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It's Yours {graphic reviews
by jinjinjin

for KPOPLover_kja

+first impression; 16'20

the first thing i noticed was the title. i thought it was 'her' at first, but it was 'you get her too!' after all. the second thing i noticed were the colors. they matched each other so good job! the baby pic you used was a little low quality though. and why is the baby in a box? another thing, i liked the white border you added on the sides.
+color usage ( remember it depends on the theme ); 15'15
i think what you used for this poster is cute! great job!
+picture usage; 10'15
all the pictures you used look a little low quality, don't you think? why don't you sharpen it so it'll look high quality? hmmm also the you used for the pic was a little... not suiting? isn't it better if you just add a slightly visible shadow like this poster? ( the girl in the center's shadow )
+typography; 20'25
the 'her' font is cute. i just couldn't make out the 'you got' and 'too' words beside it. at first i thought it was just design. i hope you can make them bigger so that people will notice this when they look at your poster.
+attractivity; 23'25
other than those bad points, the poster is worth it. it's cute.

+overall; 84'100


jinjinjin says:
if you have any questions about the shadows, comment below. i hope you take in my tips. fighting! 
 

 

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unknownUserwhat
#1
username: unknownUserwhat
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/RA794fC.png
theme: romance
password: itismine
jreboron
#2
username: jreboron

graphic link: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/stepsister_zps04b1e218.jpg

background: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/background01_zps1f0b3e1c.jpg

theme: Angst

password: itismine
kariwinn
#3
Username: kariwinn
graphic link: http://kariwinn.deviantart.com/art/Trouble-371344645
theme: romantic, cute
password: itismine

I've only been doing graphics for around a month, so I hope that you'll help me improve. Thanks!! ^^
LinhGerly
#4
username: LinhGerly
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/3rgtBBu.png
theme: romantic, light fantasy
password: itismine
fationist
#5
Chapter 45: THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW! *o*
I see what you mean when you said the picture(yes it's Yuri) is too big and the text is too big ><
well I put angst and romance because that's what the story is about >< But I guess that means the poster doesn't quite fit with the story. hmm.. maybe i'll replace on of the Yuris with the male character! owo anyway thank you for the review and sorry for commenting late x_x <33
khlozzer
#6
Chapter 46: Thank you for the review! <3
lol brown.
I'm kinda low on color usage otl.
Thank you again!
star_x #7
I want to send in a request too but i think i will wait for you to complete the requests first. Hwaiting! ^^
proximaC #8
Thank you so much for your time to write the review. Appreciate it very much, darling. ^^