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It's Yours {graphic reviews
by jinjinjin

for bobateamonster

+first impression; 16'20

when i first looked at your poster, i was totally bothered about the 'vogue girl' part at the bottom left of the poster.i think you should've picked another photo of infinite. i also realized the poster's too dark. but then again, it's angst-themed, isn't it? the poster is a little too low quality as well.
+color usage ( remember it depends on the theme ); 15'15
the color you chose for this angst themed poster is perfect! good job on that.
+picture usage; 11'15
once again, i think you should change infinite's photo. without any marks this time, please. other than that, i feel like they're a litte low quality. i hope you can try sharpening it a bit.
+typography; 19'25
i was hoping you could choose another font. the font suited the poster a bit, but i'd prefer if you'd choose another one. and the credits... you should've made them smaller and a little invicible. remember, people aim for the your poster's look, not the credits. remember that. and using the same font doesn't really work.
+attractivity; 21'25
despite it being low quality, i think it really suits the theme.

+overall; 82'100


jinjinjin says:
i really think you can improve. i know you can do this. fighting! i hope to see you next time with more potential and power.
 

 

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unknownUserwhat
#1
username: unknownUserwhat
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/RA794fC.png
theme: romance
password: itismine
jreboron
#2
username: jreboron

graphic link: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/stepsister_zps04b1e218.jpg

background: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/background01_zps1f0b3e1c.jpg

theme: Angst

password: itismine
kariwinn
#3
Username: kariwinn
graphic link: http://kariwinn.deviantart.com/art/Trouble-371344645
theme: romantic, cute
password: itismine

I've only been doing graphics for around a month, so I hope that you'll help me improve. Thanks!! ^^
LinhGerly
#4
username: LinhGerly
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/3rgtBBu.png
theme: romantic, light fantasy
password: itismine
fationist
#5
Chapter 45: THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW! *o*
I see what you mean when you said the picture(yes it's Yuri) is too big and the text is too big ><
well I put angst and romance because that's what the story is about >< But I guess that means the poster doesn't quite fit with the story. hmm.. maybe i'll replace on of the Yuris with the male character! owo anyway thank you for the review and sorry for commenting late x_x <33
khlozzer
#6
Chapter 46: Thank you for the review! <3
lol brown.
I'm kinda low on color usage otl.
Thank you again!
star_x #7
I want to send in a request too but i think i will wait for you to complete the requests first. Hwaiting! ^^
proximaC #8
Thank you so much for your time to write the review. Appreciate it very much, darling. ^^