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It's Yours {graphic reviews
by jinjinjin

for vincentia_alvina

+first impression; 15'20

okay, the first thing i noticed were the colors. i wouldn't want to mix violet and green, sorry. i don't like the colors and pictures mixed like that. and the font for the names were a little... not readable? the first time i saw 'btob' i thought it was btol.
+color usage ( remember it depends on the theme ); 12'15
the violet mixing of the pictures isn't much eye-catching, and the green background is a little empty and plain don't you think?
+picture usage; 12'15
once again, i wasn't much of a fan of the mixing of the pictures and violet. well, yeah, i'm just not a big fan of the pictures.
+typography; 20'25
i wasn't wow-ed with all the fonts, i'm sorry. you could check my sources, i think it would help with your posters.
+attractivity; 21'25
the poster looks good, though.

+overall; 80'100


jinjinjin says:
i hope i could help you, even if only a bit. i hope you take in my tips and i hope you can really improve. fighting!
 

 

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unknownUserwhat
#1
username: unknownUserwhat
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/RA794fC.png
theme: romance
password: itismine
jreboron
#2
username: jreboron

graphic link: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/stepsister_zps04b1e218.jpg

background: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/background01_zps1f0b3e1c.jpg

theme: Angst

password: itismine
kariwinn
#3
Username: kariwinn
graphic link: http://kariwinn.deviantart.com/art/Trouble-371344645
theme: romantic, cute
password: itismine

I've only been doing graphics for around a month, so I hope that you'll help me improve. Thanks!! ^^
LinhGerly
#4
username: LinhGerly
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/3rgtBBu.png
theme: romantic, light fantasy
password: itismine
fationist
#5
Chapter 45: THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW! *o*
I see what you mean when you said the picture(yes it's Yuri) is too big and the text is too big ><
well I put angst and romance because that's what the story is about >< But I guess that means the poster doesn't quite fit with the story. hmm.. maybe i'll replace on of the Yuris with the male character! owo anyway thank you for the review and sorry for commenting late x_x <33
khlozzer
#6
Chapter 46: Thank you for the review! <3
lol brown.
I'm kinda low on color usage otl.
Thank you again!
star_x #7
I want to send in a request too but i think i will wait for you to complete the requests first. Hwaiting! ^^
proximaC #8
Thank you so much for your time to write the review. Appreciate it very much, darling. ^^