▬it's yours❞┇summerasa

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It's Yours {graphic reviews
by jinjinjin

for summerasa

+first impression; 17'20

first of first, i really thought the rainbow colored flowers you used don't really suit the poster. other than that, the poster really looked angelic. good job on that.
+color usage ( remember it depends on the theme ); 12'15
once again, the rainbow colored texture. i really think you should just stick to one color though. or just pick a color that suits the main color. the main color is white, right?
+picture usage; 12'15
their pictures weren't really high quality... not the best choice out there. i think luhan's pic was really low quality. but then again, their pictures suited the poster, but the quality is just the problem. the blending is a little so-so as well, but i guess it's okay.
+typography; 22'25
good job on the font! the font for the credits though....  i'm not really a fan of those kind of fonts, sorry. i think you should have just made it a little smaller and change the font.
+attractivity; 21'25
this poster is pretty overall.

+overall; 84'100


jinjinjin says:
i hope you take in my tips. i will look forward to you in the future. fighting!
 

 

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unknownUserwhat
#1
username: unknownUserwhat
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/RA794fC.png
theme: romance
password: itismine
jreboron
#2
username: jreboron

graphic link: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/stepsister_zps04b1e218.jpg

background: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/background01_zps1f0b3e1c.jpg

theme: Angst

password: itismine
kariwinn
#3
Username: kariwinn
graphic link: http://kariwinn.deviantart.com/art/Trouble-371344645
theme: romantic, cute
password: itismine

I've only been doing graphics for around a month, so I hope that you'll help me improve. Thanks!! ^^
LinhGerly
#4
username: LinhGerly
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/3rgtBBu.png
theme: romantic, light fantasy
password: itismine
fationist
#5
Chapter 45: THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW! *o*
I see what you mean when you said the picture(yes it's Yuri) is too big and the text is too big ><
well I put angst and romance because that's what the story is about >< But I guess that means the poster doesn't quite fit with the story. hmm.. maybe i'll replace on of the Yuris with the male character! owo anyway thank you for the review and sorry for commenting late x_x <33
khlozzer
#6
Chapter 46: Thank you for the review! <3
lol brown.
I'm kinda low on color usage otl.
Thank you again!
star_x #7
I want to send in a request too but i think i will wait for you to complete the requests first. Hwaiting! ^^
proximaC #8
Thank you so much for your time to write the review. Appreciate it very much, darling. ^^