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It's Yours {graphic reviews
by jinjinjin

for HansolLover

+first impression; 16'20

for an angst poster, this sure doesn't look like one. i think it should be light angst instead, the first thing i noticed was the emptiness of the poster. the second i noticed was sumin's photo. it was a little low quality, but you definitely improved in typography.
+color usage ( remember it depends on the theme ); 13'15
angst posters aren't light, hon. remember that. next time i want you to match it with the theme you're going with.
+picture usage; 12'15
low quality pics again. i just hope you could choose a more high quality photo for both people. and it's a little bright in the center, why is that? the bird textures you used were a nice touch. but instead of erasing it, why don't you set it to multiply or lighten?
+typography; 19'25
you definitely improved in typography. my only problem with it is its color. why is it black? for a change, why don't you eye drop the colors of the girls and put it in the main title?
+attractivity; 20'25
even though it's a little low quality, i think this poster is worth it. you definitely improved. keep it up.

+overall; 80'100


jinjinjin says:
you improved, HansolLover-ssi. keep it up, and I hope I could help you this time. fighting!
 

 

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unknownUserwhat
#1
username: unknownUserwhat
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/RA794fC.png
theme: romance
password: itismine
jreboron
#2
username: jreboron

graphic link: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/stepsister_zps04b1e218.jpg

background: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/background01_zps1f0b3e1c.jpg

theme: Angst

password: itismine
kariwinn
#3
Username: kariwinn
graphic link: http://kariwinn.deviantart.com/art/Trouble-371344645
theme: romantic, cute
password: itismine

I've only been doing graphics for around a month, so I hope that you'll help me improve. Thanks!! ^^
LinhGerly
#4
username: LinhGerly
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/3rgtBBu.png
theme: romantic, light fantasy
password: itismine
fationist
#5
Chapter 45: THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW! *o*
I see what you mean when you said the picture(yes it's Yuri) is too big and the text is too big ><
well I put angst and romance because that's what the story is about >< But I guess that means the poster doesn't quite fit with the story. hmm.. maybe i'll replace on of the Yuris with the male character! owo anyway thank you for the review and sorry for commenting late x_x <33
khlozzer
#6
Chapter 46: Thank you for the review! <3
lol brown.
I'm kinda low on color usage otl.
Thank you again!
star_x #7
I want to send in a request too but i think i will wait for you to complete the requests first. Hwaiting! ^^
proximaC #8
Thank you so much for your time to write the review. Appreciate it very much, darling. ^^