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It's Yours {graphic reviews
by jinjinjin

for HansolLover

+first impression; 16'20

violet is a good color for drama. though, it didn't quite match the pictures. the fonts weren't that much eye-catching either. it was a little empty around them also, but i liked sunggyu and the girl's combined pictures.
+color usage ( remember it depends on the theme ); 15'15
drama-themed posters and violet- good!
+picture usage; 12'15
it doesn't look much good since there were some dissolved particles in their pictures, but i liked their pics. the sunggyu pic, i think it's better if you just render it rather than erasing it, so there are no more white things on his right side. other than that, i hope you can just sharpen them.
+typography; 18'25
i think i know that font you used somewhere, but i just can't put my finger to it. anyways, don't you think the font was a little simple or what? i think you should use cursive fonts instead. i recommend visiting dafont.com and searching for some cursive fonts, or go here. i hope you can put some outer glow effect also, so it would stand out.
+attractivity; 21'25
the poster looks good, nonetheless.

+overall; 82'100


jinjinjin says:
i hope you can improve well. you can always come back here to update me with your works. fighting!
 

 

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unknownUserwhat
#1
username: unknownUserwhat
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/RA794fC.png
theme: romance
password: itismine
jreboron
#2
username: jreboron

graphic link: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/stepsister_zps04b1e218.jpg

background: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/background01_zps1f0b3e1c.jpg

theme: Angst

password: itismine
kariwinn
#3
Username: kariwinn
graphic link: http://kariwinn.deviantart.com/art/Trouble-371344645
theme: romantic, cute
password: itismine

I've only been doing graphics for around a month, so I hope that you'll help me improve. Thanks!! ^^
LinhGerly
#4
username: LinhGerly
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/3rgtBBu.png
theme: romantic, light fantasy
password: itismine
fationist
#5
Chapter 45: THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW! *o*
I see what you mean when you said the picture(yes it's Yuri) is too big and the text is too big ><
well I put angst and romance because that's what the story is about >< But I guess that means the poster doesn't quite fit with the story. hmm.. maybe i'll replace on of the Yuris with the male character! owo anyway thank you for the review and sorry for commenting late x_x <33
khlozzer
#6
Chapter 46: Thank you for the review! <3
lol brown.
I'm kinda low on color usage otl.
Thank you again!
star_x #7
I want to send in a request too but i think i will wait for you to complete the requests first. Hwaiting! ^^
proximaC #8
Thank you so much for your time to write the review. Appreciate it very much, darling. ^^