▬it's yours❞┇ChristStella

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It's Yours {graphic reviews
by jinjinjin

for ChristStella

+first impression; 17'20

i was pretty much turned off with the size of your poster. other than that though, i liked how creepy the girl was. and how you put blood stains on the boy's face. another problem though, is the font. a lot of people has this mistake.
+color usage ( remember it depends on the theme ); 15'15
for a horror themed poster, this has dark colors, so good job.
+picture usage; 14'15
the poster's a little empty in my opinion, but the glass effects are jjang. the pictures you used were scary enough, so good job!
+typography; 18'25
i can say the font you used is a little... plain and not suited for the poster. the color is brown as well, i just hate the font though. and your font for the credits... it's orator std, am i right? hmm i'm just not contented with the fonts, sorry.
+attractivity; 20'25
hmm at least it suited the theme, right? good. it's most important.

+overall; 84'100


jinjinjin says:
i hope you take in my tips well. i know you can improve greatly. fighting!
 

 

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unknownUserwhat
#1
username: unknownUserwhat
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/RA794fC.png
theme: romance
password: itismine
jreboron
#2
username: jreboron

graphic link: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/stepsister_zps04b1e218.jpg

background: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/background01_zps1f0b3e1c.jpg

theme: Angst

password: itismine
kariwinn
#3
Username: kariwinn
graphic link: http://kariwinn.deviantart.com/art/Trouble-371344645
theme: romantic, cute
password: itismine

I've only been doing graphics for around a month, so I hope that you'll help me improve. Thanks!! ^^
LinhGerly
#4
username: LinhGerly
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/3rgtBBu.png
theme: romantic, light fantasy
password: itismine
fationist
#5
Chapter 45: THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW! *o*
I see what you mean when you said the picture(yes it's Yuri) is too big and the text is too big ><
well I put angst and romance because that's what the story is about >< But I guess that means the poster doesn't quite fit with the story. hmm.. maybe i'll replace on of the Yuris with the male character! owo anyway thank you for the review and sorry for commenting late x_x <33
khlozzer
#6
Chapter 46: Thank you for the review! <3
lol brown.
I'm kinda low on color usage otl.
Thank you again!
star_x #7
I want to send in a request too but i think i will wait for you to complete the requests first. Hwaiting! ^^
proximaC #8
Thank you so much for your time to write the review. Appreciate it very much, darling. ^^