▬it's yours❞┇khlozzer

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It's Yours {graphic reviews
by jinjinjin and rxsberry

for khlozzer

+first impression; 17'20

to be honest, when i first saw the poster, i kinda cringed at the color choice. brown? well, i guess it kinda matches with the angst theme. you blended well. bravo to you. the fonts were okay. even if simple, it's beautiful.
+color usage ( remember it depends on the theme ); 13'15
since this is angst we're talking about, i guess it matches the color. honestly i'm a little bit weirded out because it's all brown and white.
+picture usage; 12'15
tao's picture... i'm not sure about that. it looks like he's smiling, when he's not supposed to. the girl's face in the picture is kind of creepy ( lol ). well, i'm already guessing the quality of the girl's picture has a nice quality; it matches the angst theme. tao's picture, i think, is a little low quality. i suggest you sharpen both of them, they'll look more hq.
+typography; 24'25
even simple, the fonts are pretty. they matched the poster well, they complimented the photos, so good job on that. i would prefer it if it wasn't brown this time though. i honestly like how the quote is typed out, even if the font's only georgia or times new roman. you did well with the fonts. the font of the title's a bit low quality though, but i can tell the effects you put on it is pretty.
+attractivity; 23'25
even if the poster's all brown and there are some mistakes, the poster is pretty, and simple. keep up the good work.

+overall; 89'100


jinjinjin says:
sorry for the long wait. thank you for requesting nonetheless! i hope i could help you by this review. fighting!
 

 

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unknownUserwhat
#1
username: unknownUserwhat
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/RA794fC.png
theme: romance
password: itismine
jreboron
#2
username: jreboron

graphic link: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/stepsister_zps04b1e218.jpg

background: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/background01_zps1f0b3e1c.jpg

theme: Angst

password: itismine
kariwinn
#3
Username: kariwinn
graphic link: http://kariwinn.deviantart.com/art/Trouble-371344645
theme: romantic, cute
password: itismine

I've only been doing graphics for around a month, so I hope that you'll help me improve. Thanks!! ^^
LinhGerly
#4
username: LinhGerly
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/3rgtBBu.png
theme: romantic, light fantasy
password: itismine
fationist
#5
Chapter 45: THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW! *o*
I see what you mean when you said the picture(yes it's Yuri) is too big and the text is too big ><
well I put angst and romance because that's what the story is about >< But I guess that means the poster doesn't quite fit with the story. hmm.. maybe i'll replace on of the Yuris with the male character! owo anyway thank you for the review and sorry for commenting late x_x <33
khlozzer
#6
Chapter 46: Thank you for the review! <3
lol brown.
I'm kinda low on color usage otl.
Thank you again!
star_x #7
I want to send in a request too but i think i will wait for you to complete the requests first. Hwaiting! ^^
proximaC #8
Thank you so much for your time to write the review. Appreciate it very much, darling. ^^