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It's Yours {graphic reviews
by jinjinjin

for wu-xi-zhang

+first impression; 16'20

first of all, i think the poster's really empty, but the splats you put were amazing. there isn't anything majorly wrong.
+color usage ( remember it depends on the theme ); 13'15
i know this is angst-themed, and white is good, but i think the white color is a little too much.
+picture usage; 13'15
there isn't anything wrong with the pictures, though i suggest you make kyungsoo's picture bigger so that it'll take up space in your poster. maybe it'll look a little better if you made it bigger. and no offense, but the splat you put at the top, what is it? i mean, you could've put another picture of him and make it bigger, but if it's for effect, why is it at the top? i mean, if you put it there, why don't you add more different splats around, so they could take up the space?
+typography; 22'25
i wasn't much -for the umpteenth time- wow-ed with the font of the title, and it could've had an effect. the outer glow effect, and it could've been a better font. other cursive fonts. search in dafonts.com, it's a good place for fonts.
+attractivity; 22'25
even if it's empty, i know you'll improve. i can see it, and good job on this poster.

+overall; 86'100


jinjinjin says:
i know it. you'll improve. i suggest you get a review from others, and compile the suggestions made, so that you'll get different tips. fighting!
 

 

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unknownUserwhat
#1
username: unknownUserwhat
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/RA794fC.png
theme: romance
password: itismine
jreboron
#2
username: jreboron

graphic link: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/stepsister_zps04b1e218.jpg

background: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/background01_zps1f0b3e1c.jpg

theme: Angst

password: itismine
kariwinn
#3
Username: kariwinn
graphic link: http://kariwinn.deviantart.com/art/Trouble-371344645
theme: romantic, cute
password: itismine

I've only been doing graphics for around a month, so I hope that you'll help me improve. Thanks!! ^^
LinhGerly
#4
username: LinhGerly
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/3rgtBBu.png
theme: romantic, light fantasy
password: itismine
fationist
#5
Chapter 45: THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW! *o*
I see what you mean when you said the picture(yes it's Yuri) is too big and the text is too big ><
well I put angst and romance because that's what the story is about >< But I guess that means the poster doesn't quite fit with the story. hmm.. maybe i'll replace on of the Yuris with the male character! owo anyway thank you for the review and sorry for commenting late x_x <33
khlozzer
#6
Chapter 46: Thank you for the review! <3
lol brown.
I'm kinda low on color usage otl.
Thank you again!
star_x #7
I want to send in a request too but i think i will wait for you to complete the requests first. Hwaiting! ^^
proximaC #8
Thank you so much for your time to write the review. Appreciate it very much, darling. ^^