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It's Yours {graphic reviews
by jinjinjin

for teph95

+first impression; 18'20

the fonts for the title were the first thing i noticed. they are perfect! i love it. good job on that. the second thing i noticed were the quote and the credits. it was a little too sharpened again. and i understand the outcome of the pictures are like that, since it's animation.
+color usage ( remember it depends on the theme ); 15'15
for the theme, the colors are really pretty!
+picture usage; 14'15
once again, i understand that animation makes the pictures dissolved. the paint tracks around them were a great touch, as well as the flowers and the hearts. good job on them!
+typography; 23'25
the font of the title were amazing! i like it so much. also, the colors for it, are cute. the credits are a little too sharpened again, like your previous poster, so i have no choice but to decrease the points.
+attractivity; 24'25
other than the credits, everything's perfect! good job!

+overall; 94'100


jinjinjin says:
congratulations, you got 94. i hope you improve with my tips, fighting!
 

 

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unknownUserwhat
#1
username: unknownUserwhat
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/RA794fC.png
theme: romance
password: itismine
jreboron
#2
username: jreboron

graphic link: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/stepsister_zps04b1e218.jpg

background: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/background01_zps1f0b3e1c.jpg

theme: Angst

password: itismine
kariwinn
#3
Username: kariwinn
graphic link: http://kariwinn.deviantart.com/art/Trouble-371344645
theme: romantic, cute
password: itismine

I've only been doing graphics for around a month, so I hope that you'll help me improve. Thanks!! ^^
LinhGerly
#4
username: LinhGerly
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/3rgtBBu.png
theme: romantic, light fantasy
password: itismine
fationist
#5
Chapter 45: THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW! *o*
I see what you mean when you said the picture(yes it's Yuri) is too big and the text is too big ><
well I put angst and romance because that's what the story is about >< But I guess that means the poster doesn't quite fit with the story. hmm.. maybe i'll replace on of the Yuris with the male character! owo anyway thank you for the review and sorry for commenting late x_x <33
khlozzer
#6
Chapter 46: Thank you for the review! <3
lol brown.
I'm kinda low on color usage otl.
Thank you again!
star_x #7
I want to send in a request too but i think i will wait for you to complete the requests first. Hwaiting! ^^
proximaC #8
Thank you so much for your time to write the review. Appreciate it very much, darling. ^^