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It's Yours {graphic reviews
by jinjinjin

for gongjyuu

+first impression; 14'20

its okay but the background of the characters pictures should be of a color that goes well with each other. yellow and beidge. 
+color usage ( remember it depends on the theme ); 10'15
mm as mentioned above you should use colors that go well together. it doesn't look that good when the two backgrounds don't mix. but the theme and main color is great and there's nothing obviously wrong.
+picture usage; 12'15
great choice of the pictures but i think you should make the characters bigger so that it would take more space. It doesn't look that good when the characters are small. maybe a teensy bit bigger would be great. 
+typography; 21'25
its great. although i think you should use different fonts as its a fluff and sweet poster. it would look better with a mix of fonts!
+attractivity; 20'25
it attracts many people and i'm sure you'll improve (:

+overall; 77/100

Oh and by the way this is xhiimee reviewing this (:
xhiimee says:
hello ~~ This is xhiimee! nice job with the poster (: I know I'm not as good as other designers but i hope you'll take note of the colors! Goodluck! FIGHTING.
 

 

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unknownUserwhat
#1
username: unknownUserwhat
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/RA794fC.png
theme: romance
password: itismine
jreboron
#2
username: jreboron

graphic link: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/stepsister_zps04b1e218.jpg

background: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/background01_zps1f0b3e1c.jpg

theme: Angst

password: itismine
kariwinn
#3
Username: kariwinn
graphic link: http://kariwinn.deviantart.com/art/Trouble-371344645
theme: romantic, cute
password: itismine

I've only been doing graphics for around a month, so I hope that you'll help me improve. Thanks!! ^^
LinhGerly
#4
username: LinhGerly
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/3rgtBBu.png
theme: romantic, light fantasy
password: itismine
fationist
#5
Chapter 45: THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW! *o*
I see what you mean when you said the picture(yes it's Yuri) is too big and the text is too big ><
well I put angst and romance because that's what the story is about >< But I guess that means the poster doesn't quite fit with the story. hmm.. maybe i'll replace on of the Yuris with the male character! owo anyway thank you for the review and sorry for commenting late x_x <33
khlozzer
#6
Chapter 46: Thank you for the review! <3
lol brown.
I'm kinda low on color usage otl.
Thank you again!
star_x #7
I want to send in a request too but i think i will wait for you to complete the requests first. Hwaiting! ^^
proximaC #8
Thank you so much for your time to write the review. Appreciate it very much, darling. ^^