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It's Yours {graphic reviews
by jinjinjin and rxsberry
for fationist
+first impression; 16'20
the first time i saw this, i have to admit, the sparkling effects in the bottom were a nice touch. the girl's face is a little too big, yes? also the other picture of her. the font was you used for forming, i think, is a little too big. other than that, everything's fine.
+color usage ( remember it depends on the theme ); 14'15
the color blue, and constellations- they match. the theme, i'm thinking it should be more on the friendship side, than in the angst and romance theme. anyhow, the color blue fit the poster.
+picture usage; 13'15
once again, the photo of the girl ( or is that yuri? ) is a little too big. i think it'd be better if it was smaller, also the other picture beside her. it was nice to combine their heads though. i was thinking it'd be better to sharpen it, too. the sparkling photo in the bottom is a good picture for the poster.
+typography; 23'25
the fonts are simple, but it suited the poster well. i like how the constellations is italized, it looks simple, but pretty. i was thinking how you should pick another font for the forming because it kinda looks too big. i'm guessing you adjusted the opacity of the quote? it looks quite good.
+attractivity; 23'25
the poster is well done. other than your mistakes, i think you did a pretty good job on this.
+overall; 89'100
jinjinjin says:
you did a good job. i hope i helped you improve in some ways. thank you for requesting! fighting!
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