▬it's yours❞┇Rin_MoonStar
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It's Yours {graphic reviews
by jinjinjin
for Rin_MoonStar
+first impression; 16'20
first of all i think this isn't supposed to be a poster. don't worry, what i'm going to tell you isn't a bad thing. this would be more suitable for a movie poster, honestly. the font for the title isn't much pretty, but the effect is good. the effect of the butterfly isn't much pretty to look at either.
+color usage ( remember it depends on the theme ); 13'15
the violet color isn't much of a pretty thing, i'd prefer if you changed it to another. the dark parts of the poster are good, since it makes out a mysterious feeling- which is great.
+picture usage; 13'15
the picture you used is good, since it looked like she was looking at the flower. i think it'd be better if you sharpened her, so she'd be more high quality. once again, the butterfly isn't eye-catching. and the poster seemed low quality also.
+typography; 20'25
the title's font isn't much cute or pretty looking, but i like its effect. the font you used for the quote isn't well, too. i'd appreciate it more if you changed the font to times new roman, or georgia, and widen their letter-spacing. besides it, the credit's alright.
+attractivity; 22'25
the mysterious feeling this poster gives is a bonus, great job!
+overall; 84'100
jinjinjin says:
this is more suited to be a movie poster lol pardon me. i hope you take in the tips. if you want any questions, please just comment. fighting!
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