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It's Yours {graphic reviews
by jinjinjin

for teph95

+first impression; 17'20

hmm... first animated poster. the fonts you used, i think, are a little too sharpened. especially the credits at the bottom. i don't think it doesn't look too pretty if sharpened very sharp. well other than that, the picture you used for the four people ( big bang..? ) is rendered, am i right? it's a little too obvious, and i don't think it's a good thing. the gif you used for ( gd? ) was perfect, despite the mistakes beside it.
+color usage ( remember it depends on the theme ); 15'15
this would be an eye-candy for horror posters, excellent!
+picture usage; 13'15
once again, i will say that the picture you used for the 4 people were a little too obvious in rendering. the gif you used is pretty. no other mistakes are made, so good job!
+typography; 23'25
you sharpened them too much. they appear dissolved now, especially the credits at the bottom. the quote looked pretty though, but i can't say the others are pretty.
+attractivity; 24'25
despite the fonts, this poster is pretty.

+overall; 92'100


jinjinjin says:
i hope you take in my tips well. you're a good designer. i looked at stardivarius yesterday and i saw your works. fighting!
 

 

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unknownUserwhat
#1
username: unknownUserwhat
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/RA794fC.png
theme: romance
password: itismine
jreboron
#2
username: jreboron

graphic link: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/stepsister_zps04b1e218.jpg

background: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/background01_zps1f0b3e1c.jpg

theme: Angst

password: itismine
kariwinn
#3
Username: kariwinn
graphic link: http://kariwinn.deviantart.com/art/Trouble-371344645
theme: romantic, cute
password: itismine

I've only been doing graphics for around a month, so I hope that you'll help me improve. Thanks!! ^^
LinhGerly
#4
username: LinhGerly
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/3rgtBBu.png
theme: romantic, light fantasy
password: itismine
fationist
#5
Chapter 45: THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW! *o*
I see what you mean when you said the picture(yes it's Yuri) is too big and the text is too big ><
well I put angst and romance because that's what the story is about >< But I guess that means the poster doesn't quite fit with the story. hmm.. maybe i'll replace on of the Yuris with the male character! owo anyway thank you for the review and sorry for commenting late x_x <33
khlozzer
#6
Chapter 46: Thank you for the review! <3
lol brown.
I'm kinda low on color usage otl.
Thank you again!
star_x #7
I want to send in a request too but i think i will wait for you to complete the requests first. Hwaiting! ^^
proximaC #8
Thank you so much for your time to write the review. Appreciate it very much, darling. ^^