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It's Yours {graphic reviews
by jinjinjin

for ing

+first impression; 17'20

the thing i noticed first were the texture beside the mouth, and tao. tao was inside a mouth. weird, but it suited the poster's theme- mystery. the texture beside the mouth, to be honest, i didn't really like it that much. the other textures were excellent! where did you get them? lol and the font... the font of the capital letters, i would appreciate it more if you changed it.
+color usage ( remember it depends on the theme ); 15'15
black, grey and the mouth's color blend really well! i can say you're very good at these kind of things.
+picture usage; 14'15
tao's picture blended really well with the mouth, even though it's weird. i guess it's really mystery why he's there. the texture beside the mouth... i think the poster's better without it. besides those texture, the other textures you used below were really pretty. and the cat... it's a little mysterious as well. but i guess it's supposed to be. good!
+typography; 24'25
i can't say much about your fonts, since i don't really know what your title means. i'm not a big fan of long titles, really. i liked how you put a faint shadow on them. and the effect you used on the credits... brilliant!
+attractivity; 24'25
mystery posters are very hard to cope with... but you, you're an exception! very good!

+overall; 94'100


jinjinjin says:
the poster is very beautiful. i hope to see more of you, ing-ssi. fighting!
 

 

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unknownUserwhat
#1
username: unknownUserwhat
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/RA794fC.png
theme: romance
password: itismine
jreboron
#2
username: jreboron

graphic link: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/stepsister_zps04b1e218.jpg

background: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/background01_zps1f0b3e1c.jpg

theme: Angst

password: itismine
kariwinn
#3
Username: kariwinn
graphic link: http://kariwinn.deviantart.com/art/Trouble-371344645
theme: romantic, cute
password: itismine

I've only been doing graphics for around a month, so I hope that you'll help me improve. Thanks!! ^^
LinhGerly
#4
username: LinhGerly
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/3rgtBBu.png
theme: romantic, light fantasy
password: itismine
fationist
#5
Chapter 45: THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW! *o*
I see what you mean when you said the picture(yes it's Yuri) is too big and the text is too big ><
well I put angst and romance because that's what the story is about >< But I guess that means the poster doesn't quite fit with the story. hmm.. maybe i'll replace on of the Yuris with the male character! owo anyway thank you for the review and sorry for commenting late x_x <33
khlozzer
#6
Chapter 46: Thank you for the review! <3
lol brown.
I'm kinda low on color usage otl.
Thank you again!
star_x #7
I want to send in a request too but i think i will wait for you to complete the requests first. Hwaiting! ^^
proximaC #8
Thank you so much for your time to write the review. Appreciate it very much, darling. ^^