined that it is Taemin and me XD. Well you earn one subscriber. And please made sequel for it. I want just want to know our future XD. Thanks fo making my day! =) fighting!
Issdnn
#3
Chapter 30: Author-nim~ I love you story very much<3 it's sweet, cute, and I really like every chapter! Oh, wait, I'm gonna read the sequel~ heheheee~~
Ninjachick #4
Chapter 30: Sequel sequel sequel I need to know what happens now!!!!
asianhiphopdancer #5
Chapter 30: Oh my gosh *claps multiple times so fast like a retard with tears of joy in her eyes* that was a beautiful story!! And the ending... Freakin..im crying at 6:23 in the morning bro! (yes, i stayed up reading your fanfic. Well i read others too but.. You know..) i know im probs a late reader, but YES PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL! You re one awesome author! Can we be friends? Haha xD im guessing youre a shawol like i am? ^^"
asianhiphopdancer #6
Chapter 28: Oh my god suspense!HAHA! I love this author-nim!!!
asianhiphopdancer #7
Chapter 21: Hey yo! Man im sorry for the spam ^^"
Haha. But anyways, before i commented I was half scared for them, and half "fangirling" i guess i should say cause she was scared and taemin is freakin protecting her in a way that makes it so damn cute!!! Haha this story is too good x)
asianhiphopdancer #8
Chapter 15: Hey yo! I'm sorry to be spamming you, but i just need to vent...
NOOOOOOOO!!!!!! That son of a biatch! What a ty ! Ew! Gross! Im gonna vomit! Argh! How could she do that?? Aww i feel so sorry for the main girl now x( aish that ginny....><
(wow what an over reaction i had haha ^^
asianhiphopdancer #9
Chapter 13: No! How dare that demon do that to be paired with taemin???!!! Aish what a biatch ><" (excuse my language i normally dont swear.)
asianhiphopdancer #10
Chapter 10: Hey yo wassup?brand new reader here! I was searching for a story that had the tags i wanted, and yours was the first on the list. So far its awesome and cute!! I love the cliché bit when he catches her when she falls :3 Haha! I'll continue reading now ^^